Immortal Life

. . . It's actually fantasy. . . The big book list is currently undergoing rectification, and only the small book list will be added for the time being. The small book list is Xianxia. . . 😰

I'm curious, this book has so many chapters, is it just about people and book reviews?

Recommended by booklist reviews, the idea of ​​destiny has been used in other novels. I haven't read it yet. I hope the author will come up with something new.

"Xian Dao Hidden Name" comes to support!

Why are the grades so bad? Are you raising them all?

The setting of destiny is too arbitrary... From metal, wood, water, fire and earth to lustful to mediocre From the five elements to personality to destiny What exactly is destiny?

It's been a long time since I added a bookshelf, and it's rare that the author doesn't have a eunuch...

Collect Collection Collect It would be great if people could live forever, just don't have to live for another thousand years, haha

It's not easy for newcomers to write, so I only have 6 recommendations to show my appreciation.

Drive if you don't agree with each other. "The Trap God Who Created a Copy" is as its name suggests. Let's find out more about it.

Well, I came to check it out after seeing the comments on the book list. Writing new articles is not easy, so the author needs to work hard and update it. (ง •̀_•́)ง After reading it for a while, I had some small opinions that I didn't mind. After reading a few chapters of the article, I actually saw that the author wanted to describe the sect's environment and weak current situation. However, I always felt a little lacking while reading. The mountain scenery and environmental description are not vivid images |･ω･｀). Moreover, for writing such as cultivation and fantasy, you can use a vernacular style of writing, but you have to be careful not to overdo it. Also, the author seems to like to use idioms very much, ⊙▽⊙I can only say that the ones he uses are quite good but there are too many. You can also use other rhetorical techniques! ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ) Finally, come on and update! Press the paw to leave a mark.

It's quite interesting, but I've been a little tired of this type of writing lately, so I'm going to bulk up first.

Author, come out, I want to talk to you.

I have made corrections in response to some readers' pertinent suggestions. The reason is also very simple. It was my first time to write a book, so I really wanted to write something dramatic, so I came up with some modern style language. I thought it was cute, but it turned out to be very serious and miserable. Please forgive me! In addition, I still take time out every day to try my best to finish this book. Next month, that is, at the end of May, this book will be completely finished. No matter whether I will continue to open new books in the future, at least it has fulfilled one of my young and frivolous wishes. That is to finish a book first and write what you want to write. Change and progress are all continuous and gradual. I hope you will have the opportunity to correct me in the future. Thank you!

I mentioned earlier that the reading room was eerily quiet, but it started making a scene as soon as the protagonist arrived? Haha, it is indeed the privilege of the protagonist

Just practice your skills in the first 1.2 Chapters and prepare for the next one.

Did Duan Leng use the protagonist template of other novels to write it? ? It's good to write more about other characters, but the author needs to control it to a certain extent. Also, I feel like there is no humor in this book? ?

I have read more than 200 chapters and found out why his earth element is always not completed for him? When will it be completed?

To be honest, these modern languages ​​are really not suitable for appearing in this kind of novels.

I just want to say that my ability is not enough, and my sense of justice is overwhelming. Sure enough, the protagonist is trying to commit suicide, but he will not die.

Originally, the writing style was okay, but even the human race can betray the verdict and use it to write a novel, so it is better to close the book.

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book that makes you laugh like crazy, don't read it while eating, "The old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies"