Wizard's Journey

The protagonist is portrayed as an old, frail, and poorly gifted person who refuses to accept his fate. When he decides not to accept his fate, he should realize that the future is full of crises and that time will never be enough. In other words, if he does not have the corresponding awakening pattern and character, he would have already realized that the future is full of crises. He should die or only live for a few more years, and the protagonist in the book seems kind but not dark and cold, seems nosy, and seems unhurried. Ordinary people can live like this, but the protagonist cannot. Who asked the author to make the protagonist old, frail and talented, I don't know When does the author plan to make the protagonist realize his own situation and do what he should do? The only reason why the protagonist is alive now is because the author gave him a cheat and gave him a super golden finger, instead of him being worthy enough to get everything. In my opinion, the better thing is that the protagonist gets everything and gets it through his own efforts. There is so much nonsense just because I think the book is interesting but not good enough. I will tell the author my thoughts and hope the writing will be better.

It is inevitable that there will be some omissions when writing a book. If you see any unreasonableness or bugs, please leave a message here. Well, for the current world view I designed, the theme of the second volume, Dark Forest, has been repeatedly reviewed, and I personally think it is feasible in the general direction; However, because we did not adopt a conventional upgrade routine, it is inevitable that there will be some omissions. I hope that if any friends read something that feels unreasonable, leave a message here, and I will comprehensively judge whether it is indeed unreasonable, or because my settings have not been expanded to this position. I hope everyone will express their opinions enthusiastically, thank you.

After reading it, Karina must have arranged for the protagonist to obtain the heart and escape from the wizard tower. After all, so many coincidences are all related to her.

This novel is very interesting, I like it very much, but there is a small problem, each chapter is only 2000 words. Web articles are basically 3,000 words per update. This is not only a convention for agreeing on common names, but also a "optimal solution" that has been preserved for a long time, just like the Japanese weekly comics, which stipulate about 18 pages per chapter. Nippon Weekly Comics stipulates 18 pages instead of 12 pages because 18 pages can be used to write a complete plot, which is enough to experience several twists and turns. And if it is 12 pages, then either the plot cannot be fully stated and must be stopped at a very embarrassing point, or the plot is very simple and lacks twists and is forced to be crammed into 12 pages. I think novels are similar. For web articles, 3000 can almost write a complete plot. If it's 2,000 words, the chapter may either end at a very boring place and fail to create enough suspense for the next chapter; or the plot may be very simple and straightforward. Another thing is that there may be many readers (I can only speak for myself, so I add "maybe". Other book friends can tell whether this is the case). If they see an author updating 2,000 words every time, they will preconceptionally think that the author is unprofessional and will not want to read it. I think if it was originally two updates of 2,000 words per day, it would be better to change it to one update on weekdays and two updates on weekends, each update of 3,000 words. The total word count is about the same, so the experience may be much better. In my memory, the author updates twice. But I just looked at the author's updates and found that they are updated frequently and in the early morning. That might have been strenuous. In this case, let's focus on the eunuchs... I'll just tell you as a reference.

Author, can you insist on finishing the book?

It can be said that it is original, getting rid of the shackles of the wizarding world, and writing its own style. To be honest, the current wizard style is either a system or a chip, which makes me feel a little sick. And the opening is almost exactly the same. Talent is detected, then selected, boarded on the ship, and then something unexpected happens during the voyage. After some twists and turns, he joined the wizard academy. And most of them are not the wizard academy that the protagonist originally went to, but the more cruel dark wizard academy... Compared with those cookie-cutter Chip Wizard streams, the opening of this book is eye-catching. Becoming an old man, reduced to a servant at the bottom of the Wizard Tower, having to fight for the last glimmer of hope... It feels very novel and exciting.

It's been two years. Has it been revised? Is it possible to write a new book?

This is a good book, a very good book.

The crazy evolved insect of the knife next door has succeeded in being reincarnated into a corpse. Author, when will you succeed in being reincarnated into a corpse?

It also "runs fast". There is no one else who could have named it this way. You can just call it the old-fashioned wind technique. I don't understand why the author would create these unnecessary poisonous points to drive away readers. The part about buying a house is also quite toxic. You want the protagonist to appear very aloof and disdainful of gold and silver, but you don't have to do it this way... I don't understand 😅 I gave food and grass in the first volume, but I don't know what I'm writing from the second volume on.

The character of the protagonist is really disgusting, because mortals are ants, so the provocations of mortals are indifferent. But the reality is that if there is an ant crawling on the roadside, you will not care about it, but if it climbs on the upper of your shoe, you will shake it off and then trample it to death.

I like this style, casual and relaxed, yet stressful and adventurous. Isn't that what a journey is like?

Oh, it's not a dark genre. It's a pity that the wizard is not a dark genre.

Well, why did the magic come out later? Is this a mage? Isn't the wizarding world attracted by all kinds of weird witchcraft and the world? Spend more time on the protagonist's witchcraft setting. The wizarding world that you got out of back then relied on these fires. Otherwise, they are all spells, fireballs, winds, etc., Which are not the same as magic. Then why is it still called the wizarding world? Some witchcraft have side effects and are powerful. At the same time, it does not give people an invincible setting, and it also seeks novelties. These are the characteristics of the wizarding world.

Great book! ! ! Finally, it's not the routine of traveling back in time to become a lord's son, turning on a chip to train as a knight, accidentally discovering news about a wizard, testing your qualifications, then taking a boat ride for half a year, using the chip to make potions to earn magic stones, and then becoming a tenth-level magician! If there is anything missing, please add it~

Can I give you some advice, author? As a bookworm with ten years of experience. And I have read many wizard-style works. After reading this book. I don't think there's anything new. Not really jelly. It can only be regarded as a kind of wizard weed. In comparison, the original version of Sorcerer. Wizarding World. Journey to the Wizard. There's also the latest Witcher Immortal, Sword and Witch Chronicles. There are certain gaps. But why I read this book. His many shortcomings were ignored. Because of his biggest highlight. That is. . . . . . . Old man, old man, old man, old man, old man. The old wizard. Don't lose your hair. Give it back to my old man. Give me back my cute old man. Give me Gandalf. Get me Dumbledore. An old wizard. Old man, old man, old man.

Come back and see if the author has updated it?

What about the promised revision and update? 😭

I have read it several times and it is very well written. What a pity the eunuch is.

It's beautiful, but the number of words is too few. It's great. Please update it quickly! Come on the shelves quickly, explode quickly! !

It's very interesting, I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.

Update quickly, awesome!

For now, writing is okay.

Create a cover. This blank cover has its own dissuasive effect.

The book is good, but I don't think it will sell well.

Emotional hormones determine... After rejuvenation, the internal glands cannot decay like old age... (Morning erections, estrus, and acne are all normal (if the body metabolism returns to 20 years old)

Recommended, a very good wizard novel

Why can't I reward you? ?

I feel that the early talent (element absorption efficiency) of this kind of wizard is really important, because those with poor talent cannot advance before the end of their lifespan. But it seems that in the middle stage (around the fourth level wizard), because the body has been transformed into a system designed by oneself, the talent depends on one's own design and has little to do with the body at birth. Later, the understanding of the rules and avenues is more important. The deeper the understanding, the more suitable the transformation of the body, and the efficiency of cultivation will increase. On the contrary, those who relied on their talents and went smoothly without thinking in the early stage will struggle. Therefore, the protagonist's photographic memory can be said to be a later talent 😊

Why don't you use tools to dial a pocket watch? It's not possible to work out miracles with great force.