A Breath of Fresh Air in the Apocalypse

Sorry for the high expectations, brothers, this book is just a commemoration. A new book will be released in the afternoon. I hope you can come and support me!

No need to vote for me. If you want to support, just wait for my new book. Thank you for your support!

Good morning, keep up your hard work today, come on😊

My friend, your character creation is not good, and it feels like the writing is very messy. Then there are many places that are illogical. For example, the wretched man put a knife to the protagonist's neck. Didn't he just kill him directly? And you wrote later that he had killed several young ladies. This is not logical. You can write that the protagonist walks in and the villain directly cuts off the protagonist's head, but the protagonist hides, or for other reasons does not die and kills him instead. You have to bring yourself into the role of protagonist. Or think of yourself as a reader. Only in this way can you write well. And you also need a certain amount of literary accumulation. How can you write a novel if you haven't read it yourself? Of course I am just a reader who has read novels for many years. These are just my personal opinions, don't be offended if you don't like them.

This kind of good book should be read by more people. I am a huge fan of the author. Come on, keep updating! I also hope that the pace will be faster! 😁😁

Happy New Year! Haven't seen you for a long time!

The author writes very well. He makes the pace faster, and then adds more system content. I hope to add more characters.

Brother, please speed up the tempo a bit, and then think more about the system. The rest of the writing is very good, come on!

The article is very well written, but the description of this system is too little, and it is too biased towards oral composition. I hope it can be corrected 😁