Sky City Lord

The identity of his predecessor was unreasonable. A second generation could not become a grandiose and became a loser. Moreover, his shrewd parents did not leave any backup plan and did not prepare anything for their useless son. Think about it, Zhier is more like a mother.

Let me tell you my thoughts after reading it. I lost interest after reading the beginning. A city of 1,000 people, 200 soldiers, haha. On average, one out of five people is a soldier. There is no brain at all at the beginning, and it doesn't feel very good. There is a problem with the worldview from the beginning. Human beings can continue to expand the sky city even if they lose the land. The number of sky cities keeps increasing. I don't understand. Where do the resources come from? The subject matter is very good. It is very similar to the recent anime "Spirit Cage", in which humans escape to a lighthouse. It is a pity that the author is not good enough for such a good subject matter.

At the end, I suddenly realized that this is a eunuch novel? ? ? Did you actually finish writing the book? ? ? I can only block the author silently... Goodbye

Does anyone still watch the protagonist of Madonna? Not even the rebels will be killed! He also said that killing is the last resort. Author, you are really good. You are so loving.

I don't know what happens next. Anyway, I said I couldn't stand it after reading the first part. Forget about the previous part being toxic, there is still a large part describing mechas and stuff. And isn't this a lord novel?

No matter how you say it, it feels weird. Your novel should describe a re-established civilization after the end of the world. Why is there such a thing as nobility? Why do they enjoy their dominant position? This newly established order should be based on strength and ability. After all, humans who want to survive will not follow incompetent rulers. Why do you want to salute the aristocracy and the capable demon hunters as nobles? This is such a weird view of society, completely illogical!

As a city lord, your mentality is still that of a loser. You only feel friendly when your personal maid calls you by your name. Your IQ is overdue. Where is your identity and your relationship is good? Which of his subordinates in the past dynasties dared to call the emperor by his name?

The settings are pretty awesome, really! It's the rhythm of the story that's really problematic. It's too scattered and makes people unable to follow the main line. It feels like this book has no outline, so I gave up after reading Chapter 30. I don't know what your subsequent writing will be like, and maybe it's not good, but it's useless. If you can't catch everyone in the three golden chapters, it will be difficult to achieve results.

I have read dozens of chapters. To be honest, this book is not my favorite lord novel. There are too few details and background descriptions. Most of them are talking about battle armor. Let's put it this way, the dozens of chapters I have read are just mecha novels covered with a layer of lord film, which is a bit inconsistent.

The subject matter is okay, the author...! The protagonist has no characteristics, no personality, no ideals! If the protagonist is not eliminated by the end of this book, it is your fault, the author! There is no problem with the architectural background, but the writing is too "empty" and the writing is too dead!

Let me guess if it is a modern magic modification... Rune tank! ! !

Did the author once write a book called The Devil's Doomsday Walk?

This book is toxic and not recommended...

When you look at the setting, there is Rhea, the devil can't fly?

If nothing else, author, how did you come up with the idea of ​​​​a battleship cannon with a range of 100 meters? There is no accuracy after 100 meters.

The most exciting thing to write about is Eunuch, a talented person

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Chapter 58: It's best not to mention what the future will be like. It's a very old way of writing.

I actually finished writing it. I stopped updating it when I saw Demon Invasion.

Opening a new book! There's no end to old books!

As soon as you look at the introduction, you can tell that something can go wrong.

Ljlj, I can't see a little bit, I'm drunk

I didn't expect the author to write a new book again, I'll give it a thumbs up

Detective Magic is still very good-looking

Detective Magic is really good to watch, but it's too short.

I remember there was a game like this but I couldn't find it. I want to play it. If the author knows about it, please tell me.

His father's city is a city of 30,000 people. The armor cannot be from the first generation, right?

The author's last book was very good🤭

City in the Sky, Flying Stone. Very similar to Hayao Miyazaki's Castle in the Sky

Since the city has a very small population, why should criminals be killed instead of being punished with hard labor? What a waste of manpower