The Dragon Clan of the Morning Light World

Xiong's poison test report I've probably read dozens of chapters, how can I put it? The first poisonous point: turning into a human. Perhaps the author is not very good at writing about the young dragon period. The first two chapters just briefly touched on it and then turned into a human. From what I saw, there was no sense of dragons at all, which disappointed me as I wanted to read about dragons. The second poisonous point: Forcibly joining urban routines, what do normal people do when they go to another world? I don't know, but this book gives a magical answer - copy books! Oh my gosh, although the author has explained culture and stuff (actually this is amazing, because he didn't mention how he knew it at all), but are you sure there is a concept of copyright in other worlds? How do you make money? Why must we be sure that HP can sell well? This is another world, not an earthly person. So I can definitely think that the author wanted to imitate the routine of cultural invasion into another world, but it was obviously used in the wrong place.

Looking back at the synopsis, I found that many parts were not explained clearly. For the sake of word count, too many scenes between the protagonist and humans were written. This book once sold 300,000 yuan in 2015, but was later blocked by my family. The writing in 2015 was really bad, but the results were much better than now, and it was even recommended on the front page. Mainly at that time, you can spend time writing about how the protagonist has no sense of identity with human beings... At that time, the book review section didn't mention how to become a human being... Unfortunately, the writing was too fast this time and I couldn't stop it, so I could only continue to write the protagonist according to the human heart and dragon body. To be honest, when writing novels, it is better to write about 4,000 words a day. If you have time to think, you can also correct wrong sentences and various logical problems. The information can also be obtained. The most important thing is! ! ! You can be a little different so you don't get complained about!

First of all, this book is not a strange beast style, but a farming style. Dragons are not classified as exotic beasts. Dragons are more advanced creatures than humans. Searching the Internet for the meaning of alien beasts only includes Kirin at most, so those who want to read alien beasts actually have many good books on alien beasts, but this is not my category, so you guys should not massacre my comment section, but I will try my best to change myself less in the future. There is also the issue of dragons turning into humans. I have already explained it very clearly. Those who do not change into humans are weird and heretical! For example, in the novel "Elegy of the Dragon Wings of the Seraph", which I really like to read, the protagonist ran out to find an elf and later turned into an elf. There are also many dnd dragons who fall in love with people. For example, a certain blue dragon clearly has the potential to become the master of the blue dragon, but he insists on following humans. After that person died, he ran back to be the leader. Many people have played World of Warcraft, in which every dragon has to transform into a human. Chromie has been standing behind Stormwind City as a dwarf for who knows how long. She always turns into a dwarf when doing quests. If some hunter players hadn't taken the time to investigate, no one would have discovered that she was a dragon. Place! By! Explain! Those who do not change the dragon clan are heretics! Those are evil dragons! For example, Smaug and Deathwing no longer play tricks. And I, the protagonist, was so weak at the beginning and if I didn't transform into a dragon, something would happen. If you want to see alien beasts crushing humans, don't read the first part. The rest of the plot will be passive and don't change into humans very much. Well... Don't change much unless it is really necessary. For example, if you want to discuss money fraud with enslaved stupid humans, you should become smaller and sneak into the house to talk secretly. My outline has been changed, what do you guys think? How come the orthodox Western dragon tribe has been living in human cities for more than ten years, and I have become poisonous in less than a month!

Explain! How much money Chenguang Stationery paid you, I would like to pay ten times!

The human race is so weak and not as smart as the dragon race. Apart from the numerical advantage due to the superposition of fecundity, there is no benefit in becoming human.

Change the title of the book, People in the Morning Star World

The dozens of chapters I have read have nothing to do with dragons at all. He was basically a reborn human noble in another world.

After reading some of the first chapters, I really hate the double-standard Cecil Dragon. The idea of ​​punishing rape and eliminating evil is unjustifiable, so I use the high-profile ethics of the jungle to find a reasonable explanation for my selfish behavior. Whether it is novels or reality, I hate this kind of person the most. I hope I won't see this passerby again in the following chapters.

→_→ I was looking forward to it, but it seems I overthought it. The protagonist has an unpleasant vibe everywhere. It seems that cow life is a state of mind.

By the way, I never know what kind of dragon the protagonist is. Is he an ordinary five-color dragon or a metal dragon? Or is he a legendary three dragon, a hate dragon, or some other subspecies?

It feels very unmagical at the beginning. How can a ten-year-old dragon learn advanced magical transformation? At least it is possible for a young dragon with extraordinary talent in magic.

Why is there so much duplicate content?

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Why is there no kobold? This is the standard equipment of the dragon clan! Dark vision bonus, mining bonus, metal casting bonus, dog version of dragon language, strong in group fights, lawful evil.

There's been a lot of writing about dragons lately...

Another Long Wen who directly transformed into a human...

I noticed that the author's name appeared in the text.

. . . . At first glance, I looked like a dragon that was slaying the world.

Why do dragons transform into humans! I think this is for the convenience of communication and the protection of the race. Although the Dragon Clan is powerful, it takes time to become strong. For example, if there are five human beings who practice fighting spirit or magic from birth to 20 years ago, you said that the possibility of defeating the underage Dragon Clan is not enough. Add a few more people. Humans have more people, and how long does it take for dragons to become adults... And I think dragons can change into humans, but I don't want them to turn into humans too early. Generally speaking, dragons basically need to reach adulthood before they can change into humans. You said it's okay to do it earlier, but it can't be too early, right? You can't accept this even if you think about it.

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However, it is really strange to transform into a human being. Human beings are weak, short-lived, not intelligent, and not beautiful. I don't understand why dragons would accommodate people. If dragons like a refined life, wouldn't they make their own tools and cities that fit their body shape? ? To put it bluntly, dnd's design of gold and silver dragons is very unreasonable.

Are you sure this book is finished? Even the ending is set,

To put it bluntly, dragons are just human fantasies. The so-called dragon control is just a castle in the air. No matter how non-human it is, it is still human. All non-human beings are also people wearing monster skins. No matter how many years without humanity, it is still just a human fantasy. Whether the transformation is good or not is ultimately a matter of the author's ability.

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On the contrary, Seraph's Dragon Wing Elegy mentions that the golden dragon has a city and an exquisite civilization in Paradise Mountain, with a high standard of living. Dragons can interact with people, but there is no reason for the strong to accommodate the weak. I hope you can think more about it when setting up the world. There is a situation where dragons will adapt to people and become humans: dragons are few in number and have no clan protection. In order to prevent being used as magic materials, they disguise themselves as humans.

It's too much to say that there is so much useless content that requires payment.