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Rabbit, are you honestly ready to give up on this book?

Update slowly if you are busy, no water, rabbit!

After finishing the previous work, the world is huge and the setting is very good, but I feel a little uncomfortable. 1. The setting is mentioned repeatedly, which makes reading it feel like being preached repeatedly. . 2. There are no problems in the logic of the story, but in terms of the sense of substitution, I feel that the protagonist should take himself out a little bit more. Things develop in their own way. Things changed by the retroactive agent do not have to be explained first. It is more comfortable to show the differences in the offline development of different worlds and then intersperse the changes. When reading a story this way, I feel like the theater in my mind will be very rich. Whenever something appears in the text, what the protagonist has done will lead to a sudden realization or the feeling that it is indeed the case. 3. There are too many dialogues. The male protagonist and the female protagonist have repeated dialogues with Xiao Zuo to promote the story. It is better to describe the behavior of the characters in the story and guide the readers to imagine the development of the story. Here you can study Trafford Buyers Club (funny). This new book still feels like it has an old problem at the beginning. Although the crazy setting is supplemented by the development of the story, it still feels like it is a bit too crazy. Having said so much, in a nutshell, automatic subscriptions will be made when it is put on the shelves, and there will be recommendation votes. These are the original motivation. If the author can hold back and not go crazy with the settings, I believe that my share of the monthly ticket reward will only be a very small part. After all, the story setting is very good and the writing is not bad either. It was able to be driven from the furious setting without knocking me out. Finally, update quickly, I can't get enough of so many updates. I finished reading this and the previous book yesterday afternoon and this morning, and I feel so bad! ! !