Dimensional Interest Club

1. The boy in the first chapter makes people feel uncomfortable. Even if the protagonist does not introduce himself, it is okay to directly state his name. After all, it is a third-person God's perspective. 2. There is too little character interaction. You introduced several characters in the first two chapters but the protagonist did not interact with any of them. This is completely abnormal and feels very boring. 3. There are too few words, both in terms of verbal description and psychological description. Without these two points, would your writing still be a novel? It's a running account! Finally, I wish the author a great success in his book.

U. Qidian. Com/z8DufroP Misaka No. 19090 Was experimented in advance, and was killed by Accelerator without any suspense. Death, this is Misaka's destined fate—— Misaka has a self, repeats her own destiny in different forms of existence, and in other forms in countless dimensions, but she has the desire to change her own destiny. Can Misaka girl's wish come true? Why would she have such an opportunity? Stay tuned——

The writing is terrible, the story is not very interesting, and the plot is too old.

Invincible, after reading the first chapter, I didn't even know who the protagonist was.

The author's bacteria and my sister can't be that many and hit the cover

Due to the incompetence of my subordinates, I was unable to achieve 999+ monthly votes and recommendation votes for my lord's novel, but I believe that if I have the full support of all the generals, I will succeed, and I have lived up to the mission my lord has given me. The article is stupid and I can no longer add comments. I sincerely ask all generals to protect the flame of this Wei novel and let the monthly votes and recommendation votes exceed 999+. I have no regrets about banning. ╭( ･ㅂ･)و