Slytherin's Newest Student

To be honest, if I were in Harry Potter, I would really be addicted to magic and couldn't help myself. The plot and all that. At worst, I would leave the UK early, maybe I would tease Hermione. What a crap plot, a crap threesome, a crap Voldemort, as long as there is magic...

The only drawback of this book is that the heroine is Hermione. . . Really, a good book is ruined just because of this. .

After reading it, I can only say that I am tired. Why do most of the fanfics focus on Tengu Granger? ? ? Vomited. . I'm afraid you've only watched the movie but not the original work, right? I'm afraid what you are licking is not Granger but Watson. . . . . It's really heart-wrenching to suddenly have a "kiss" while watching it well. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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What moved me about the original Harry Potter was his adventure, friendship, companionship, and spirit of sacrifice and dedication, but there was absolutely no plot of love. There is obviously so much to write about, so why do we have to add a romance drama to it? And it's another plot of kneeling down and licking Hermione to remove the CP!

At the beginning, I just tried to persuade someone to quit, as if the world is no longer around. Without magic talent, I can't live. I'm disgusting. Who is this? How long ago was this written in a white paper?

The emotional scenes are the most delicate and delicate I have ever seen in HP fanfiction Not slanderous, not bragging I really like Hermione in this book. I really hope the author can make more chapters. I will definitely order all of them.

Pig's Foot stupidly sent himself to the Dark Lord to make a deal with him, but he found the Dark Lord's notes without any precautions, and then arranged for a supporting character to be killed, so that Pig's Foot could play black magic without any burden and have a reason to become evil. This is forcing readers to feed Xiang. It is better to just make the pig's feet black from the beginning.

By the way, it's another seven-month hiatus. . . I wonder what's wrong with the author? In addition, I feel like I could kick Hermione out, but it would be of no use. The protagonist is a chaotic evil type after all, and there will be no good results with a woman who is a lawful justice type and has some leftist tendencies. A common problem among HP fans is that the heroine is useless. She either only blushes, is only tsundere, or is just a cunt. I suggest the author make the heroine more useful.

The writing was too radical from the beginning to the middle. I felt that the protagonist's strength had surpassed that of Dumbledore, and he could dominate Hogwarts. Today, we would drag these ones out and hang them out, and tomorrow we would drag out those ones and gouge out their bones. It was too cruel.

Hermione has a pair of A and there are so many protagonists, but even if she touches them, her own is probably bigger than Hermione's.

. I couldn't stand it at first, but when I received the notice, someone from the school would explain it, because you are from a Muggle family, and it turned out not to be, so it was very funny.

Death from poison. . . The main plot of the plot is very strange and poisonous, and the protagonist is smart every day. The original memory brought by time travel can be used by the author if he wants to use it, and he can forget it if he doesn't want to use it. It is really convenient.

This book is one of the highest quality in Harry Potter fan fiction. The descriptions are vivid and the details are in place. The characterization of the original characters, especially Snape, is so well written 😁. Magic lies in creating miracles, which is very different from some fan fiction that only knows how to divide levels.

After watching Fantastic Beasts, I feel that it is not the same world as the main story of Harry Potter at all. The power gap is a bit big. Many wizards in Fantastic Beasts can still change their appearance without using their wands. . .

In the end, it's still the eunuch. Alas, it's a good book.

It's true that if the protagonist of HP is not Tengu Granger, people will die, right?

The writing is quite good, that's why the protagonist believes whatever the Dark Lord says🤔

I have basically read all the Harry Potter fanfics with over 500,000 words, but this one left the deepest impression on me. The emotional scenes are so well written, and the emotional portrayal of the characters is really impeccable. It's really a pity that the ending is such that I can start a new book with a single heroine named Hermione, because of your portrayal of Hermione. The painting is really lovable, and I also like the quiet, strong, and brave Miss Beaver you wrote. Although her appearance is not amazing, through your description, she does not have the arrogant and overbearing look in other works. She has a gentle and considerate look. Combined with all her other qualities, it is really fascinating.

Author, please come back soon, I really can't stand it anymore. After watching this, I can't stand watching anything else. This book doesn't start out invincible, the emotions are written superbly, the fights are exciting, and the protagonist has a great personality. I beg the author to come back and continue writing if he feels like it

The protagonist always makes trouble for himself, outwits his teammates and kills his teammates. He takes the initiative to resurrect the boss but is afraid of the boss, and then worries unfoundedly...

Running account, this magic is too easy to learn, and some details are not grasped properly. For example, there is no limit to the exchange of Muggle currency for galleons. After all, it is very easy for wizards to obtain Muggle currency! The protagonist can't have that many Galleons to buy a magic book, it's too casual

If I really travel to the world of Harry Potter, I study hard and learn magic. When Voldemort is resurrected during the Goblet of Fire, I will directly take the magic book and various props and run to China. I don't believe he can catch up to China. Set a small goal for myself and live to be 600 years old.

Odin, the consciousness of the planet has arrived.

In fact, I think the writing is quite good, and some minor flaws in the story setting are innocuous. The pace of the story is ok, but the main character darkened a bit too quickly 😂 It's a pity that it ended poorly in the end

The protagonist who defies heaven, yy is too serious

I really like Hermione as the heroine, but some comments say they don't like Hermione as the heroine. I can only say that everyone has their own preferences.

The part where the wind blows and the clouds roll and the clouds relax is very good.

Harry, who was written in the fifth grade, lost his wits and promoted the plot just like the second-year protagonist.

It's an inexplicable ending, but it's really well written. It's a pity that this ending