
Major Boltan's 1-Point Line
梅杰波尔坦的1叉线
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 252k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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80Chapters
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Looks pretty good
All kinds of characters are designed with aura.
Very good, the quality is excellent among similar works
I have a small suggestion: the author can be a little more vague when writing about another world (the protagonist's previous world). For example, when writing about the aircraft in that world, you can say that the wooden carts in the Hunter World carry people in the sky, or simply people ride fire dragons to fly in the sky. That is, use things from the Hunter World to write it in a weird and inconsistent way. That world, this can make the fragments recalled by the protagonist more interesting and difficult, and also set up doubts for the protagonist, making him want to explore the reasons behind the anomaly. As for the principle, it is the result of the memories of that world being distorted or confused by the memories of this world after coming to this world (to put it simply, the law). But it's good to have clear descriptions that help explain the plot (≧ω≦)/ ps: Author, you have two sixteen chapters
The writing is good, but...
In fact, I just can't stand the names. For example, Fred and Li Anxiang have a Chinese name and a Western name. It's a little awkward to mix them together...