Egyptian Emperor

That night, I led 500 million elite soldiers to storm her castle. After a company sprint, I finally lowered my proud head and returned in defeat. Unexpectedly, half a month later, she flew a pigeon to deliver a message: More than a month ago, one of my brave soldiers broke into her palace among thousands of troops, was captured alive by her, and was locked in the palace. He is now sentenced to ten months in prison. Now I am very conflicted. I don't know whether I should go to jail or wait until he is released after serving his sentence.

Okay, stop scolding me over and over again, why don't you just admit it to me? I admit that the first thirty chapters were not well written. The main reasons are simply the following: 1. When I first started the book, I was very stupid and naive, and I didn't understand certain routines at all; 2. Failure to plan the new book well, writing as you please and letting yourself go; 3. At that time, I was neurotic, had a Holy Mother heart, and was confused. Okay, what time is it? The reason why I wrote this post is because I found that anyone who opened a new post to criticize me would just repeat the same points over and over again, and I recognized all of my previous replies; So I'll just pin this to the top of the post and explain all the shortcomings of this book clearly to save you from scolding me again! If you can hold your nose and continue reading after the scolding (I sincerely recommend you continue reading), you may find that the writing is actually pretty good later on; After all, the protagonist is growing up, and so is the author! Of course, this is what I said without shame. If you agree, I ask you to read on with peace of mind. I am working hard to make money by coding, and you will have fun watching it, getting the best of both worlds; If you don't agree, then please abandon the book decisively and stop torturing yourself. Still, I want to thank you for reading my book. I am happy when someone reads my book.

This book will persuade you to quit at the beginning. This book by the author has hit the streets.

Why is Mao classified as fantasy? Are you sick? I've read dozens of chapters, all of which are historical, right? There is something wrong~ And I feel that the protagonist's IQ is not online... The protagonist who has no basic vigilance is as weird as some kind of paper man in the void and cannot be understood.

When I read about Egypt, I thought it was about slavery, but I didn't expect that the protagonist wanted to play freedom and democracy. . . …(⊙＿⊙;)…

This is the first time I see such a loser male protagonist. Is the author writing about himself? In the early stage, the author was written as such a coward, a coward, and a wretched person. I continued to watch it, but now after reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't stand it at all. You just want to write like a waste material, and then there will be a big explosion. Don't be such a waste material that you don't write about the struggle of the protagonist's heart. If you are good, you will write about fighting at the beginning. What happens next? From the beginning to the end, you can't watch it!

It's poisonous. After watching it for a while, the main character seemed like a fool.

Wow, I really can't stand the third chapter. The effect of persuading people to quit is too serious. What is the protagonist going to do? The ancient Egyptians and slaves from 3,400 years ago said that the three golden chapters of the novel were the most important when it came to equality, but it turned out to be three chapters of persuading people to quit.

After reading 18 chapters, I wanted to delete the book and leave from the first chapter.

There is nothing to say about the subject matter of the novel. Pig's feet are useless. Moreover, there are problems with the sentences and there are skipped paragraphs in the storyline. Pig's Feet simply doesn't know whether it's because his life is too tragic and he's not good enough, or because the author has a tendency to accept abuse. How can there be so many hospitals? It is impossible for an ancient hereditary noble to collapse from the top position in the country. This is an insult to the IQ of the ancients. The ancient people were ten thousand times more fearful than modern people in order to obtain family property. At that time, many children would die without fighting. There are several things.

It's so silly. In an ancient setting, especially a dynasty with powerful theocracy, the protagonist explains science to a few slaves? Shi Lezhi.

The character of this protagonist can persuade most people, including me

Has the protagonist finally risen? . . I hope I can turn over once and for all. .

The prototype of the protagonist is the weakened Tokugawa Turtle, who has no great abilities but can survive. The princess is the Leper King + Roger II + Constantine XI + Alfred the Great + Leo I. Judging from this posture, Belisarius and Odysseus are probably included...

_(:з∠)_Why do you rush to the street? 1. The character at the beginning is not cheerful and likable. Even if it is a real historical novel, it is difficult for everyone to accept the plot of the protagonist being threatened along the way. Although it seems to have reversed after more than a hundred chapters, there are already a lot of book friends who were attracted by the writing and subject matter in the early stage. Now that it has been written, there is no point in revising it. Let's think about the rest. 2. History is inherently a niche book. The clicks on history and the clicks on fantasy are not on the same level. 3. Newcomers who write books are not famous because your early plot is not pleasing, so no one will go to forums such as Long Kong to promote the book, and naturally fewer people will read it.

There are all kinds of people, and the pig's trotters at the bottom of modern society take the initiative to travel to the past. They must not adapt to the differences in the environment. Since the author did not give pig's trotters all kinds of golden fingers, he should let the pig's trotters grow up through tempering, and let the pig's trotters grow into the Egyptian emperor with the vision, perspective, and knowledge tempered by modern society. Let's wait and see! Until then, keep tipping!

Was the protagonist a primary school student before traveling through time? Still clamoring for freedom and equality for everyone? Growing up in the United States? China's official-based society has never changed for 5,000 years from ancient times to the present. Even today's high school students are not so short-sighted, let alone people who are not part of society.

Brother Lu Tianxia has countless clones!