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The more I read, the more interesting it becomes! The fresh and interesting story of a mortal's journey to the west gives us a different soul impact. There are no gods, Buddhas and demons, but it has a more fascinating plot. Looking forward to the next chapter! Don't worry, come on!

This time today is very exciting and powerful. Take the small reward. Keep working hard and write well. I guess it will become popular!

I was attracted by the book list, it's really good-looking

The opening chapter is very attractive, come on＾0＾~

80,000 Words is a bit short, so let's take care of it first (^_^)

Let's join the Tang Expeditionary Army to march westward and make the entire Eurasian continent surrender to the Tang Dynasty😁

The name of the protagonist is really a big advantage, Xiang Gong... Mr. Xianggong...

I've seen through it. Let's uncover the mystery. That white shadow is the little white dragon, right? When I first saw the flash of love between the male protagonist and Xiao Bailong, I felt it was very abrupt. Was the foreshadowing already laid at that time? Moreover, author, is this arrangement really good for you?

Eh? It's been updated, which is a bit of a surprise!

I like this book. It feels very warm and enjoyable. I must recommend it!

Although the reviews are mixed, I think the pictures in the book are just a pastime, and they are all too realistic and not fun! It's well written, I love reading it, but it's so slow that I can't get enough of it!

I have a question. Now that I have read Chapter 16, I don't know what will happen next. The most obvious thing so far is that some details that should be mentioned in the article are not mentioned and are skipped directly. The writing is a bit confusing. It seems that I have to read a paragraph several times and then speculate on the author's writing intention, which is very uncomfortable. As an author, of course you know what you want to write and what you want to say, but readers don't know. This is the ability to tell stories. You have to let readers know clearly what you want to say. You can't write whatever you want. You have to treat yourself as someone who doesn't know the story, and write it on the premise that he can understand it. Also, the content is not clear enough. It would be good to simply tell the story of Mortal Journey to the West. There is no need to rely on the system to force the development of the plot. You can put more effort into the fun and storytelling of Mortal Journey to the West and read it as an alternative historical novel. From the current point of view, the system has not highlighted its supposed function at all. Although it will definitely be of great use in the future, this is equivalent to the disconnection of the clues before and after, which is very abrupt. Even if the system is not written, it is easy for the protagonist to obtain what he should have through other things. Either write with emphasis on the system, be more refreshing, and highlight the capabilities and functions of the system. There should be less unnecessary plots. After all, the plot is a bit awkward at the moment, the characters' dialogues are a bit too cheesy, and the thinking patterns of some people, including the protagonist, are a bit middle-of-the-road and exaggerated. The above are some personal suggestions. They just put forward some ideas for improvement. The author can just be happy with it if it doesn't look good. Everything else is actually fine, and the ideas are quite novel, but the novelty at the beginning is not there anymore. Overall it's pretty good

On a rainy day, I can't sleep and have to go to work 😢

Recommended by Duan Xiaorong, passing by Liuzhao

What the hell is that prairie princess? She obviously thinks the heroine is Ao Yu.