Tiandao Game Maker

I have been following this book for several days. I can see that the author's writing is smooth and comfortable to read. It gives people a very high sense of completion. It seems that the author is obviously very good at writing fantasy. If it were a two-dimensional novel, it would not be able to achieve such an effect. I will mainly talk about two areas of the work that I personally think are deficient. One is the name of the work, which is too unrecognizable. What does low recognition mean? Take the name of this work to Baidu and search it. Unexpectedly, I couldn't find this book, but found a bunch of links to second-rate online games. The "Tiandao" game, "Tiandaoyou" game, etc. Are probably the legacy of the old days of Dao Dao and Shenxian Dao. As a result, many readers who know the name and want to read this book will not be able to find it in the first place. It is possible to give up in just one or two steps of trouble, which would be a pity. Second, the concept of "game" in this book is only used as a plug-in. It feels more like a deus ex machina and lacks some rationality and selling points. For example, Fruit Ninja at the beginning, if this book were not from the Tiandao game manufacturer, Instead, the Tiandao novel dealer or Tiandao movie dealer replaced Fruit Ninja with the heart-piercing scene of thousands of arrows in the novel or the bullet time of The Matrix. Can the same effect of improving the protagonist's reaction be achieved? In the same way, if the following Jin Yong's Heroes were directly replaced by Jin Yong's novels, or CCTV's Shooting Condors, etc. Can the protagonist's strength be improved? If the answer is yes, then the game here only exists as a plug-in. It is a pity that the unique fun of the game compared to other works was not written. Above.

The pace of the last few chapters has been tight, which is a bit different from before, so I'll give it four stars. The plot in the early stage is a bit loose. The protagonist seems to be gaining strength and making friends one by one. It can be seen that the author has not found the rhythm yet. After entering the main plot, he feels much more comfortable. The protagonist's process from being slightly resistant to accepting responsibility is quite good. In addition, there are more updates.

The protagonist is set to have modern thoughts, does not like fighting, and is not aggressive. This is good, and it fits well with the personal ideals mentioned by the protagonist recently. Some places are a bit deliberate in order to advance the plot and are not natural enough, but it's okay to skip it quickly. (If this is foreshadowing, please ignore me.) Overall it's acceptable, keep it up.

Recently, my writing style has started to become more mellow, I think I have started practicing it, so I look forward to the protagonist releasing the game to the outside world and shocking everyone.

This book is good. If there is no collapse at the back, it should be regarded as fairy grass.

I feel so embarrassed. You should focus on daily writing. You can't pretend to be a martial artist. You can only pretend to be literary.

I always feel that when the King of Thunder and Lightning comes, everything will be in pill form. Յ(¯¯Յ)

I would like to ask if a game like Fairy Sword is in the form of reincarnation or is it like a world.

Hey. It's not on the shelves yet, and I don't know what to do with the two monthly passes I have.

Looking forward to the new chapter, the author must work hard

Today's recommendation vote is given to you. The book is very good. Come on ✊

The ultimate villain of this book: the eternal Lord of Thunder—Yang Yongxin!

It's an interesting read, big thumbs up to the author!

It's great, the plot design is reasonable, and the writing is also good. The important thing is that the subject matter is relatively new. Although it is a bit cliche in some places, it is not particularly cliché. Generally speaking, those who have seedlings and grass jelly may add it to their bookshelf. I will reward you with 500 for encouragement 😁😁😁

I'm thinking about what it would be like to play with women's mountains (funny)

The idea is very innovative, but I can't stand the plot.

I feel like this book is good, but why is it that every game that comes out is not promoted? The time ratio between games and reality, and the improvement of the protagonist through God's blessing are not clear.

The writing is okay and above average. The settings are good, the game and food settings are good, maybe Tiandao is a senior time traveler... Or is she a woman? There are too many routines, as if it's impossible to write without creating an enemy for the protagonist. The rhythm is too tight, really tight, and I don't see the daily routine You can give it an appropriate amount of water The heroine... Seems a bit too much, it depends on personal preference Can see, food and grass