Ancestors from Another World

Today I am sorting out the published chapters. I originally wanted to organize and merge the early chapters in order to prepare for the release. As a result, when I first deleted some chapters, my administrator rights were blocked. Now I can only wait to be unblocked. In the afternoon, I downloaded the Writer Assistant APP and started coding on my mobile phone. But when I just wanted to publish a new chapter on my mobile phone, I discovered that publishing chapters using the app also didn't work. Now the entire work has been banned! ! I'm so sorry! Last but not least, vote to appease me! !

I found this book by accident. It's well-written and interesting. Come on, I'll recommend it to you every day from now on.

The content is too watery and the plot is too white. I suggest the author streamline the text. If the characters had to say two less sentences, the book would be complete. The plot is all a routine. If you just glance at the title of each chapter, there are more than 20 chapters. If you look at the following text, it will have no impact at all! ! ! You can probably imagine the plot! ! 😥😥😥 I was embarrassed to see it. The author should think carefully about the plot and make an outline, and don't use some old tricks. In fact, the general concept of your article is okay, but it is a bit too plain. The routine is not unusable, but your article is also too straightforward, and it should not be so watery. The screen is full of character dialogue, and there is no other description at all. That's it. After all, I haven't finished it yet, I've only read about twenty chapters.

There are too few updates! I'll give you three recommendation votes and try to update!

Try to update. Once it's released, monthly passes will be given to you!

People are going to destroy you, but they can still let you be so carefree? I'm really convinced.

It looks very dangerous. The writing is very good, and the plot is also first-rate. It is not easy to create a new book. I will collect and support it first. I will always pay attention to the excellent works. Jiangling Sanren came to visit with his humble work "Secret Techniques of Western Hunan to Break into the City". Come on, I wish you a great success.

When does it come to the introduction? The author shouldn't start from the beginning. It's better to be strong at the beginning. It's necessary to go step by step. Later, it's better to introduce it. It's better to be the ancestor at the beginning.

It's so cool to travel through time! The enemy is still out fooling around, but the result is just to test the magic weapon with a bear, leaving an audio-visual stone and evidence of crime at home. Isn't it time for the police from the cultivation world to come out to maintain notarization? In other words, the protagonist of the novel can do whatever he wants to commit suicide. If it had happened in real life, the Li family would have been over long ago and Mrs. Li would have changed her surname to Zhang. Even a group fight in the real world only lasts for more than ten minutes, and the dust settled the moment the battle broke out in the world of cultivation.

Innate treasures cannot be cultivated and are generated by the universe. Note to the author.