Rebirth of the Immortal Supreme

What I am making is a suggestion. Regardless of whether you, the author, delete my comment, I am giving it as a reader. Even if you delete it, please read it carefully. I came here for the label of no heroine, and I can read it as a whole, but. . . Author, can you make the city more reasonable? Although it is a novel, you are not happy with it. I read the whole article and give me two words - embarrassment -. Why are there so many villains in the city, crazy slaps in the face, and you can hit them in places other than the earth. But in the city, it makes people feel embarrassed. Just like popular literature, slap in the face and change the picture to X. In this way, your only interesting point is that you have no heroine. Do you think you can compare with famous authors as you follow the trend? You can't make much money. If you are not for making money, then I have nothing to say. You don't need to read the following. If you are for interest, then I have nothing to say. This subject matter has already appeared. I am just trying to attract people who like this subject as written. However, the style of writing determines whether readers will read it. In other words, one-third of people read this book, which becomes one, and then two-thirds of people read this one. I hope it can be changed to make it more reasonable, even though it is a novel. Advice from a reader who likes stories without heroines (the word count is too long to read 233)

Look at those novels about cultivating immortals. Wang Lin, Han Li, and Zhu Peng don't mention three thousand years, but their experience in thirty years is a hundred times better than yours. Did three thousand years live on a dog? A pig wouldn't be so helpless after three thousand years! In the three thousand years of intrigue and intrigue in the world of immortality, did you survive by being an RBQ?

The grass on the grave is three feet high... How did such a weak-minded and heartless pig's feet survive? Have you lived for three thousand years?

I have been reading pretentious and slap-in-the-face books for many years, and I always feel like it. . . This book is very pretentious. . . There is a feeling of showing off but not pretending. . . Maybe the problem lies in the fact that the main character was written with the idea of ​​being a cannon fodder since he was a child. He looks embarrassed and resigned to his fate. . . But the protagonist doesn't have one? He was just quietly showing off. . . But this looks very strange, and so on. . . It's so realistic that it's not installed, so it's a semi-finished product at best. . . He didn't have the strength to do anything, so he slapped him in the face, and the beating was not pleasant.

The writing is very good. Good luck to the author. I will send you 8 recommendation votes to support no female protagonist.

First, the younger brother of the mayor of a city is a gangster. Still a gangster boss. . . You are going against heaven. Second, from the first chapter to the 28th chapter I read, they were all pretending to be a slap in the face. Is it interesting to forcefully pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger?