War of the Worlds

Research shows that when people read words, they will automatically arrange the words in order. Believe it or not, if you read this sentence again, you will find that the whole word is messed up.

Let's count how many people have been deceived by advertisements.

I came in immediately after seeing the advertisement. I didn't expect that the author had already traveled through time. May the Lord bless you.

Haha, I was also attracted by the time travel advertisement, so I just treat it as supporting the new book.

Great God, take me with you! ?

Such as title 111111111

If you have already crossed over, a 6 will be deducted from the bottom.

I heard that it can be transmitted across Vietnam, so I gave it a try. People have to be superstitious. What if it comes true?

Congratulations brother on the signing｜The appointment is made, come on!

I have traveled back in time! What the author said is true. I came to the world of One Piece, went on an adventure with Luffy, and saw the cute Chopper, the beautiful Nami and Robin, and Sanji and the others. Do you want to know my specific experience? Please watch "One Piece: The Magician"

I've read them all, waiting for updates. I really like the storyline behind it.

The writing is too forced, and the various characters in the book are too insubstantial. It feels like the protagonist is playing a stand-alone game, and the writing is not bad. It might as well be a new urban book, in which a young man takes an entertainment film system to a parallel world to film rejection routines. . .

It's okay, the subject matter is good, but it's not refreshing enough. I hope for better. I support you.

The writing style is okay, but the author shouldn't rush to force the setting! Take your time, don't rush, your world view is very grand, and it will be better if you spread it out slowly step by step. The first few chapters were painful to read. Recommended to you, keep going.

You have made every one of the common mistakes that newcomers make. If you are not a master, don't write Zhezi. The introduction is unclear, the goal of the opening chapter is unclear, and the three golden chapters are not interesting 😅

The advertisement is quite attractive, but I don't know what it is after reading this introduction.

The introduction mentioned the background, but it didn't identify who I was. This copy of Tribal God has been written by many great gods, so you can copy it. It's been more than ten chapters, and the protagonist hasn't even encountered a single dramatic conflict. Let's change it, otherwise we still won't be able to sign the contract.

I feel that the author's book has a narrative problem, and there is nothing wrong with the story itself.

Like you, I am also an author, but the only slight difference is that I have published three books, two of which have been signed. However, there are many things in the world, and I have to cut off three thousand threads. In the end, each book is about 10,000 words, which is a bit embarrassing. I don't know if you can see it. As a bookworm for more than ten years and a novice author, I think I can judge more objectively. First of all, I affirm your persistence, but I really want to say that your book is too tiring to read. You seem to have been trying to outline a macroscopic world background, but the description of the plot is very little and almost very light, just like a person practicing calligraphy who has not even mastered pencil calligraphy. I have a suggestion, you can think more about the plot. On the other hand, a book should be lighthearted where it should be lighthearted and funny where it should be funny. The whole text will look very tiring if it has the same tone. The last book should have an itch that makes readers feel itchy after reading it. For example, Dou Po Xiao Yan was divorced and everyone was itchy after reading it and wanted to continue reading. This is also the most important thing in writing novels. If you grasp the ticklish point well, you will be able to grasp the readers well.

Collect it first. It doesn't matter if you are still more famous every day. When you are not famous, it is easy to rush to the street. After all, there are so many online articles and the competition is quite fierce. If you don't read this one, there are others. Gradually, of course, just leave it on the bookshelf and read it when you have free time. Maybe when you want to clear the bookshelf, I will delete it if it doesn't impress you. . . I think when you advertise, you should have several updates a day. You don't need ten updates or anything, three updates is enough. Some people like me come in because of advertising. If you can use updates to keep people, then if you sign a contract in the future, this may become a subscription. It is the same as doing business. You use products or services to convince customers. Of course, the number of updates you have every day is natural. And. . . New books are updated every day 🙂, which makes me wonder whether you have done a good job in preparation. Shouldn't the framework and other things be decided before publishing? Moreover, the new book is updated every day. It is very doubtful whether it was written and updated on the same day, or whether it was just an idea and a train of thought when writing this book, and then it was written and published. . . . There are no manuscripts saved at all, so regardless of whether anyone pays attention to it, you will probably get lost in the public eye. I'm not a senior black guy, I just saw the ads coming in. . . I found out that it had only been updated so little, and I started writing it more than ten days ago, so these thoughts came to my mind. . . Maybe it sounds uncomfortable to you, so delete it.

After reading Chapter 6, tell me your feelings. Qianqiu's writing style is really good, unique, and very interesting to read. In terms of writing, there is really nothing to say except the story. As far as the story is concerned, Qianqiu's book is definitely not bad, but it is really not an attractive type! Why do you say that? This is a setting derived from Qianqiu. The protagonist of this book, the master, is so awesome! As soon as he debuted, he had magical powers. As soon as I left home, I immediately became a god. In the first six chapters, it seems that although the story has been progressing, the readers are watching passively and there is no direction of being affected. In other words, the readers have no sense of expectation and can watch it or not! What is a sense of expectation? In "Ethereal Journey", the protagonist enters a new world for the first time and does not understand the situation, so he lies in the desert pretending to be unconscious. He is rescued by a group of mortals and then follows him. At this time, my sense of expectation is when will the identity of the protagonist, a cultivator, be discovered? In particular, this group of people boasted, but did not know that the protagonist had magical powers. They looked down on the protagonist and often criticized the protagonist. The feeling of showing off in front of an expert made people full of expectations. But when the cultivators fought and the caravan was affected, a group of people were frightened. The protagonist showed his power. One moment, he was despised, and the next moment he was worshiped as a god. Although this feeling is routine, it fluctuates and touches people's hearts! Looking back at this book, at the end of each chapter, are there any exciting points? At the end of "Flying Fox in the Snow Mountain", the protagonist and Miao Renfeng both fall off a cliff and are caught in the air. Either one can kill the other, and the opportunity for both parties to clarify their misunderstanding - the heroine Miao Ruolan is on the way. How will the plot develop? Will both of them die, or one of them? Or... Just when the readers were expecting it, the story came to an abrupt end! Relatively speaking, Qianqiu, where are your expectations? The protagonist is too smooth, has no disadvantages, has no big enemies, has not been involved in the whirlpool, has not fallen in love with the girl, and has not experienced any adventures. The story progresses smoothly. If these exciting moments are in the future, then first of all we must ensure that readers can see that time... The old plot can be renovated, but the smooth story is boring. As for Qianqiu's novel setting, with all due respect, those who have been reading books for more than three years have read every setting... What's more, in the first six chapters, Qianqiu did not use the story to reflect settings that were beyond those of other novels. What great god is not as convincing as an incredibly huge footprint in the boundless wilderness, bigger than a first-tier city? In fact, the protagonist has just joined Fuso and has a good opportunity. It is in the process of becoming the god of that ethnic group that it becomes more complicated. For example, rescue this ethnic group. Or when showing divine power, it will shock the clan. The protagonist, who was originally a god, was too calm, which also made the identity of a god worthless. I remember that in a novel, the protagonist was enshrined, and that novel and uncomfortable feeling made me yearn for it! To sum up, the writing in this book is first-rate, the story has no obvious shortcomings, and the logic is smooth. However, it has little ups and downs, a weak sense of expectation, and insufficient elements. I guess from now on I will either fight or practice... It's just a bit of a shallow opinion, but it's wrong. Don't be angry. After all, it was you who showed me...

I came here after seeing the author's advertisement. Compared to the author, I am luckier. I signed the contract as soon as I started writing, but I am at a loss now. Because I didn't have much idea at the beginning, I just wrote it as soon as I thought of it. As a result, it's now difficult to move forward. The road to Shu is difficult! However, let's work together! But I also hope that everyone will read my book. If you have any good suggestions, you can speak freely. Let us write this book together and travel through the revival of the late Han Dynasty. I am waiting for everyone to correct me!

Just rush to the author's inspirational advertisement 🤤 Save it to the top 😄 If you have a monthly vote at the end of the month, I will vote for you 🌹 🌹

I feel that the quality of your book does not meet the contract standard.

The stall is too big. The writing style cannot handle such a large stall. You should start from the small world. If I update, the new book should be at least three chapters or 9k a day. I just read a book in the past two days. The stalls are huge but the author controlled it very well. There is a book with the same stall size. The author is a newcomer but the author is very diligent. Ten updates happen at every turn. Although there are some loopholes, it is over. I won't say the title of the book. I'm not here to promote books. Collected first.

Gather people together and see if we can set up a book club

We don't want the Holy Mother, let's hold it high, we don't want the heroine