The Strongest Pirate Hunter

It's a rubbish book. It's so bloody that I can't walk when I see a beautiful woman. I'll die from poison in less than 100 chapters.

The first few chapters hit me hard. I am scared to death of a bandit. However, when the system woke up, it immediately turned into a perverted murderer and started to show off like crazy. It gave people a feeling of being a dogfight. The protagonist also said that he wanted to become the king of bounty hunters and hunt down the Pirate King. In the next chapter, he became friends with Luffy. These were nothing. When it came to the chapter about finding Zoro, I completely forgot about the dream of a bounty hunter and fought with the navy. , And we don't even know why Zoro was tied there in the original book. It was written that Zoro asked the male protagonist to untie his rope. The most ridiculous thing is not here. When the male protagonist was fighting Axeman's thing, Axeman asked his subordinates not to retreat, and he committed suicide after retreating. His men were photographed because of Axeman's usual cruelty, so he decisively raised his gun and committed suicide (huh???). This logic is really poisonous. Why are Axeman's men afraid of Axeman? Because they were afraid of death, they were told to commit suicide, but they committed suicide decisively without any hesitation. . . Simply poisonous

The author deleted my previous comment about Sharingan hair. Am I wrong? Pig's feet have magical powers, such invincible abilities. It means that the green pheasant can freeze the pig's feet at such a distance, and also freeze the space so much that it will be okay if it goes in? Look at how Obito used his divine power. He said that Aokiji was more powerful than a pig's trotter. He also said that he could freeze space when he was near a pig's trotter? Is time also frozen? If Aokiji becomes even more invincible, what about Akainu? Can the One Piece meeting be burned? Where's Whitebeard? Will the world be destroyed by blowing a breath? If they were all so powerful, the battle on the top wouldn't be like this. Akainu exploded with one punch, and everyone from the general to the general was killed. Where was Aokiji standing, everything from the general to the general was frozen, and the navy headquarters was long gone.

Another cool article. . . At the beginning, the protagonist received 1,000 chakra from Chidori. He did not say how much it would consume to restore the original chakra. He also showed off in various ways. He also did not say how much chakra it would take to release Chidori. Unlimited release would make him invincible! Not rigorous at all 😒

3000 As a gift, seeing that Chapter 88 is coming... It's not easy to recover after losing it. In addition, it can be seen that the author wants to write a book well, although his writing skills are not very good... Whoever works hard can write a book on the first day.

Why does Vivian call the protagonist "husband-in-law"? It's really unbearable to watch. It's seriously not the same style as pirates.

Another thoughtless fan

I've seen so many pirates, but you are the only one who instigated Garp's rebellion. That's awesome.

Being invincible for 10 minutes and being eaten? Recover the body instantly and become invincible for 10 minutes. Such an invincible skill was actually beaten to a pulp by three generals...,,,,,,,,, I'm also drunk. If you turn off the power for one second, you can be invincible for 10 minutes. Is this setting taken advantage of? ? ?

Aren't all pirates evil? Even for Luffy, it's terrifying to think about what he did. There are definitely a lot of civilians and marines who died indirectly at Luffy's hands.

Will you name your son Ming Yuan?

If this book was good, I would chop off my head and use it as a stool to sit on, and it would start to show its stallion character after only a few chapters. One Piece is about hot-blooded people, not stallions. Sanji is so lustful that he doesn't even see his stallions. I really don't want to step on it

Many times the plot is gross, and the ninjutsu is inexplicably found to be too powerful and cannot be beaten, and then a ninjutsu is added, without mentioning a word about system points... In the end, it is estimated that it is unbeatable, and a more powerful ninjutsu comes out, which is very pale, and hundreds of thousands of points are not used, so you run to get beaten, you are sick, right?

Author, you, the protagonist, are too open-minded, right? 😅 The biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist uses chakra casually? Also, has the enemy's strength been reduced too low? But because you don't have a harem and don't follow the boat, I still insist on reading. I suggest that if the next book is about pirates, the protagonist should be more reasonable. The enemy should not forcefully reduce his IQ or strength. If you can't write emotional scenes, try not to write them.

You are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, you are so poisonous!

I'm really lucky, Jie Jing, you have divine power, but you can't take people in. I just wanted to forcefully explain to myself that maybe the divine power can't take in living creatures and can't change the position of entering the space, but suddenly you can do everything in the war. Also, I'm almost convinced. You have learned the flying thunder magic, but you still can't make coordinates directly with your hands? You can only throw kunai to move when flying, but you could do it when you were fighting the Golden Emperor before? Why do you have to leave only kunai coordinates in Marigioa? Besides, in Naruto, doesn't Minato often habitually leave fixed coordinates with his hands? Mdzz

What's original? I don't know where it is. Even Luffy was driven away

You can see from the comments that the author is quite humming. Also, the protagonist's name is a big poison, so he slipped away. Fortunately, the starting point is Shennongduo. He said at the beginning that he would not steal the crew, but in the end, he didn't let any of them go. He also dressed as a woman and could use ninjutsu without practicing chakra. Didn't the Chidori system give it once? Where did you get chakra? You don't know the protagonist in the first chapter and you act cool? There's nothing wrong with him. He's the protagonist after all. The pirate is too weak. Mengqi · D · Shu Mengyuan. Ming Yuan. This is the big poisonous point. Monkey D. Luffy. Come on. Mengqi. Vivian will call the protagonist "Mr. Sir? Are you traveling through ancient times?" I just watched a paragraph. Here are the major poisonous points I saw -.-

Nonsense writing, confusing logical thinking

I read more than ten chapters and I really can't hold on anymore, it's so toxic

Haven't you noticed that the main character Chidori can be unleashed infinitely? He's a scumbag who is not even a ninja. He has 1,000 chakra and can unleash Chidori at will? Kakashi is not as strong as you, any anime is written with only half a bucket of water.

This protagonist is not a strong man. He just exchanges the unique skills of strong men and adds them to himself, just like a little monk chanting sutras, saying it with intention but no intention. Just like children in kindergarten can recite ancient poems, but they have no idea what the poems mean. A strong person has no own path and is always learning from others. No matter how strong he is, it is useless. For example, you, an ordinary person, have obtained all the strength of the First Hokage in Naruto. If you are fighting him himself, who will win?

The harem is good, the harem is awesome, the harem is awesome

Fuck, I said at the beginning that I wouldn't steal any crew members, but in the end I didn't let any of them go.

I am invulnerable to all poisons, I am invulnerable to all poisons

Brother, I collected it for no other reason than the first sentence of your first photo.

Not a pirate hunter? I didn't see it...

Haha, author, you must be writing about a pirate bounty hunter, why are you so murderous? What's more, except for the first bandit, everyone else just killed them without taking any money, and what they did in the prison was more like a pirate than a pirate hunter. So this book is another Laji book selling dog meat with a sheep's head on it.

They say you can persuade me to quit in one chapter, but you have persuaded me to quit in this half chapter.

I promised not to follow the group or the plot.