The Door of Truth in the Second Dimension

This is a novel ruined by pretense. I was so embarrassed when I saw the back. The steady and steady approach from before is gone, as is the detailed description. Just be reckless all the way, have fun all the way, and show off all the way until dawn. Blindly pretending, pretending forcefully, aloof manner... Virtue~ I really can't stand it. But the front is really good. I hope it will be normal next time.

We are taking advantage of the limited exemption to read your book. In fact, there are quite a few poisonous points in this book, such as the double standard at the beginning, Japanese-Chinese, the name of the chess god is not enough, and few people in the food world have seen what you have done (within 400 chapters). When it comes to food, you prefer the production, taste, and reaction after tasting it. Fighting expresses the tension of martial arts. For example, "From the time of adding oil to the hot pot, stir-frying, to taking it out of the pot and putting it on the plate, the cooking time of this fried rice is less than ten minutes! The fried rice finally appeared in the eyes of Miyoko Hojo with an emerald color. >Each grain of rice is wrapped in minced spinach stalks, turning into a lush green color. Then there are spinach leaves and green vegetables, which are emerald green. After blanching and stir-frying, the color of the vegetables is no longer dark yellow, but greener than when they were just picked. "It still looks fresh and attractive when cooked." This is from a food article, and this is from you. "Chen Anxia's cooking is still going on. At this moment, Chen Anxia seems to have returned to the kitchen full of ancient Chinese style, and seems to have seen the figure of the chef Liu Pleiades again. , And once again heard Liu Pleiades' thoughts when making this dish. "First, stir-fry the eggs quickly until they are half cooked, then add the rice, stir-fry quickly, separate the rice grains one by one, fully incorporate the eggs, and season with salt, pepper and a little light soy sauce. " "During this period, the heat must be controlled and the taste and aroma of all ingredients must be suppressed. This is the essence of flame cuisine in Chinese cuisine!!" At this point, the golden egg fried rice has been completed." There is an obvious difference in writing skills. The food article mainly focuses on the food and the feeling of eating it, while your description is only limited to a simple description of the person.

I feel that starting with a slam dunk master or a football boy is better than a tennis guy. . .

From a first glance, the writing style in the early stage is steady, the daily chapters are also very good, and the combat films are pretty good. However, the ending of the main storyline of the author's main world is too dull. It can be said that the main storyline has collapsed. The subsequent travels in various worlds are no different from other two-dimensional fans... Again, after the end of the main storyline, the proportion of the subsequent daily chapters and battles in other worlds has not been adjusted. Basically, it's all about wandering and fighting in another world, and I feel bored just watching it. Maybe I'm interested in not seeing too many two-dimensional time travels, but after watching too many of the same type, I feel that the follow-up is a bit boring and weak. The author insisted on writing more than 1,000 chapters, which is worthy of recognition, but I still hope that the author can reorganize and plan the outline. I hope the author will work hard.

Devil! Are you getting married?

I think the timeline of the article is a bit wrong. Kasumigaoka Shiu's love metronome was written in high school, and An Yirun was only a little younger than Kasumigaoka Shiu. Moreover, Hyido Michiru and An Yirun were also the same age. However, the author's book wrote that Kasumigaoka Shiu gave it to the main character Chen Anxia when he was in elementary school. I sent a message about the love metronome, so there is a slight problem with the arrangement of the timeline of this book. I am not saying that the author's writing is not good. I can see that the author is serious about writing the book, but I am just giving my opinion to the author from the perspective of a reader. I hope the author can understand it.

Some people say that the world in the early stage is too long and watery, but then the world written by the author in the later stage feels like it can be wandered in and out in a second. I am convinced, it is awesome!

I became more and more disappointed after seeing it. In the comics, Rayleigh explained that Kong Dao's inner network is the domineering power of seeing and hearing. Therefore, it is impossible for Eniro to know what An Xia is thinking, and the following chapters feel watery.

Please write in big letters about fox demons and hokage.

Congratulations! Congratulations to the author on your big engagement! Let's grow old together! What a happy marriage!

When I heard the author say that the subscription was poor, I was so scared that I bought out two monthly passes~

I hope readers can calm down and read it with gusto even though I don't read Chess Souls. The two-dimensional fanfics on Qidian are all about Naruto and Pirates. Aren't you tired of aesthetics? I feel that if Qidian's two-dimensional fanfics don't include Pirates and Naruto, they won't be popular. So I hope readers will be patient. If you want to read the quick travel story, please go to the Science Fiction Channel. Thank you. This is a fanfic. There is no certain length to write a world. Besides, if you really don't like a certain part, you can just put it on the bookshelf. The author also said that he will end the chess spirit chapter as soon as possible, which gives the author some confidence 😆

When you read the second chapter, let me tell you, author, you don't understand what faith is at all, but the setting of the novel is that faith becomes a god. Faith is different from fame, even if you are a star. A star has countless fans, but this is just false popularity, not faith. If this star does not appear on camera for a year, many people will forget about him. If he does not appear in the public eye for more than ten years, his fans will probably disappear. Even if people do not forget Michael Jackson for decades after his death, it is just that they have not forgotten him. They will not burn incense and worship him every day. You won't pray to him every day, but your beliefs are different. People who believe in Christianity can pray every day for the rest of their lives. People who believe in Buddhism can worship Buddha every day throughout their lives. In vernacular terms, faith can make countless people kneel and kowtow to your statue every day, pray for peace every time they eat, and thank you for giving them health. This happens every day for a lifetime, but can a celebrity do it? Which fan kneels and kowtows in prayer in front of photos of idol stars every day? , Who burns incense every day? No

In this book, why do you all say that the soul of chess and the king of net have no feeling? I am just the opposite of you. Regardless of whether you have watched these two anime or not, newcomers can continue to watch them. The links to the two plots are also the best. I stayed up all night to read these two plots, but I couldn't stand the rest of the anime. For me, the most classic of this novel is indeed the first two plots, Chess Soul and Net King, which are the best!

Chess Soul is very well written, haven't you noticed? Many time travel novels now have plots written too fast, lacking something like yours. If you change the style, it may lead to the disappearance of a good book.

How many people only watch the parts about Chess Soul, King of Nets, and Mianma's resurrection and then stop watching them?

To be honest, the beginning of this book was very enjoyable to read, but it started to change when the mixed world of Shokuki and Kenichi began. The protagonist's strength has always been very subtle. He can play a good hand of cards at a loss, and when he encounters a stronger one, he either loses 50-50 or cannot beat him. When he encounters the black dragon in Fairy Tail, he can lose his mind and self-destruct the Black Holy Grail, which puts the evil behind him. I learned a lot of messy abilities, and the buggy ones like Yan Ye Wuxian didn't get much training and upgrades, so I just used them to show off. I originally saw Hunter World and was wondering if the protagonist could develop stronger abilities, but it turned out to be another subtle thing. The protagonist basically abandons the original plot wherever he goes, and keeps pretending from beginning to end. He even dares to pretend to be a god in a world like Fairy Tail where the big bosses are played by gods and they can't help but want to die. In the previous world, the door of truth was even exposed to a mere Enel, and now he continues to fool around without a long memory.

No more reward points, if the author has three updates today or tomorrow, I will reward you with 10,000 points! ! ! Take the sticker as proof! ! ! I don't know if the author can see it 😏😏😏

How can we write about Japanese anime without writing about some Chinese comics? Now that Chinese comics have risen, fewer people are reading Japanese comics, so it's not interesting at all.

In Chapter 15, he died of a poisonous attack. The protagonist, an 11-year-old primary school student, was an editor for a publishing house and was doing psychological analysis in the school teacher's office. I really couldn't accept it. It was too poisonous.

By the way, why is there no free coin building? Let me fix it. The first floor is ten coins, and the one thousand floor and the ten thousand floor are over! ㄟ( ▔, ▔ )ㄏ It seems difficult to build a thousand floors 😅 It's better to change it to a hundred floors 😭

Actually, I want to say that the cover is not good-looking 😅

The power levels in the novel are confusing. The protagonist can defeat the servants in fate, but in the world of death... In the setting of fate, the power of the servants summoned during the Holy Grail period is only one-tenth of the heroic spirit itself. In Fate, the Sword of Oblivion can cause damage to the world itself, and it is an anti-world treasure. The calamity fire falls from the sky, and the wrath of Nabistin comes, which can cause harm to civilization, and is an anti-civilization Noble Phantasm. In the world of the God of Death, the highest power of the God of Death can only destroy a city or some small countries. Even if Yhwach is omniscient and omnipotent, Gilgamesh also has an omniscient and omnipotent star.

Sure enough, it's still not enough. Although it's not as good as before, but the author please be more diligent and you won't get enough! ! !

To be honest, the writing in Chess Soul and Prince of Tennis is simply not very good, but when it comes to Shokuki, it really feels like a different author. The style has been changed so much that it's hard to read it again after just reading it for a long time. It's like it's just for the sake of writing those too ordinary pretentious sentences. It's not impossible to write pretentious, but is it written well? Why should we abandon the better way of writing before? I didn't even take a break to read "The Prince of Tennis".

I don't know how long I have been chasing this book. I remember that when I wrote about Chess Soul, I started chasing it. Then I read Shokoku, and gave up after reading it halfway through. I haven't read it since. Every time I think of this book, I read it again. Every time I see Shokki, I can't stand it anymore. I have read this book three times.

Come on, tell me, Zhe Tian is a two-dimensional person?

Congratulations🎉May we grow old together!

As long as you don't read the comments, you will only feel a little embarrassed. If you read the comments, you will feel that the plot is super embarrassing... From a certain Shennong

In fact, I wanted to say before that the following code is obviously the person in my memory from the past, and the relationship is also in the memory, which can also be said to be imposed, but it always feels like it is decreed by the emperor. The protagonist has obviously never experienced life together (meaning before coming here), but he can accept this memory and relationship instantly. . .