Film Technology

Because this novel is just a serious urban pretentious novel, not a scientific paper? Are you writing so clearly because you have to do research? It is understandable to find faults, but if you are too wordy and insist on writing clearly, then you will only read scientific papers? Doesn't it seem like too much to come here to find fault? You can pick out and talk about basic knowledge of logic and plot, but if you want to say that writing about science and technology is too weak, then you can't write about it. If you understand everything, who will write novels? Don't pretend to be an expert? Don't you want to do high-tech yourself?

It is not unreasonable for the system to be king now. On the one hand, readers asked not to write about the system. On the other hand, they said that the level of writing about technology is not high. It is not written based on actual scientific basis and it is not written according to the paper. On the other hand, it is said that the super powers are too fake, completely untrue, and fabricated. The system perfectly solves these problems. Variations of superpower technology do not require a reason. You can use them directly. The effect is similar to that of superpower technology, or even better. It is all caused by the readers. New authors dare to try, but if they make some mistakes, they will be criticized as worthless by the comments, which will directly and devastatingly hit the author. Do you still want to read a different book like this? Daydreaming.

The creativity is good, but the writing skills are poor, and there is a childish atmosphere. The most important thing is that the author may lack common sense in life! For many things, you should read professional information. Many junk novels are made up 🤫🤫🤫. They are only suitable for fooling junior high school students and elementary school students. Even more advanced high school students cannot read them.

Chapter 1 A sophomore student has no place to play. He runs alone on the roof of an abandoned building for a few hours. What does he do for these hours? Is there a plane in the sky that he wants to shoot down? This building is still a place for couples to stay, so they don't just listen to the wall.

Please write less of those pretentious routines, it's so disgusting to watch! It would be better to write about using technology to change your own life and change the world. If you have the ability to change the world, how many girls are you struggling with all day long? If you have the ability, the best women in the world will take the initiative to sleep in your bed.

The writing is not bad, at least I can eat it, and it is better than the writing on a large block of movies at the starting point.

Although the author wants to give readers a feeling of success, and also limits the number of different spaces (this setting is particularly good, otherwise the infinite bugs are not worth seeing), but the VR game and game servers you created in the early stage are still a bit too exaggerated. Others have invested billions and tens of billions (of course it is RMB, others are just a company, of course the total amount is exaggerated). If you have intelligence, you can also ask him to analyze it. Don't be too shocking, just ordinary games, something logical and fun, take your time, complete the original accumulation, as long as you have decent company R&D personnel, and you are a genius (the previous coding video can prove it), then develop some small games that make money first, and then develop such a big game that obviously requires a lot of effort and team. Do you think such a realistic VR is worth a game? For the country, the value of his military, scientific research, film, entertainment and other aspects is more than a hundred times greater than the game, and it can easily be sold for 10 billion yuan! And you still want to promote without a partner? Is the author too naive or is it that we readers are too naive? Your starting point is the never-ending NZT and real-life games. It is very good because it is normal for a game to make hundreds of millions after it works, and it can be transferred to a technology company. But when you get started, you can experience the full VR experience. The triple jump is too fast. I think the plot before the VR server is suitable, reasonable and comfortable to watch.

The author has very little experience. He has probably never opened a company, never developed a project, and has never interacted with government departments. The department structure and rights list within the system are even unclear. Many actual life and work contents are purely imaginary, which is ridiculous~

Didn't the protagonist learn computer knowledge using n4? You can learn a language in one day with n4. With such a powerful learning ability, a computer that has been studied for a day can't keep up with the speed of college students?

It really affects the mood of reading. If you can read it or not, just in the upper right corner, the comments ruin the novel. If you really write it according to the comments, it may be a very good novel, but that is unrealistic, because there are too few great writers. Those who write system novels are either new authors or have written several other types of novels and come to write system articles to test the water. Therefore, when reading this type of novel, you have to look for a needle in a haystack that is good. Please do not comment on your personal opinions. 😄

No matter how many gadgets I give you, nzt48 can't save the protagonist's IQ.

The cover of this book is exactly the same as a book I read before (Super Fantasy Technology), but that book has completely disappeared now, Eunuch. The subject matter of the two books is also the same! ! ! I suspect it's a vest ~ readers should pay attention

I don't like the plot behind this.

The author knows nothing about technology…

Forcibly create some specious conspiracy and foreshadow it. The author listens to my advice and just write what you want to write in a neat and orderly manner. Even if the plot turns are stiff and abrupt, it is much better than forcibly creating a mysterious and unpredictable plot that is actually embarrassing. I am not sure about the fascinating plot and setting, so I will just briefly mention it. Urban science fiction, just write what you are good at and what you wanted to write when you started the book! What kind of foreshadowing, forced villains, conspiracy theories and so on. To be honest, if these are not handled well, they will be poisonous and poisonous to people.

How to put it, using an old joke: Poverty limits your imagination

I don't know why I suddenly don't like watching the type where the weak protagonist suddenly gets a golden finger to counterattack.

It's only 80,000 words. If you have the guts, you don't want a eunuch. I'll collect 500 chapters first and then I'll harvest them.