Rebirth and the Establishment of a Sect

Although the writing style of this book is immature, some of the characters in the early stages did inexplicable things, such as Pu Chang's inexplicable suicide, and Aunt Lan, who was so powerful but allowed Dao Ming's father to be killed. Everything became clear in more than 30 chapters, and it turned out that it was all a conspiracy. The empress's conspiracy may be to plot something on the protagonist. As for the system's tendency to erase things at every turn, I did find it embarrassing in the early stages, but the author still changed it after more than 30 chapters. As for the female protagonist, I suspect that the author has been hurt by a woman in real life. When I saw Emily's death, I seriously doubted whether this book had a female protagonist. However, despite the criticism, you can see that the author's writing style is slowly improving. I look forward to the author's next book. Writing a book is not easy. Come on 🌹

Disclaimer: This is only my first book, and it is also a writing practice. I know how bad my writing is. There is no need to scold me mindlessly when you come in. Just click the cross in the upper right corner if you don't like it. Moreover, both my introduction and the author's remarks state that I should not click on toxic content, and that mindless comments will only affect my writing mood and the viewing mood of other readers. Of course, I will accept it humbly if it is well-founded, and I will be more precise. As soon as I came in, they called me an idiot, parents, etc. I'm sorry, I will only delete the comments, and maybe ban them.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 6. I know I can't beat someone but I still go to the door to kick him. Well, since I can't beat him, it's understandable that I should be a bit abusive. But what does that woman mean by slapping him? Is it happy to watch one of your own being beaten to death? Only a holy mother bitch should read this book. The martial arts is to kill people. Since they are enemies, why do you care how they kill them? Abandon the book!

If you want to write your own character into a book, please come here. The more detailed the character information is, the better. I will select the ones that please me and include them in the book.

Come on bro, I'm waiting for your chapter recommendation 😏

I have only read the new chapters so far, and now I plan to start reading from the first chapter. The writing is very good, and the plot is also first-rate. It is not easy to write a new book, so I will collect and support it first. Jiangling Sanren came to visit with his humble work "Secret Techniques of Western Hunan to Break into the City". Cheer up and wish the festival a great success.

Official friend "The Retired Life of a Killer" is here and has been collected. The language is concise and fluent, let's work hard together!

Martial arts has a small audience and it's hard to get ahead. Don't be discouraged. No matter what, stick to it and finish the book. Come on 🌹🌹🌹

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After reading the first few chapters, I feel that although it is not very good, it is not that bad. The author's writing style is a bit immature, and the details of the characters are a little rough, but overall it is not bad, but the opening routine is a bit poorly used. Starting with a dilapidated sect and a junior sister or sister alone is very consistent with the routine of Long Aotian's novels. This should be noted. Nowadays, readers' tastes are becoming more and more demanding. If the writing does not meet the requirements, you must find another way and seek new ideas. Also, the characters must be clear. I haven't read the rest of the content, but let's talk about it here first! You must not forcibly add conflicts for the sake of enjoyment; the protagonist must have flaws. A protagonist with flaws is more attractive than a perfect protagonist. The villain must be charming. If a villain is charming, he can even overshadow the protagonist. Only when the villain and supporting characters are well written, the book will not be a solo drama of the protagonist.

App sofa😁Come on

Already collected! "Daddy Star" sent a congratulatory message! 😁😁😁

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😎 Brother Xiu Xian is ranked very high on the list tonight. He is practicing in seclusion. Come on!

I don't know who added this book list to you, but the introduction is so relaxed and refreshing, I can't feel it at all.

😭Finally, I joined the same school as my brother. Let's work together.

Ahem, what can I say? After all, it's the first book. Congratulations on finishing it 😁