Revenge Lord Development Plan

Let me tell you, this author is a heartless man and a liar! He made a promise to me in the group and said he loved me, but in the end we did everything we were supposed to do, but he didn't even send me a profile! ! ! ! ! You say it's too much! My book. . . I won't mention the title of the book, so as not to think that I am advertising. If he still cherishes this baby, he will naturally come here to make it clear. Everyone, lift me up high so that he can see it, otherwise he will lose this baby!

There have been a few new people in the group recently, and their writing skills are amazing! It made me laugh for a long time, and I recommended your article to them. Then there are primary school students who are not convinced and want to compete with you on their writing skills! They told me that what you wrote was not good. I was not present at the time, otherwise I would have kicked them both in the face even if I said anything! Keep it up! You fly for a while, fly as fast as you can, take care of your buddy, I have already rewarded you! I won't leave my message in your message area. It's too mean. Your brother Ran is the kind of person who is high-profile and refined. Just feel free to write boldly. Come to the group to brag and reminisce about old times when you have time, OVRE!

Updates, updates, too few, not enough. Brother, please kneel down and beg for more Braille.

I am in a bit of a book shortage, so I was casually browsing and came across this book. The writing really touched my heart. I really like the author's plot design, it's thrilling but out of the ordinary, very good.

Advantages; The description is brilliant (the soul of a book lies in the description of any object without appearing dull. The author has obviously achieved this. Whether it is the character's actions, scenery or fighting, the descriptions embellished on the side play a pleasing role in the eyes) Characteristics (each character has his own distinctive characteristics. In the first few chapters, telling it from the protagonist's mouth as a story not only avoids being unreasonable, but also avoids being forcefully inserted into the novel and affecting the reader's reading mood) The auxiliary is reasonable (the author did not give the protagonist a very powerful or very weak golden finger at the beginning to prevent the reader from reading further, but turned it into a kind of foreshadowing that slowly revealed over time) Suggestions: There can be less description of the supporting characters, otherwise it will be suspected of stealing the scene~ The description of the scenery can be more detailed, and some places can be supplemented by readers' imagination. Probability of the author becoming a god: Medium The potential value of this book: nine points Rating (individual): 8.5 (Out of 10) ——If you think it is possible, how about pinning it to the top and adding more details?

Some of the plots in this book moved me beyond measure! There are some things that really touch the depths of the soul!

I can't stop watching it! There is suspense in almost every chapter

He is not very slow-tempered and knows how to be cautious when doing things. The protagonist really has potential, ahem, I hope I can find a partner, otherwise I will look lonely.

If you have actually read Flaubert's masterpiece, it is not difficult to find that Yaozhi's original writing style was based on European romanticism. In terms of material selection, Flaubert was not interested in special or peculiar events. His works all used stories or pictures of daily life as the content, depicting the human condition in daily life. It is as plain and accurate as real life. There is no artificial arrangement or fabricated drama. It does not win with a thrilling beginning or a shocking ending, but with a real and natural narrative art and descriptive art that attracts people. Because the author is meticulously observant and good at digging, he profoundly reflects the reality of life and the nature of society. Although the article is short, it contains profound meanings, and ordinary and trivial things are of extraordinary significance. Give people the artistic enjoyment of seeing the big from the small. 2. The plot is not complicated, but the concept and layout are very subtle and unique. In some works, he does not even use the plot as a scaffold and line. He always uses very thin, very hidden, and almost invisible clues to cleverly connect some credible little things, and cleverly and without traces use the most appropriate structural combination to highlight the main points and lead to the ending. The downplaying of plots and the naturalization of life scenes are a characteristic of modern novels. Some adopt the "layered method" of contradictions, with ups and downs throughout the novel, or create great suspense at the beginning, and then make an unexpected and sharp turn. Colorful, lively and interesting. 3. In terms of form of expression, Flaubert was a master of proficient techniques. He did not stick to established methods or abide by certain established rules, but used various methods and techniques freely. In terms of the description object, sometimes it is a complete story, sometimes it is a fragment of an event, sometimes it is a certain picture, sometimes it is a psychological activity and mental state. There are some that have a strong storyline, and some that have a weak plot or even have no plot at all. There are some with many characters, some with a single character, and some with no characters at all. From the perspective of description, there are objective descriptions and subjective descriptions. Sometimes the describer has a clear identity, and sometimes the identity is unknown. The diversification and change of description methods have improved the level of narrative art and greatly enriched the description methods of novels. 4. Use the natural and simple line drawing technique to capture the essence of the scenery, be meticulous and accurately convey the spirit. 5. Naturalization of characters and trivialization of heroes. Through the characters' natural state in daily life and the most reasonable actions, behaviors, reactions, and expressions that they must have under certain circumstances, their inner psychology and character reality are revealed. Don't shy away from the ridiculousness and shortcomings of heroes. The characters' personalities are revealed naturally through the development of the plot, with little trace of embroidery. 6. The language is standardized and beautiful, clear, concise, accurate and vivid. Flaubert advocated that novelists should be as realistic as scientists and should describe accurately through field investigations. At the same time, he also advocated the "objective and indifferent" creative theory and opposed novelists expressing themselves in their works. In terms of artistic style, Flaubert never describes an isolated environment, but strives to use the environment to highlight the mood of the characters and achieve the artistic realm of blending scenes.

Let's not talk too much, let's analyze it directly from two aspects. First of all, in terms of writing style, using the ancient style of ink and wash to write Western fantasy novels is indeed unique. This novel is not suitable for quick reading. It requires slowly savoring each word to feel the immersive sense of the picture. This can be completely praised, but the disadvantage is that although the static description is The writing style is very good, but the plot is too static. It doesn't look like a moving novel, but more like a beautiful comic strip. If the plot can be made active, I believe it will become a very perfect work, and can even surpass the category of online literature. If 100 points is a perfect score, then let's deduct the shortcomings and give it 92 points. 😜