The Bizarre Enhancement System

If you have any suggestions, please come here to complain 😁

It feels like the protagonist is going to become Darth Vader

This novel will feel much better if you treat the people in it as anime characters. Remove some of the old style of writing. I still like the story so far. I wish the author will get better and better.

It's simply poisonous. The 66 yuan sword you started with is made of plastic. It's over 1 meter long and only weighs a little over 1 kilogram. It's still too heavy. You're kidding me. You have the constitution of a toddler. I advise you to quit. . .

The author's writing is very good. After reading your book, I fell in love with your book. It is a kind of fate. It was the author's efforts that moved me. Friends who are not good at reading can take a look. It is really, very good.

I think it's ok, how about spraying it a lot?

What are you writing? I really want to give up. Just write a bunch of nonsense.

It feels weird, but there's something I can't put into words. I feel like the author seems to be imitating the beginnings of mainstream game-based apocalyptic novels. Including a system, a mysterious background, the death of both parents, and a sense of belonging... The overall plot seems to be very routine and facial expression. Originally, this series of settings should constitute the so-called "kingly" plot, which is uncreative but not too uncomfortable for readers. However, the author's writing style is poor, and the description feels like a high school student's composition. In addition to the poor wording quality, the prepositions and sentence fragments are also very strange. It feels like the author is not very good at writing books. He is a real novice and is imitating other works. It can only be said that the level is not good enough and needs to be tempered. It is recommended not to follow these old tricks. A very poor start.

Not to the point of being poisonous, but very embarrassing, all old and mindless tricks And the details are really bad. Let me give you some examples. Chapter 9: Interpols generally do not wear uniforms when going out, and even if they do, the word "Interpol" will not be written on them. Even if some uniforms are marked "XJ", it only means assisting the police. Only the armed police will specifically mark it.

When I read Chapter 43, 6 named women appeared, and 3 of them had physical contact with the protagonist. A heroine, a commander, a priest.