Becoming Feng Qingyang's Disciple
拜师风清扬
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 566k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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An ordinary disciple of the Taishan Sect went to Shaolin and then to Huashan, hoping to learn Feng Qingyang's Dugu Nine Swords? Or the Five Mountains Swordplay from a cave? Dream on. He went to Shaolin, and Fang Zheng even followed him, giving him the Marrow Cleansing Classic. Why? Was he an illegitimate child? Even if he just randomly picked up a secret swordplay manual by the roadside, that would be considered incredible luck, unparalleled fortune.
Isn't Mount Tai a mathematical swordsmanship technique? One hand calculates data while the other thrusts the sword straight forward, the emphasis is on mathematical calculation. How did you turn it into a heavy sword slash?
The most abhorrent acts are child trafficking and woman rape. Let Tian Boguang off the hook; the protagonist's moral standards are a bit too low!
He delivers the Marrow Cleansing Classic to the Shaolin Temple, becomes Feng Qingyang's disciple at Mount Hua, and his father and son share the same generation as his daughter. He learns martial arts and then eagerly licks the boots of the Great Demoness Ren. Aren't all these flaws enough to make you want to abandon the book?
The book is confusing. The writing style is alright, the protagonist's personality and the opening are acceptable, at least there aren't any major flaws. You could say that as long as the plot is appropriate, this book won't be bad. But author, you failed to deliver. First, you need to write *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*.
Given the prejudices of ancient times, how did you, a disciple of Mount Tai, become a disciple of Feng Qingyang of Mount Hua?
It's just incongruous for someone from the Taishan Sect to become a disciple of the Huashan Sect.
Why befriend Linghu Chong? It's unnecessary.
A Taishan Sect member who's become a disciple of the Huashan Sect? Feng Qingyang would accept someone like you—a traitor who betrays his master and changes allegiances—I'd be disgusted.
How did the martial arts story turn into a cultivation story?