Apprenticeship Feng Qingyang

Books are confusing. The writing style is okay, and the character of the protagonist and the opening chapter are okay, at least not too poisonous. It can be said that as long as the plot is suitable. This book won't be bad. But author, you did it. First you have to write Xiaoao. Even if you want to add yourself, stuff. Then you have to keep the basic personalities of some of the characters in the original work. Otherwise, it's just selling dog meat over sheep's heads. The first is Founder. A Shaolin host. Look at the original. This person is very classy. Style of doing things. You just wrote it as Hong Qigong. Hong Qigong also wants delicious food. As for you, you write more noblely. The original work is by Linghu Chong. Everyone should take refuge in my Buddha. And what is Linghu Chong's identity? At the height of the popularity, the senior brother of the Huashan sect possesses unique knowledge and has a close relationship with the leaders of both good and evil sects. He is of great value. What about you? Fangzheng put it bluntly. It was to use Linghu Chong to contain the Demon Sect. Buying a favor by the way. Promote fame. Feng Qingyang, I vomited when I saw such a blunt approach to accepting a disciple. The battle of sword energy. It doesn't mean that Feng Qingyang doesn't pay attention to the Huashan Sect. Linghu Chong was the one who taught him, and it can also be said that Feng Qingyang watched him grow up. What does it have to do with the Five Mountains Sword Sect? To put it bluntly. That is a loose alliance. It really is a sect. My own Huashan sect has been thinking about it for so many years before teaching. After the main character left, he accepted a disciple? ? ? ? And after all, Siguo Cliff is also the place where the Huashan Sect is incarcerated. Your protagonist just went up there so casually? ? ? Is Qinggong enough? A novice of Taishan pie. Maybe someone who's better than Lu Hou'er can go up casually. No need to worship the mountain gate. It's almost unbearable to look at. The whole world opens a way for the protagonist. The author tells the story this way, instead of directly writing that the protagonist is on the top of Mount Tai, where the boss of the world is influenced by heaven and earth. One after another came to offer opportunities. The protagonist doesn't have to be so tired and running around. Cheating the protagonist. No problem. But you have to see how to cheat. The system hangs. We won't tell. The author's settings should not be too outrageous, but are acceptable. For example, the author sets a favorability system for the protagonist, which can adjust other people's favorability toward him. If you add it to a person, in a short period of time, this person will be very fond of you. You write Fangzheng like this. Clear. Good for you, I can understand. Otherwise you write body hanging. Extraordinary talent. At the age of 15, he was already number one in Taishan. The plot of this Songshan sect is a demonic sect. To destroy Huashan, this is the time. You stand up. Resist something. I am injured, what Yijin Jing is needed? Then, the wind cleared and my life was short. Time is running out to protect Mount Huashan. The younger generation can't, so I'll ask you to be my protector. Teach you sword skills. That's not okay. At least give readers a reason. Instead of writing however you want. Write fan fiction. The original work has left an impression on the public's mind. The setting has been deeply rooted in people's hearts. You can analyze it from multiple angles. Mining more of the character and story without disrespecting the original. Do whatever you want. Otherwise, this kind of book will generally not become popular. Especially, the original one that was popular among others. I feel like this book is obsolete. Authors should not ruin their writing. Stop writing fan fiction. Create your own fantasy world of martial arts, fairy tales, and fantasy. Just think about the plot carefully. I feel like the author is popular. By the way, write less about feelings. Woman. The author is not suitable for you. I feel that the author has never talked to anyone and is a bit naive.

An ordinary disciple of the Taishan Sect goes to Shaolin and Huashan, but still wants Feng Qingyang's Dugu Nine Swords? The Five Mountains swordsmanship in the cave? Dreaming. I went to Shaolin, and Fang Zheng followed me all the way and gave me the Marrow Cleansing Sutra. Why? Illegitimate child? Even if you randomly pick up a secret book on swordsmanship on the roadside, it can be said that you are lucky and invincible.

Daizong's swordsmanship is mathematical. He calculates data with one hand and stabs directly with the sword. The emphasis is on mathematical calculations. Why did you change it to chopping with an epee?

The most disgusting things are the abduction of children and the rape of women. Let Tian Boguang go, the protagonist's bottom line is a bit low!

Go to Shaolin to deliver the Marrow Cleansing Sutra, go to Huashan to worship Feng Qingyang as your master, father and son, father and daughter are of the same generation, learn martial arts well and lick any great witch, so many poisonous points are not enough to abandon the book?

From the perspective of ancient sects, how did you become a disciple of Mount Tai and become the disciple of Feng Qingyang of Huashan!

Why do you want to be friends with Linghu Chong? It's not necessary.

You, a Taishan sect disciple and a disciple of the Huashan sect, are against harmony no matter how you look at it.

How did the martial arts become cultivators after this? ? ?

Your popularity seems fake. .

I didn't read it until I finished the introduction (¯㉨¯crimin)

A person from the Taishan sect who became a disciple of the Huashan sect? Feng Qingyang would accept someone like you who deceives his master and destroys his ancestors to change the hall. I would vomit.

You don't think that the Five Mountains Sword Sect is one of our own. People from Huashan can conquer Mount Tai.

There is not a single good person among the entire Smiling Proud Man. This book......

Seeing that you have updated recently, I gave you a recommendation vote.

If you say this book is just boiled water, then I'm still interested in reading it. But boiling water to cook cabbage, haha... There is really no need to look at it. After all, you yourself feel that your writing is not very good.

I'm so stupid. I've never seen anything like this. I really can't understand Tian Boguang and Ren Yingying. I give up. Come on, author.

A disciple of Mount Tai goes to Mount Huashan to become a disciple ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )? I'm afraid I haven't read the original work published by YY.

It was okay at first, but he managed to survive by becoming a disciple of Feng Qingyang, but in the end, a righteous man spent all his time hanging out with demonic witches. Did he live a long life? Self-destruction

Let me ask first, is this a pure Swordsman fan?

Funny. Could the author use some snacks? Read comments

The author expressed dissatisfaction with "Eternal Heaven and Sword of the Dragon". Has the author read Jin Yong's novels?