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First of all, the background setting at the beginning of this book is very well written and attractive, at least to the level of a master. But the results were not good. Why? First, the first story is obviously made up of a very cliche movie plot. It is really boring and made me want to sleep. Second, the characterization is poorly written. The opening wanted to highlight that the heroine is a top student, and it was too low-key to use a set of reasoning to show it. I basically guessed the story when I saw the beginning, because the story was so cliche, and the reasoning was so cliché and the story was made so serious, as if it was very powerful, which made me want to laugh. Of course, I have only read a few dozen chapters, and the rest may be really amazing, but I can't stand it anymore. After all, the beginning of the book is well-written, and there are many cesspits like Feilu, so I am too lazy to waste time. As a bookworm for many years, I would like to share my personal insights with the author. A good setting or a good advertisement can make people click on the book, a good story can make people read it, and a good characterization can make people pay to read or even reward it. I plan to try the author's new book, but I don't think that the ability to create characters will improve by leaps and bounds. This is the most difficult thing in novels.

It feels like a refined hope Ling, which is quite interesting.

The usual protagonists are all unique, but this book has many characters, all of whom are interesting.

I just read the first chapter. This Wang Bing has such a strong sense of déjà vu, my grandpa agent?

I still remember that I saw someone advertising this every day in Abnormal Book Reviews. . .

I was shocked! The cover of the book is actually my goddess Tomoora-chan!

This worldview reminds me of the Xiling Empire.

Homura rolled in when she saw the cover. Will it appear in the book?

Watching this in the middle of the night scared me so much that I ran away

I feel like the fight with the left hand is very dramatic.

This seems to be similar to a decryption game,

To the moon Well, this is what I thought of when I saw the name.

Um, I'm feeling dizzy, are you sure this isn't a "How to Be a Backtracker" textbook?

It's okay to imagine, but it's not far enough. Choice means constant bifurcation.

It feels much better than the rhythm of the new book

No, I can't even stand the free chapters.

I came in after reading the recommendation... And found out that I had seen it before...

Where did the idea of ​​a polluted abyss come from? Just a simple and straightforward setting? Or is it because, if the obsessive body is eliminated, some dark energy or other bad things will be produced in the abyss, and these negative things will further harm the empire? Or spawn demons or something. So what is this bad thing? What are the ways to endanger the empire? Can this be explained clearly? Otherwise, just say it in one sentence, and then put in the effort to help a lot of people with obsessions to transcend. This is too great.

A book with connotation needs to be able to withstand loneliness, just wait until the word count comes up!

After reading Chapter 7, I felt like I was seeing Stone Gate + Xiling + Parasitic Beast...

I want to watch the subsequent plot, my heart will burst out of my chest while reading, and my palms will become sweaty.

I just want to ask, uh, why the obsessive bodies can't be eliminated directly and the whole thing is done. Wouldn't it be troublesome to deal with them one by one? Is it because there will be any bad consequences if it is eliminated? . I don't think I saw it mentioned in the article. . On the one hand, it is assumed that the high-dimensional world establishes a film universe to detach obsessive bodies, and on the other hand, the price to be paid for eliminating them is how to measure this. Moreover, the article mentioned that there will be casualties of retroactive personnel in the process of helping the obsessive body, so why help?