Array to Confer Gods

Author: Will you come back?

It is said to be very beautiful, come and have a look 😰

The beginning is very much like a fairy, but unfortunately the author's writing power is limited and the layout feels very limited. He wanted to give readers the impression that the world is grand and the heroine is powerful. Unfortunately, your writing is not enough, but it is self-defeating and the narrative is not clear. It gave me a very confusing feeling from the first chapter. The author wanted to write many lines, but you didn't clarify the context. Maybe you understood it yourself, but the readers didn't. You need to improve your writing skills. For example, Yun Da can write fairies well. The main reason is that Yun Da's writing and layout are particularly good. Moreover, she has written long and excellent fairy novels before. But as the author, you challenge such a grand structure in your first book. If your writing skills are not good, the writing will still be very boring.

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