Lich Tribe

I read a little bit of the front part and a little bit of the back part. It's just a running story. Even elementary school students can write better than you. It's so funny. The writing style is like someone who has never read a book, and the plot is like shit.

Only by learning can we make progress. If we are closed to the outside world and do not learn new knowledge or new schools, we should make progress with the times. Instead, I complain that times have changed, that people don't like what I write, and that I can't sign contracts. It's better to find the reason from yourself. Writer's Assistant has so many great classes and so many guides for beginners to get started. Take a look at it and learn with an open mind. Signing up is not difficult.

The book has been blocked for six years. Doesn't it mean that your brain has been blocked for six years? I have written millions of words on other websites, but I still can't write a running account like yours. Brother, look for your own problems. If you keep writing like this, it will have no effect if you finish it with a million words.

Why is it that the author is always asked to come on, but no one points out the problem? Generally, except for great authors, they will not write such long paragraphs. Long paragraphs will make readers very tired.

After reading this introduction, I understood everything. Stubborn and old-fashioned, good for nothing, the whole story is a running account

First of all, the introduction should be divided into paragraphs Secondly, words that need special explanation such as monster realm and wilderness should not pop up all at once The name change in the introduction should also be inexplicable Don't just introduce the setting at the beginning, you have to talk about the event

It's a running account that even AI can't write.

I have been reading and writing for five years, and I have never given up and persisted. It is very strong, and I admire it.

Dude, your introduction is just like a tongue twister, what the hell, it makes no sense.

Let me give you some advice from a reader's perspective. Your subject matter is niche, and your name and introduction don't capture the key points, making people less interested in reading. Needless to say, your writing style is poor! Gotta practice.

Being able to write more than 1 million is also a talent, and there is no derogatory meaning.

It's amazing, I think some guys who don't write very well get signed, but my eldest brother was ignored by the editors. Maybe I'm not worthy of touching their reasoning, but I admire you for not being knocked down. Come on, author.

Come scold me, stop scolding him It depends on what you write. Most of them are business articles, which are about observing the market. What you write may be what you are good at, but it is definitely not what you like. After all, one is fishing. If you catch something, let it go. It is entertainment. And those who make money from this are fishing, which is different in nature.

To be honest, I just read three chapters. From a reader's perspective, the setting description at the beginning is too boring, and the third-person narration in the main text is too rigid. If you only focus on your own narration and ignore the reader's intention, it will be difficult to attract attention and retain people. If you persist, you will need to make changes. It is best to listen to the suggestions in the comment area. I hope you can achieve good results and I would like to encourage you.

Brother, you already have 240,000 words, why haven't you signed a contract yet?

My bean is so beautiful. Please update another chapter. If you don't write one or two million words, you will be ashamed of my support for you.

Friends, why don't you listen to my advice? You have given me a lot of advice 😅

I haven't signed it yet, but I can still write so fiercely...

How is this book? Is there Shennong?

So strong, oh my god [no derogatory meaning]

Aren't you going to sign this, brother?

The author, you are so awesome. The novel you wrote in 2017 has not yet been completed. 😳😳