Reborn as Lingshan's Senior Sister

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The plot is too slow-paced and drags on too much; it's frustrating to watch.

The author is probably a girl; sometimes, in order to make the writing more artistic and interesting, she even abandons the characters' intelligence. It's toxic, extremely toxic.

This is a complete mess, utterly nonsensical. The game starts off incredibly smoothly, then the protagonist is constantly being bullied and abused. Even if the protagonist is bullied, that's one thing, but the premise is a light novel about gluttony—what does that have to do with gluttony?

The protagonist is too weak and cowardly. He has memories of his past life but lacks the intelligence he should have. The plot drags on without a main storyline. After subscribing to around chapter 300, I found myself losing the desire to continue reading. The writing style is light and refreshing, a welcome addition to any action-packed story, but it's too bland and lacks a clear main plot.

I'm not trying to get attention, I just genuinely can't stand it anymore and want to speak up. The plot is dragging on, fine, but what kind of mess did they make of Mount Shu? I really want to curse the author.

While reading, I browsed through many chapter comments and side posts. Starting from chapter ten, almost every chapter had some abusive comments, mostly about the slow pacing and the plot being incompetent. At first, I was curious why readers these days are so irritable. I thought, "Let the story be, a little more peaceful would be better."

I finished reading "Cultivation" overnight, and it's been a long time since I've encountered such a satisfying story. When a book respects the characters' intelligence, you know it can't be bad. Of course, I don't mean incredibly intelligent, but rather that the main and supporting characters' behavior and actions are rational and logical.

After reading over seventy chapters, I felt like I'd read nothing at all; it was too drawn out and there was too little character development. It felt like the narrator was just talking to himself. The section about the deadly poison in Mount Shu was inexplicably written and too chaotic.

Beware of being poisoned! Starting with that cat from Mount Shu (around chapter 70), it disgusted me so much it started feeding me insane amounts of poison. / Be careful!