Immortal War Mage

After only six chapters, I confessed directly. Please, after all, I am a working person and a novel reader. It's really embarrassing. I also missed the temptation and charm spells.

When I started reading this book, it made me feel a little bit like reading a Japanese light novel. It was much more comfortable than the popular Long Ao Tianwen at some point. Then the characters of the protagonist and others are quite likable. This is the main reason why I like this book. I have been following this book when it was less than 500,000, and then I thought about fattening up. When I came back to read it recently, I found that it seemed to be tj, but I really felt that the author had no choice. After all, it is already very impressive that he could continue to write 100,000+ with this score. This book does have some problems with its settings, logic and plot design. After all, it is understandable for a new author. I believe that these more than one million words are also an exercise for the author's writing skills. Well, I still have a few monthly passes, and they are all given to you, the author, to let the author know that some people still like this book. Another suggestion: if the author is planning to write a book in a similar style (light house) or rewrite this book, you can try a certain cat. Although a certain book has the largest readership, it is not easy for books in this style to stand out (big, two-eyed gods can blind people everywhere). Maybe the readers there will like the author's book more?

I won't say whether the plot is cliche or not, but I actually think it's well written! But I really feel like this is not my thing! At the beginning, there is a girl and a friend, and she is also a benefactor. I also feel that the protagonist starts to lose his IQ in Chapter 46. When he sees a woman, he thinks that he cannot communicate in depth! What the hell is this! Normal people would never think of such a thing, okay? ! (Or do you want to express that the protagonist is gay?) He also revealed his identity and caused trouble! This IQ has dropped so low, it is simply poisonous! Isn't it okay to just make up something like identity? He also always emphasizes that he wants to return to Earth. This kind of old-fashioned goal can only be mentioned once or twice. It feels a bit poisonous to talk about it so much!

"A Different History of the Human Race", see how the down-and-out human race [breaks free] from the enslavement of the elves? How to trample the former mortal enemy--orcs underfoot? How to stand out in a continent full of hundreds of ethnic groups? How to stand up against the Orc Empire and the Elf Royal Court? How to break through the three-legged confrontation and become the hegemon? The fusion of hope and persistence, the collision of wisdom and strength, everything is in "A Different History of Human Race"...

It's normal for online novels to have many shortcomings, but the wise behavior of a protagonist telling all his secrets to a mage he just met is really intolerable!

It feels weird. I traveled to the magical world and didn't have any ideas. There are some problems with the writing. It doesn't arouse the readers' emotions. It feels dull.

The book is good. Come on, Master!

After reading this book, I was thinking that if it was a legendary dark wizard who wanted to take away the protagonist's body, he would first drive the protagonist crazy and make him an idiot and then take over his body.

Good material. It can be hung by the pipa bone. Inexhaustible undead materials. I believe that the protagonist's classmate is willing to never kill people and exhume corpses for material. (Protagonist: I am willing to work for the future of the undead system!) Starting today

Uh, this opening arrangement is ill-advised. Don't always think about being new and different... It's poisoning you half to death

I hope the author will work hard, I really like the style of this book

There are various imbalances in the early stage. Every time the protagonist encounters an equal person, he will win by luck or simply die! I want to know what this dual cultivation of magic and martial arts with infinite life is used for! You know clearly that you have tenacious vitality, but why don't you trade your injuries for your life? Various bugs seen

After reading the second chapter, I gave up the trap decisively, it was poisonous

It looks weird, each paragraph is so long, it makes people's eyes tingle when they read it, so I will save it first and read it later! ! L

Not bad to watch. One good thing about this book is that the lifespan of people in the world of cultivation is the same as our current lifespan. I am really speechless. Look at the air in our real world. So speechless.

This book was written in 2017, but it took me back to a dream ten years ago, when the mercenary magic academy had all the mages, and both magic and martial arts, hahaha

I read the beginning... His master is so good, I will definitely not be able to resist him when I meet him! My profession is a mage, and my apprentice is from time travel.

A suggestion to the author: The death scythe can be disassembled into 2 small scythes and turned into short weapons, which can be used in a small range (for details, see the game: Darksiders 2, Death Weapons)

It feels pretty good. Let's continue and take a look.

Why not die once and be resurrected perfectly?