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I asked how I can make my grades better, and I feel that I have already worked very hard 😭

It's very well written. It's the first time I've written it like this. I think it's pretty awesome. At least the writing is good. It's just that the plot arrangement is a bit off-beat. It could use some innovative ideas and arrangements. I look forward to the exciting future.

It's really not easy to get mixed up.

You need to always know whether there are any major problems with your recent plot trends. We are waiting for you to come and join the group]⒍з⒍ハ1ззハ⒍

This name is quite familiar. The writing is very good, and the plot is also first-rate. It is not easy to write a new book, so I will collect and support it first. Jiangling Sanren came to visit with his humble work "Secret Techniques of Western Hunan to Break into the City". Cheer up and wish the festival a great success.

Forgot that first heartbeat? Have you forgotten your dream? Corroded by this society, smoothed by this life? Let's watch "Si Chen Wants to Become the God of Love". Give you the first impression.

The author is great but the results are so dismal

If the writing is not delicate enough, why is it not attractive? It looks a little irritating. Concise, smooth, delicate, fast and slow rhythm, relaxed and relaxed, echoing back and forth, none of them are achieved! After so much time, why don't you read what you wrote again? Many parts are very embarrassing!

If you don't advertise, not many people will know about it.

The writing at the front is a bit rough, and the plot doesn't feel well connected, and it's a bit baffling, but the writing is still good.

The author's writing style is very good, but the emotional scenes are too awkward, 2333

The language and writing are acceptable, and the story is not bad, but you, the author, write it yourself and read it again. It's really awkward in many places. Are you writing a novel about cultivating immortals?

The cry of "Monkey Master, Monkey Master" is really meaningless, and he is despised by the animals from the very beginning!

. . Very cold. By the way, the author changed his name?

Seeing the author's perseverance, I really want to support it, but I really can't stand it...😂

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Very well written ORZ. . . I cried blindly after reading one of them, why no one read or pays attention to such a good writing with more than 300,000 words, but many people read a lot of trivial writings, and suddenly I felt hopeless [I am still suffering from the fact that no one read me, it is so naive, I feel tired because of the author's writing style and persistence, I don't have such excellent writing style and plot QAQ... I want to give up.

Glad I saw it. 👍Come on👍

It's not easy for a novice to get involved in Qidian. I posted on Qidian five years ago.

I found that automatic subscription sometimes misses chapters and I have to click ORZ manually. I will wait for you to publish the autographed version 2333🌹