The Great Boss of All Worlds

I passed by, burned paper money, lit candles, and offered incense, but nothing happened. Pouring wine, offering tribute, setting off firecrackers, smashing the monument—no response? Digging up graves, exhuming tombs, opening coffins, whipping corpses—no temper? Setting up the table, drawing talismans, channeling energy, striking with lightning—but no corpse came back to life?

You either don't give it at all, or you give it and then weaken it; it's so frustrating to watch!

F***ing OP! How can Orochimaru be from '97? Orochimaru is clearly one of the Seven Warlords of the Sea in Bleach. As a Dragon Slayer Mage, his Nen ability, Bungee Gum, killed the first JoJo and used his body to create Rei Ayanami. He trained her to become the Witch of Envy.

Thumbs up! This book took me back to the early days of online novels, when they were all just a stream of consciousness with weak, lifeless writing. Author, you did great, keep it up!

Sigh, never mind. What's out of control isn't superpowers, it's human nature.

I promised to take three days off, but it's been eleven days already.

I just finished reading the first part of the story. The protagonist's initial portrayal was indeed too immature and childish, which probably drove away many readers. I even considered skipping it myself and ended up skimming through it. But I found the later parts to be quite good. My personal opinion: I've always felt that even the greatest power needs a vessel to withstand it.

The various plot points are contrived, illogical, morally questionable, and the clichéd villainous storylines reeking of real-life losers are secondary; what readers find truly intolerable is the protagonist's ability to dominate from the moment he gains power. The lack of plot tension is a hallmark of all failed so-called "feel-good" novels—a classic case of overwhelming power and predictable flaws.

It feels like a typical loser story from a few years ago... The power of telekinesis, such a noble and sophisticated ability, has been portrayed by you as something as low-class as a petty thug's random tattoo... Furthermore, gambling as a means of getting rich is so outdated. Having superpowers and still using such low-level methods to get rich...

He comes across as a loser, acting all high and mighty. He doesn't act like a big boss at all. You might as well call your book "The Loser's Way of Pretending to Be Cool."