Xianmen Zuizi

Come on brother, keep it up

I don't know how long you can hold on, brother! I will also put it on the shelves tomorrow. I hope it will have better results. I will give you a thumbs up later.

The introduction reminds me of the sentence "The spring breeze blows, the war drums beat, I am a pest, who am I afraid of!" 😁

I've been looking for this kind of book. It's really hard to find.

Some people who watched it were a little frustrated, such as the beautiful wolves Jin Shuang Er and Jin Fu who were always jumping around there, and the masked man. Su Lan lost her memory and did not see the main character getting in touch with her. She had obviously worked hard for the other party before, but suddenly she stopped talking halfway. It was annoying, and there was also the rejection of the inner disciples. Hey, it was not pleasant to watch at all.

Come on, the same author is cheering you on.

I feel that the world of the protagonist described by the author is mediocre in all aspects. The cultivation of weapon refining and spells is neither fast nor slow. The entire cultivation world does not always hate each other to the death. Although it's not a mainstream David and Goliath formula, I quite like it. But I feel that the author writes a bit fast, and many places could be written slowly, and it would be very interesting, but the author jumps around a few years at every turn. It doesn't matter if you skip it a lot of the time, but there are some places that obviously need more writing, but they are skipped and it's a waste of time. This author is really bad at word count. I don't think it's a problem for you to write four or five hundred thousand words out of more than a hundred thousand words.

That's it for liking it, let's start today, brother, I have quit the writing team, there is no time.

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I've read three chapters. The writing is very good and the content is important. I'm probably going to get into trouble, but I'll hold it back and come back again when I feel better.

The monthly vote voted for Mao is not displayed. Could it be that I voted for the wrong book.

In fact, I have fully ordered this book and am reading it. MMP didn't notice the unlucky bonus coin, so I'm wondering why I don't even have an apprentice level! Later I understood it, and I embarrassedly went to give a reward. The author thanked me profusely. I was a little embarrassed at the time and didn't know what to say 🤭

1. Classic names of people, places, spiritual animals, exercises, weapons, elixirs, and moves. 2. Brilliant and tortuous storyline 3. Creation of character I will seriously consider writing it to the appropriate location. Grateful! 🙏

My favorite style is no pretense, no cheating, and logical logic.

Although I haven't watched Xianxia much recently, as someone who has watched it in the past, I feel that the author's writing is really good... Come on, keep it up.

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It's really well written, and the results are hard to describe in just one sentence. I hope the author will persevere. Come on.