Xiuxian Family Evergreen Road

Let's put it this way, the family's descendant who is expected to have a golden elixir in the future has gone down the mountain at the age of 15, without even a foundation to protect him secretly. . .

Fellow Taoists, let's talk about the immortal cultivating family in your heart!

It's almost 40,000 words. Although the writing is not good, I will keep at it (๑ت๑).

If any Taoist friends are interested in playing a guest role, you can leave a message to Chuxin. The format is name + gender + personality + background, etc. It can be detailed or brief. I will try my best to satisfy everyone. You can choose from three camps: positive, neutral, and negative! ❛‿˂̵✧

What is the protagonist's golden finger? In addition, the family is developed through the efforts of a group of people. It is not supported by the protagonist alone. You can write more characters of the same generation and elders. Judging from the current protagonist's family, there are no outstanding characters. I know that the story written by Taiqiu Shang is better. The entire family is an old yin, but it is a pity that it is unfinished.

I've read two pages. This book is too embarrassing. From birth, there are visions like purple energy coming from the east, and the author's very awkward internal monologue when he was just born, and then to Newton in the second chapter. There are too many flaws. It's not easy for a new author, so I won't criticize it.

We encountered such a formidable enemy in the early stage and were about to collapse.

I read three chapters and the writing is too colloquial.

Family literature is a big trap. Why are you in this? I'm speechless.

Fellow Taoists, what articles on family cultivation of immortality have you ever read?

Some fellow Taoists don't understand why Pig's Feet calls Cheng Yundao his senior brother. Let me explain: Cheng Yundao is a disciple of Xie Jiayi, that is, a disciple with a foreign surname. Pig's Feet was practicing with Xie Jiayi, so there was nothing wrong with calling him "Senior Brother", and disciples with other surnames would not rank with disciples of the same family. No family would do this, so it was reasonable to call him "Senior Brother". (•‾̑⌣‾̑•)✧˖

Average, I feel like the description of the main character is a bit off.

I hope this is a novel with a fairy-tale spirit and a righteous outlook on life!

It's well written, and the starting point is okay. It doesn't feel like one person is dragging the whole family along.

The author shouldn't write it like a fairy tale under the skin of his family. That's how he writes it.

I have seen the rise of the Shen family, its slow rise, and the plot is reasonable and straightforward. The early stage of "Above Mount Taiqiu" was good, and the climax in the middle stage was very good. At that time, it could be said that it was the seedling of the fairy grass of the family. Unfortunately, in the later stage, the family did not develop the golden elixir stage. The author wanted to write the artistic conception of Xuan Zhi You Xuan Di! As a result, I couldn't write a good text, and I often stopped updating. (Personally, I think that it is the last state of this book to write about a mysterious and indescribable state. The book will be finished soon. It is too difficult to write about this state of not realizing the Tao or realizing the Tao.)

The author doesn't want eunuchs anymore, come on!

I am an immortal cultivator and play with swords, so I really can't complain. The main character is not the golden spirit root. Isn't the wood-fire spirit root's supernatural powers and magic weapon flow good-looking? It's a bit new to get a Nine Dragons Divine Fire Shield, etc. I actually vomited when I saw the sword.

Come on! Mutual investment voting in "Wanmenjie"! Will definitely come back!

Fellow Taoists, please be sure to support your original intention and pursue your studies! ! ! Thank you very much

Um, handsome boy, come on, we will definitely take off.

That Lu Junsheng, just let him die. Why keep him? Let him become nourishment directly! Are you afraid of not having any opponents in the world of cultivation? Looking at the diaphragm in panic

It's well written, the writing is smooth, and I'm not tired of reading it.

It's rare for a genius to become an immortal! Support. I hope the protagonist can be nicer to his mother. At least let her enjoy the best of mortal life.

Come on, don't make the plot cliche, write about the vicissitudes of the world of cultivating immortals

Sword cultivation plus alchemy cultivation and immortality cultivation are the standard configuration, alas.

It's a single heroine, right? It won't be multiple heroines, right?

It seems like a novel about eunuchs - the Immortal Cultivation Family cannot drift, such as Sifang City and the sea area. I suspect it is a small account.

Quick support. Just a little too little.

It seems that there are two problems in several chapters. One is the size of the map. The proportion of the sea area where the protagonist is located is too small, with a radius of ten thousand miles, which is too small for immortal cultivators. One hundred thousand miles is a reasonable range. At the same time, the size of the island, one hundred and forty miles long and ninety miles wide, is actually the size of a medium-sized county. There are nine hundred thousand, mortal population. It is very difficult to feed such a population at this size. So the size of the island should also be multiplied by ten. In the world of Xianxia, ​​no map is too big. This is determined by the world itself. There is also the division of realms of cultivation. After transforming into a god, you can transcend tribulations and become an immortal. There is no need to practice the Mahayana of virtual integration. This is no problem. This setting can actually change the transformed spirit into the primordial spirit, which is more reasonable. There is a story about Linquan Hermit's Immortality. The setting is to practice Qi, build foundation, Zifu, Jindan, Yuanying, Yuanshen, and then become a true immortal. The author can take a rough look and learn from it. Although it has been discontinued, it is still very good. In the early stage, the family was behind the sect. There is also the flight speed. It is best to calculate it yourself. The speed of high-speed rail is about 300 kilometers per hour. The speed of civil aviation is about 1,000 kilometers per hour. The speed of sound of a fighter is 1,224 kilometers per hour. The speed of sound doubles several times. The higher the realm of immortal cultivators, the faster they fly, but no matter how you practice Qi, you still need to fly at a speed of 300 per hour.