Hunter's Throne

I have given up, but today I saw you click in again and you are still updating. You are a good author, so this book should be used as a training method.

I've been too busy lately. I was in such a hurry that I didn't even read the update, so there may be too many typos. So, if you find it, please tell me. Bring which volume and chapter.

When I see the driving recorder, I feel a sense of inconsistency.

Boss, I want to see you interact with Xiaoqi or Xiaojie

Hunter fics are difficult to write. It's not because the world of Hunter is grand and the concept system is complicated, but because the original work depicts the characters very delicately, and even the villains are very charming. The Brigade and the Ant King also have touching stories, the president also has an evil side, and the kind-hearted Coola also has his hands stained with blood, so it is really difficult to write a fanfic. I think the original work shows a world of passionate adventure for young people. The so-called youthful nature and innocent heart are reflected in many people in the original work. Therefore, I hope that the author's world of hunters is also like this. In this way, I think it is loyal to the original work.

First of all, the incident caused by that senior sister at the beginning, to be honest, the most eye-catching thing is not the protagonist, but the senior sister and the infatuated disciple of the master. Even in the end, the disciple of the master was willing to give up the opportunity to go out and have a career in the small town for the sake of the senior sister. It can be said that this can become a story, it doesn't matter if there is a protagonist or not. Second, in the hunter exam, another idol singer came, and then a mentally retarded teammate was arranged. I am not saying that it must be a stud, but there is no need to add a male partner every time the female partner is described, and then arrange for them to fall in love over time. This book says that darkness should not be dark, but light should not be bright. It feels messy and indifferent.

The general setting is okay, but there are many problems with the details and the plot of the book. The author probably left it alone after writing it, without checking his book. There are a lot of obvious logical problems in the book. For example, in order to promote the plot and reduce the intelligence of the characters, the characters do things that are not in line with the judgment of normal people. Another example is that the author set up a person with abilities that can reduce 95% of damage, but the protagonist used one or two tons of power to defeat him. The author probably did not calculate the damage after reduction. The Hunter comic has everyone in it, except for the mentally retarded. The telekinesis ability is a wonderful battle between intelligence and reaction. The protagonist of this book is obviously set to be quick-witted, but he is often forcibly reduced by the author to adapt to the plot. You can imagine the intellectual level of the entire book. This may not be a problem for other fandoms, but if the hunter fandom has a halo of wisdom, I think it will be at least half as interesting.

The writing style is just like that. The key is that I just wrote a fanfic without looking at Hunter carefully, which resulted in many inexplicable bugs.

I feel like this book has been nourished to death 😰

There is a bug. There is a big gap between Nen and Nen in the anime. Not only is it a bonus to strength, speed, but also defense. A piece of paper can be extremely hard, and it also has mental shock, etc. The protagonist is physically strong, but in the anime Rikiya had 12 tons of strength before he learned Nen. It is also very difficult to face Nen. It is unscientific for the protagonist to defeat those with Nen abilities in the martial arts club. He was beaten several times.

There are many people with Chinese-style first and last names. I wonder if you have a reliable name?

It can be seen that the author is trying very hard to tell a good story, but the writing style is a flaw and needs to be improved...

It will be more enjoyable to read if you add some original works. Write something more special. If you want to read it, write it casually without making sense, such as operating rice flour and operating fire and wind time. In the original novel, Xiaojie and the others are too watery, they are like ants fleeing for safety, and so are their blood-red eyes. Is there an S on the A-level brigade? Who rated it? Are there any thieves guild horses? I think it's useless for a spider to have eyes, maybe it's a mission. It's impossible for Blood-Red Eyes to be so powerful without enemies. The auction is revenge. Hope to bring you some different ideas. Come on

After reading more than 30 chapters, I felt that the writing was weird and the whole story was awkward. Moreover, it felt like the author didn't read the original work very much. Anyway, for me, the gap between the setting and the comics is quite big.

Bring the system (Gourmet Cells), abandon the book

Speaking of blood massacre, why are there so many masters of telekinesis in a small city? According to the protagonist's ability to defeat the brigade Maggie and the twelve earthly branches before, even if he is not the top expert, he is at least a first-class master, right? Anyone from any bird firm can compete with him on a par, and in the end he can win by having a blast. Are masters so worthless? According to the hunter's setting, telekinesis users are very rare, and not everyone is qualified to become a telekinesis user. Most people with telekinesis are not even proficient in the four major skills

In the Hunter World, you just wander around without learning how to pronounce it. You don't even know how you're going to die.

The key is that he is not from the dark stream, or he is devoted to cultivating the strength-oriented sect, which is very disappointing.

Doesn't the protagonist know about hunters? I didn't expect that it was Nian who ate it. Are you forcing your IQ and slowing down your rhythm?

Gourmet Hunter has been written down, and now it has nothing to do with food. Your introduction is copied from others, and it also follows the food. I'm afraid it's poisonous.

In terms of strength, Hisoka's captain Shiba and his son are about the same (at the auction), and Geba's side is much stronger than Nobunaga's. The president may be stronger. And Jin came out in the middle. Look at what he is riding. Gon ten years later has such strong Nian, and Killua's brother is born with