Revolution in Dimension

Let me talk about the update. Starting tomorrow, unless there are special circumstances, there will be one update from 11 to 12 o'clock, and two updates from 7 to 8 o'clock. If it breaks through 30 in one day, how about additional updates? 🪖

Why are updates so slow? ! ! ! !

Whoever reads this book screams! ?

No, it's not easy to see a Nier author continuing to update.

In fact, the plot of Nier has been continued from the games several generations ago. The man who thought he saved the world actually caused all human beings to become completely extinct after thousands of years. All plot branches ended in tragedy. This is no one else.

I feel like Miss 2B's image in my mind has collapsed. . .

That... The author needs to practice his writing more. There are many loopholes in it and it looks very awkward. Also, I would like to give some suggestions to the author: 1. What route does this novel take? Should I take it easy and be funny, or upgrade to save the world? I feel that this book is a bit funny and lighthearted now, because it has not yet written about the feeling of sadness and loneliness. If a normal person comes to a world where all human beings are dead, and sees the previous human buildings, even if he does not say it, he will definitely miss it in his heart, right? But the protagonist is not at all. Not only is he not sad, he is actually obsessed with the girls and can't extricate themselves?? ! The psychological activities of the protagonist here are inexplicably omitted. 2. Control the general direction of the plot. I have only written 16 chapters now, but the protagonist has already arrived at the moon base. It is estimated that he will either go to the earth to play or revive mankind on the moon. But it's only chapter 16 now, so the plot is developing too fast, right? Many things that could be written in detail did not appear at all, such as the protagonist's language problem. Xing Ming, let's just say this name is Chinese. Why do you suddenly know Japanese? Even if he originally spoke Japanese, didn't he find that the language spoken by the android was the same as the language he spoke before he traveled through time? Normal people would want to go back to China at this time, right? After all, it is my motherland. But there is nothing said here, the protagonist is just as he should be, there is no language barrier, he does not miss the original world, he does not lament the demise of mankind, he just plays happily with the girls, and chats with the system from time to time, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

It's over a thousand words, so I can only write them separately... 3. Regarding the issue of personality. In the game, the commander is the boss of the entire Yorha army, but when he meets Hoshimei, he inexplicably turns into a soft girl? Are you still crying in Xing Ming's arms? If you are the boss of an army, will you be a little girl who cries at every turn? It doesn't mean that the commander can't cry. She also has feelings. Of course she can cry, but she can't cry whenever she sees someone. There must be a foreshadowing. For example: "The arrival of Xing Ming helped her a lot. She remembered the days before when she had to command troops to fight even though she knew that all humans were dead, and she had to hide it from her subordinates. Now she met Xing Ming and had support, and then she fell into Xing Ming's arms and cried." 4. Regarding the protagonist's strength. Xing Ming seems to be still an ordinary person on earth, right? There's nothing else but a mecha. Let's not talk about how an ordinary person's physical fitness can operate a mecha. Just think of Xing Ming as the king of special forces? You must know that each of the androids weighs more than 300 kilograms. (I said before that the protagonist is very thin, so let's take it as 100 kilograms.) The weight of one android can support three Xingming, but even under such circumstances, Xingming still hugged the commander and let her fall asleep in his arms? Even if the commander doesn't put his whole body weight on Xing Ming, but his upper body is leaning on Xing Ming's arms, and his lower body is still sitting on the chair, even if he weighs 150 pounds and is leaning on Xing Ming's arms, would you be able to do it if it were you? Xingming weighs 100 pounds, hugs the upper body of the commander who weighs 150 pounds, and lets her sleep in his arms? I can only say that the power of love is unlimited. (Although I still don't understand why I suddenly fell in love with the Commander. We just met not long ago, right? The Commander thought Xing Ming was going to propose to her? How horny is she? Is the author paying back my cold Commander's sister?) Ps: There are really a lot of bugs. Author, you can write an outline and plan the development of the plot. If you still write whatever comes to mind (my personal feeling, please forgive me if not?), I feel that within 300,000 words, those bugs will break out and the book will be ruined. These are some of the suggestions below. I hope the author can see them. I wish the book will get better and better. Above

A bit funny, fun, come on

The first thing: Don't you all like the protagonist's name? If it doesn't work, the author can change it. . . The second thing: people didn't respond well to the original plot, well, okay. The needs of book friends are my writing method, which basically solves the original part quickly and enters the plot of the forest kingdom. The third thing: Let's talk about the next world in advance. The author should think carefully about the world route. The fourth thing: one update today. . . .

The comment area has become more lively, so let me write something for everyone. First of all, I would like to thank my friend Saikyoji because he expressed some of his own opinions. I also replied to him with some of my own opinions. I will refine the book review 😁. Also, as an author, why do I always want votes and collections? In fact, as far as there are no books at all, this book is not bad. In just about 3 days, I have collected about 30 of them, and I also have tickets. But do you know that 6 of the tickets are actually mine (a bit shy), and 2 friends each contributed 10 tickets, plus three book friends each contributed one. One book friend didn't know why it didn't show up. Anyway, thank you, so there are only 5 people who actually contributed tickets.