The Cardcaptor Sakura Mage

Chapter 499 is too outrageous. The purpose of the evil-doing villain boss is love. The male protagonist also said with an empathic look, "Why don't you respond to his love and stop him?", Making it seem like love is such a lofty proposition. In the end, it is still for selfish desires and against the official organization. I am very curious that the villain organization is showing off its skills in front of the people without caring about human life. Even if the participants are sparse, the state agencies are going all out to hunt down the terrorist organization?       ，""，""""？ It looked good at first. After all, the character is an ordinary college student, waiting for the protagonist to grow up. Then the protagonist said that he "doesn't want to grow up", and the author also explained that "the protagonist doesn't need to grow up." Was there any mistake? Already 500 chapters? I see you, a stinky loser, whose eyes are wandering when he sees a girl, and you have read 500 chapters? If you want to say that he is really pretending, then that's fine. However, the author said, "It's not like he's just pretending, or he's not good at dealing with women, and he can't change it." I have already thought about the author's inner journey: "How should we write today? Now, just invite a beautiful woman to talk to the male protagonist, describe the male protagonist a few times with erratic eyes and stumbling, and it will reach 3k words. It can also strengthen the male protagonist's character to increase the reader's sense of involvement 😁". This book was started in 2018. There is a very popular book called I Am Rich, Rich and Handsome next door about the counterattack of diaosi. It was published in 2013. People who read books in 13 years know that after 500 chapters, it is time to reach the peak of life and stop being a diaosi. Finally, there is the so-called "If you don't want to grow up, enjoy the present moment". The author gave himself a vest as a prophet and put it in the book, asking the male protagonist to grow up quickly. According to the archetypal analysis of Jungian psychology, the author's waistcoat symbolizes the wise old man, and the male protagonist symbolizes the eternal youth. When the wise old man and the eternal youth balance each other and achieve fusion, it is growth. In the book, it is a prophet who makes the male protagonist willing to take responsibility openly and work hard to improve to protect the people around him. However, the author does not understand that breaking teeth and swallowing them, burying the pain and difficulties in your heart and digesting them yourself, is the growth that most people experience. For example, when the male protagonist was sad after stabbing Arakawa, the author arranged for a girl to find out the male protagonist's identity and comfort him. This was completely unnecessary. The male protagonist needs to be comforted and that is where he should grow. Only when the male protagonist is strong enough can he take care of Teio, wear a vest to protect others secretly without being discovered, and achieve the peaceful daily life he hopes for. Otherwise, it would be like this now, which makes me sick of stupidity. The male protagonist's thinking is all kinds of contradictions in adolescence. He doesn't want to take responsibility but wants to protect others, he doesn't want to grow but wants to protect his daily life. He dreams that as long as he doesn't take a step forward, he won't be caught up by fate. Coupled with the male protagonist's idealistic ability and surrounded by many beauties, I can only say "the author is so good at fantasy!"

I gave up, I gave up, and I finished the sixth volume. The first few volumes were fine, but starting from the fifth volume, it was terrible. I saw a protagonist who was more evasive than Lu Mingfei, but the dragon family still had Caesar and Chu Zihang to support it, and brother, you are single-core. How can we bring it in when you play like this? As a result, there is no sense of experience at all. The more I read, the more I want to curse.

Every time I write a summary, I feel miserable. I write that I am sick, have a headache, and have a fever. It feels like writing a book will kill me. Book friends give me so many monthly tickets. I hope you really can't write or you just want to make extra money. Now it seems hard to say. I really use the tolerance of book friends to relax my standards again and again. I used to really like reading the author's articles, but now I just feel sick. You still say that you want to write all the essays well, but starting from the end of the next twelve volumes, see for yourself whether what you wrote is the same thing as the previous one? Without talking about Shuicheng, one chapter would be worth about 2,000 words. Even most of the content is introducing something instead of advancing the plot. It is really difficult to comment and very disappointing.

I have read a lot of novels, why are you the only one who can always accurately capture my emotional points?

I've read 600 chapters. The beginning of the classic is pretty good, but there are a lot of questions later (I've been reading this book for a long time and I'm looking forward to the follow-up, but I suddenly remembered why I didn't read it in the first place) (1) The author's grammatical errors are very serious (starting from Chapter 300), including but not limited to the lack of nouns, redundant components, disordered attributive positions, and misuse of uncommon words and adjectives (I feel that the author suppressed the writing of the novel, when new sentences came into his mind. I felt like I didn't delete the old sentences because I was in a hurry) Example: "She staggered several times while running barefoot on the ice field" "Now it is replaced by an incredible dream of happiness" (2) Every few hundred words in the description from Lao Sepi's perspective, an almost identical paragraph will be inserted that has nothing to do with the dialogue (most likely copied and pasted) PS: lsp is just LSP. The key is that you write a paragraph of yy as if you were in a mood when you were talking about serious things, followed by a running account. The key is that sometimes, every few hundred words, a paragraph of almost the same yy content will be inserted, which makes me want to vomit (3) In the dialogue, the sentences are broken up like a novice, which is very dramatic (the first 300 are not obvious, and the second 300, especially when fighting and plot advancement, are very awkward, like a children's cartoon.) Example: "I have to help him..." (The ellipses are just like this, not added by me) (4) The first three hundred chapters are written with little writing style but are funny and have the spirit of letting oneself go. The last three hundred chapters are written like a running account and give up halfway. The self-talk is actually not funny. (Writing problem, it's too troublesome to find obvious examples and I don't want to find them)  (5) Often use memes that I don't know when they became popular and I don't know why they became popular Example: "Scared the baby to death..." (What kind of old meme is this)

As night falls, step into this already dark battlefield The contract with the undead is the heart called "Creation" and the shackles called "heart" Listening to the song of the wanderer, looking forward to growth, but cherishing the status quo even more Pitch black and Mo The Ring of Bius lights up, and the night crow flutters its wings and appears in the world, symbolizing the playing of the ninth movement of the song Above the Pacific Ocean, red flames rise into the sky, and the holy crossbow vibrates for nine times. It is the silver-haired girl, the pearl of the night, and the heart that the young man wants to protect One night in the capital , the establishment of a bond, the beginning of transformation The round cage blooms, the red lotus in the prosperous age, the determination to become the person he longs for, the young man stands in front of the beauty of the world with a smile Shengle Fanjing, the young man who does not want to grow up, the child who wants to be a hero, the legend The infatuated person who has written all kinds of stories, lightning, frost, Tang Dao, treasured things, loved ones, reversing time, is the prologue to the beginning of the bond In the arms of a woman, the child wearing a smiling mask takes off his disguise. If there is no courage, maintaining the status quo is also a waste. A choice On the eve of the bonfire, the golden fairy returned to the cage. She said: I am not the everyday person he wants to protect. This night, the boy chose to grow up On the Nordic glacier, the boy found the answer that only belongs to him. He was hesitant all the way, young and frivolous all the way. In the polar night of the ice sea, when the sun and the crescent moon rise at the same time, looking back in time, it is the capital of flowers a hundred years ago, the golden fairy being saved, and the lonely witch being embraced The fog disperses at dawn, and the thoughts melt. Falling from the polar night into the ice field, carrying out the will, is A declaration from the far north of the world, he said: She has long become his daily life Above the far north, in the middle of the night, she is a night watchman, a comrade, a companion, and a family member It is the daily life that decided to leave, the eldest brother, the genius, the high school uncle, the warlock, Magician, young master, CEO, artificial intelligence, social fear, lazy person, teacher, urban beauty, they are the reunited companions, the young man who is determined to change The battle of proof, tearing off the disguise, showing off his majesty, zero white wings, this feeling that absolutely does not want to lose! Luna Hunt! This determination to do whatever it takes! The mortals raised the bows made by gods and shot down the angels Fighting on their own, it was a knightly duel between King Arthur and the Knights of the Round Table, a fierce confrontation of technology, and the last dance of the magician Wandering in Europe, making friends, ordinary people, He is an angel, he is a scientist, he is the best partner who is connected with his heart, he is a sociophobic patient who longs for change, he is the beam of light in a desperate situation It is a race against time, it is the night tour of thoughts and memories that belong to the shoulders of the God King, and it is the eternal life of Artemis. Everlasting Hunting is the awakened fettering star, the steel dragon born from a dream returning to daily life, the mood of wanting to cherish more, the changed boy, the girl eager to confess, the queen of recovery, It is a recast dragon, an everyday life that I want to cherish even more We are born from wishes and run towards our wishes (Write whatever you want, just read it for fun. If you think it is not well written, please don't scold me (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`))

Allow me to laugh three times without speaking first. Hahaha. The following content contains a little bit of my own evaluation of this book as a quasi-college student and some encouragement to the author. First of all, I am very sorry to the author. I learned about this book and the way I read it through pirated websites. (Because this is an era of free prostitution) (Fog). Sorry! (Bow). The reasons that gave me the courage to write this book review are: First, the author's touching words (bah) every time he praised a single chapter (bah) (a humble plea) (fog). This is really one of the few good-looking books that fits my three views. The humor contains a little bit of understanding about growth or other aspects. The last time I had this special feeling was probably a book written by an author next door who likes to go out and collect materials. But this time, something is different. I really saw a lot of things in this book that I was looking forward to. For example, my favorite character is not actually Power Bank Master, or the witch, Water Linked Heart. But the baby (Fang Ran) who dared to jump out when he saw something unfair, the Fire Fist brother who took care of the newcomers in the first night battle (it seems not the first time), the veteran who told the baby to do what he wanted to do... There are many, many more. Maybe some people said, "Oh, you just have the second grade disease. Be more mature." But ah, I really felt that blood boiling when I saw Fang Ran driving 300 yards on the national highway for the sake of Gou or (hehehe). That sad feeling when Fang Ran, the Pearl of the Sea, asked his brother what to do with these people. Maybe it's just me being sentimental and feeling good about myself. In fact, who doesn't have a hero in their heart? In my short experience of 18 years, perhaps the most sad thing besides my parents' divorce and my first love breaking up with me. It was because the high school grade dean misunderstood a very good friend of mine. After I jumped out to speak for him in public (because he was really timid and couldn't speak well), my head teacher said in private, "You are just an ordinary person. How can you protect someone for a lifetime? Do you think this is a hero?" Maybe my dream of being a hero was extinguished at that moment. But thank you for the works written by Yuxin. Let me see the heroic life that ordinary people long for in its entirety. I have always believed that writers are a group of heroes who can change the world with their pens. Don't complain, I am a pirated reader for free! I will definitely make up for my ticket in the future! Really! (I just gave you a reward for tomorrow's breakfast! It's a full ten yuan!) I hope I can see it. I also hope that you will not worry about the problem of pirated readers for too long. I believe that the story you show will definitely attract children like me who have heroic dreams to make up for your vote. 👍 (Because I wrote it late at night, I will not proofread it. If there is any difficulty in reading, please forgive me. If you can't forgive me, please follow the network cable and hit me!)

I came here today to pay off my debt. I still remember the first time I read the novel Night War in my second year of junior high school. I mentioned that I was interested in light novels for the first time. The scene where Fang Ran and Meng Lang were driving together left me wanting more after reading it, not to mention the funny plots such as Her Lady Queen, Gou Yu, and Calabash. What I like most is Fangran's trip to the North Pole. That conversation about swearing an oath to Her Majesty the Queen was simply explosive. This novel is very satisfying, and it's the only novel I dare to read twice. It's just that the update is too slow, but that's okay, slow work will lead to careful work. I used to have no money and was a student, so I could only watch pirated copies. I hope you'll forgive me. Now that I'm working part-time and want to watch it again, I came to Qidian. Com to buy the genuine version. I hope the plots will get better and better in the future. I also hope that I can accompany Yu Xin Chang to the end of this story, and don't have any regrets like the King's Throne. 😄😄

I really like Fangran's psychological changes in the early stages of this book, the daily sand sculptures, and the arctic story. However, this also led me to have too high expectations for this book. Looking at the national war chapter and North America without the above elements, it felt like an average level and a bit boring. The protagonist's explosion and rescue is only suitable for the early stage, but it will not have that flavor in the later stage. It is recommended to pay more attention to the shaping of the world and other characters, rather than the whole world revolving around the protagonist. But the most important thing is that I failed to see Fang Ran's righteous path and heroic dream in the later parts. There is no inner sense of identity for Fang Ran's actions. If there is only desire but no belief, it is far from growth. But I think the greatest value of this book for me is that it awakens a new xp and provides a path and character template that I have never imagined. When I reproduce Ling in the future, I will be grateful to the prototype author. I will always be grateful to Yuan Xin, Queen Saigao! A word of complaint: There is no need for the author to forcefully depict characters he does not understand. Most of the participants and Beijing University students in your novel are actually losers with ability and high education, rather than the best people. Moreover, I am not interested in many meaningless show-offs and money-show plots (except for those with Ling and friends present). If I pursue books and the like for this kind of thing, I might as well get a son-in-law and the God of War.

Today is the witch sister's birthday~\(≧▽≦)/~Happy birthday!

(I discovered that my book review had been deleted, revised and reposted. It contains spoilers, angry nonsense and confusing logic. If you don't like it, don't read it.) I have been saving for three months and have read these chapters from June to now. I am almost mad at myself. I think that I have not reviewed this book for so many years. I just want to say something I read this book very early. I read a pirated version in 18 years. It was called City Night Fight Magical Boy at the time. To be honest, I couldn't finish reading it. Then I saw other people saying that the protagonist's heart was gone and I became interested and read it again. I also re-ordered it and have been following it until now. To be honest, this book is the first time I read it. If the update can be kept and completed as soon as possible, it will be a good book. Now it can be said that it has opened high and gone low, and the shortcomings have been infinitely magnified before the constipation update. The following are complaints The writing power of Yuan Xin is overwhelmingly inadequate. There is no doubt that several high points of this book are Tide points, such as the one-night patrol and the climax of the Arctic Demon. When I think about it, it feels like Wishin was thinking crazy. After thinking about it, I didn't know how to start the plot, so I just wrote a small reason and started. The beginning of the one-night patrol is that Arakawa wants to destroy the night game. Why does Arakawa want to destroy the night game? To get Shui Linlang to come out and see him, just like this, it's too temperamental, buddy, why don't you even make a chapter about Arakawa? In the end, I wrote about a magician and an alchemist, and then Arakawa and Shui Linlang mentioned it in one stroke. I couldn't imagine what Arakawa's motives were at all. The power of Chinese participants was full of loopholes, but I won't mention it. Then came the Arctic Demon, the episode with the highest combat power. It was so cool to destroy the entire Nightless Palace by one person. What's the reason? Oh, it was Ling who had a temper with the queen, so she started to do it. Actually, I can probably understand what Yu Xin wants to write. The queen's behavior is not that of Yu Gong. He cannot let the only top participant in the night war world who can interfere with the night network be injured, exposed and in danger. Yu privately doesn't want the treasure he regards as his daughter to be remembered, so even if it is forcible, he must control Ling and take her back. If he is stopped, he must prove to himself that he has the ability to protect her. But what do I see? He lost his temper, then got into a fight, and then got emotional. The protagonist almost died due to an explosion of sex. In the end of the night, the whole story was revealed. How can you describe it in detail? Motivation? Purpose? Nothing, nothing, it's all up to the reader's imagination, it's very interactive Then came the complaints from the protagonist Fang Ran. I really couldn't stand it anymore. It's been so many years and so many words. It was true when I finished reading the North American volume. I'm very happy, because Fangran really feels like growing up in this volume, and then he returned to his original state at the speed of light. Now facing Ling, he is still stammering, blushing, and his eyes are wandering. No, buddy, how long are you going to use your excuse of "Fangran doesn't need to grow up"? Do I want to watch this stammering, red-faced, and dying coward see you finish or not finish? Don't tell me it's a mask or something. You've also written before when you were chatting with Fang Ran in Susus. It's obvious which one is more popular with women, the stammering coward Chu Nan or the elegant man. The same goes for it the other way around, right? Isn't it obvious at a glance which one is more popular with readers, the coward who stutters and blushes, or the protagonist who has grown up unknowingly after experiencing a series of events and has become more confident and generous in every gesture? Isn't that calm feeling when taking care of Ling quite good at writing? Isn't this the early stage? How many big events have you seen, especially after the North American volume, you just slapped yourself back to your original shape? How many normal people saw you at Beijing University doing nothing and feeling emotionless when faced with a frivolous boy teasing your senior? Even if you later use the members of the night bureau and the senior's friend (I don't know what his name is when I'm so angry) to describe that everyone doesn't care about this clown, is it not true that Fangran was in a daze without doing anything in front of a man who was teasing the senior? You really have to grow up, right? Why did Fangran act so decisively when Fang Xiaoran was teased later on? This is the latest chapter, but I still cower and stammer in front of the Queen. What's going on? The amusement park is a failure among failures. It forgets to have abilities (tell a joke, admit it Fang Ran, you are a participant in the night battle, you are no longer ordinary), it is formulaic, and then it stutters and is shy, and it is invincible. All I can say is, oh, and the most outrageous thing. There, the one-night patrol in the city, the front leg has just finished carrying the weight of other people's lives to kill Arakawa, the back leg is crying in Sushu's arms, and then goes to ask Shui Linlang why Why don't you go out and meet Arakawa? You know he's fighting for you. To be honest, I skipped this part when I rewatched it. It's so bad The last part is where I became completely red-hot. I pretended to be a b*tch in the middle of the night and said to myself, the formula accident is over and the workers have no wages. The protagonist saves the scene. I want everyone to get their wages. I want to be a hero and I want to save them. Then Ling sees it. Isn't it awkward? How many times have you played this set? The mudslides, fires, and gun battles were all the same. I haven't mentioned it for so many years, but you are still doing it now. Are you done with it? Will Ye Sheng do it again after time travel, do it again after the Old Summer Palace, and do it again after the collapse? Can't it? I really don't know how many more years Yuan Xin can eat this book. This book is almost ten years old, and there are only dozens of chapters a year. It's all water. Oh, Yuan Xin still has the face to say that I worked hard to conceive this book (I conceived dozens of chapters in a year, suppressing a laugh). You can scold me, but you must not scold me. You pour it, and I will scold it. It's watery. So what, but what can I do? I think there must be a lot of people who have been following it for so many years like me, and there are still a lot of people eagerly waiting for his update. I used to have a really deep affection for this book. I didn't know how many times I read it over and over again. Sometimes I read Yuxin's complaints in the middle of the night and then deleted it (it's been too long, I don't know if I remember it wrong). ), I have been worried about Yuan Xin's condition for three days and want to see the book end smoothly, but now I have read the latest chapter and it is still the same. It is still the same all year round, and no matter how deep the relationship is, it has been worn away. To be honest, you should cut off the eunuch, don't let it go, let the subsequent plots exist in the beautiful fantasy, although I am still old even if he updates it. To be honest, there is actually a lot I want to say, a lot of things I haven't said or commented on, and a lot of them are emotions. I originally planned to write a serious review, but reading the latest chapter in the middle of the night really drove me crazy Finally, I would like to add an A, the above is only a personal evaluation, if you think I am wrong, then you are right, above

First of all, it is very worthy of recognition that this novel is funny and passionate. It can be said that the content is very close to Japanese comics. I feel that it should be a big seller if it is directly adapted into comics. It's very funny every day, and the nonsensical and chuunibyou make the plot very passionate at the climax. However, it seems difficult for Yuan Xin's writing power to control this novel. Many times, the writing style is very middle-grade like Japanese comics. This is not a shortcoming, but the problem is that the author does not fully understand how to use this "writing style" on the basis of expressing clear meaning. This often results in content that is not smooth, with problems such as no subject, too long attributives, and unclear sentence segments. It often happens that you have to read a certain sentence several times before you know who said it. Maybe the author knows what he is writing when he writes, but it is sometimes difficult for readers to get it. As a bookworm for many years, it was very difficult to read, which is the flaw of this book. But I still can't bear to abandon this book, so I hope the author can read this comment, improve his writing habits a little, and keep working hard

When reading this novel, I sometimes wonder Can fantasy novels carry the fantasy of teenagers? It seems that every protagonist must be perfect, everything he does has a purpose, kindness is criticized, and sympathy is doubted. Some of the so-called teenage protagonists nowadays seem to me to be middle-aged fantasies, without any hint of high-spiritedness or youthful frivolity. The protagonist is just walking on the right path in the world. I can't see his growth and changes. He has already been stereotyped and is just improving his appearance along the way. Fangran feels real to me. Many people in this chapter feel the same way. I may not have seen such people, but I know that such people exist in reality. He is not confident, an otaku, and will be dumped by his first love... But he will risk his own life when passers-by are in danger. He is arrogant in the second grade and is completely unwilling to add a little bit of danger to others. He is an ordinary person who makes mistakes, but he is extraordinary. Is this probably a boy's fantasy?

The North American volume is finally coming to an end, let me complain a little bit Wishong has worked hard, this volume is difficult to deliver If it is regarded as a big chapter, Wish-xin took a whole year to write, but in terms of update frequency, it is not too slow, and the senses are really good. It can be called one of my favorite stories. I also like the subsequent volumes. The last chapter of the volume is "I Watch the City" which is my favorite single chapter. Maybe it is these consecutive volumes of good articles that have raised my expectations. The senses at the beginning of this North American chapter directly pulled me to the bottom. The rich woman and the association's executive officer are all the Riddler, the rich woman. I really don't like the followers and companions whose names I don't even remember. In addition, there are too many disposable tool-man supporting characters in this volume. The first version of the book is really not very good. There were some complaints when this volume was first released. Looking back later, I have changed my mind several times, and the perception has really improved a lot. But I still have to complain. The rich woman in this volume actually made me less fond of her. I really don't like the two new female characters in this volume. . . The executive officers of the association have almost no description except for their combat prowess, and I found very few foreshadowings for the Night Palace's involvement. The story experience is indeed difficult. But no matter what, it took two years for Yuan Xin to finally write to the end of the North American volume. It also took me two years to wait all the way to the end of the North American volume. After this volume, I am looking forward to the annual meeting of Ye Bureau, the past of Ye Sheng, and the story of the burning night of the Old Summer Palace. It's just that, before continuing to the next story, I miss the little house in the capital a little bit, I miss Xiaoyou, Meng Lang, Senior Sister, Shui Lianxin, and Hulu after two years of absence, and I miss that daily life

The pirated version has come to the fore, and the writing is very good, but why is it not popular?

It's been a long time since I finally figured it out. It's not that the author can't write, he just doesn't want to finish it early.

Personal feeling It is humorous and passionate, which suits me very well. Scene construction, character description, baggage, fighting... Needless to say, it is definitely an excellent level among online novels. I can give it an eight out of ten. The general direction of the plot is great, and the connection between each story is very good, very reasonable and comfortable. All kinds of foreshadowings and series of plots are very subtle, a little bit of luck, just the right meaning, it can also be said to be destiny. Some details are not handled very well. For example, in Volume 5, it just happens to catch up every time. This is too obvious, but it is obviously awkward. There are also passionate dialogues that stop at the critical moment of life and death (especially the part where the Forbidden City rescues Yesheng). I am too strict, so I think this is very awkward. In fact, some people like it. For example, Spell Return has this problem, and it is still a big seller, so it's okay. This is just my opinion, don't take it too seriously. About Fang Ran, I always feel that he is very awkward. This person is very complicated and contradictory, maybe because the author brought himself into it. In the fifth volume, maybe the author did not express it clearly, so he used daily life to describe Fang Ran's cherished things. In fact, daily life here does not refer to the daily life of the three of them, Meng Gouling, but the guardian, the guardian of everyone in the night bureau, the guardian of friends and relatives. For this reason, he killed Arakawa and felt the pain. This is more reasonable, not ordinary, which is misleading. Another point about Fangran is his previous experience. I think this kind of thing must be mentioned earlier. Revealing it bit by bit is meaningless and will hinder the readers' understanding of his past, present, and future, as well as the special features of him as the protagonist who was selected in the field. I have a discussion on this aspect, and some of it is placed in a certain paragraph of Volume 5 Diary 3 (disclosure of past events). I only write it here to remind myself. Therefore, I won't go into details here. Then there was a discussion of Fangran's character. He wore another personality mask under his conscious mind, which was very special. And why is the existence of this mask necessary? Can anyone explain it? If we take that incident, then we are back to my last question - I haven't written about it yet. Everyone is welcome to discuss this layer of personality mask covering Fang Ranbiao's consciousness. Okay, that's all for the time being. In short, this is a very complicated book, with love, friendship, family affection, passion, and growth (currently seeing Arakawa's death, I can only say that the part was written too hastily. I hope there will be an interpretation of Arakawa in five volumes, otherwise readers have not experienced Arakawa's memory, and it will be difficult to empathize, and it will be difficult to bring in the protagonist's regret and helplessness). There is oppression and resistance, routines and counter-routines, battles, daily life... It is a beautiful dream.

After a month of maintenance, about four chapters have been updated. I really don't want to rush it! Let's set a small goal and update one chapter in ten days, how about? 😁

I suddenly found such a book on my bookshelf when I was short of books. After being immersed in the world of night battles for a week, I still couldn't help but say something The author is awesome, I will always like magical girls Thank you Yuan Xinda for creating this wonderful world of night battles for us 👍

In fact, it is impossible to have eternal burning passion. There are so many gorgeous words and passionate scenes. It is too tiring to force yourself to have passion. Can the author try to think about his own writing style? Maybe it can bring something new

I have already gone out to work. The author has not updated to the annual meeting. I read pirated copies before. I will give you a full subscription this year. I hope I can see the start of the annual meeting this year.

After reading the entire novel, I still don't understand some of the author's settings. First, why is this national war started? In the background, during the Cold War, there was a big brawl in the Ziyuewu Palace that led to the Nightnet Convention. Then the Night Bureau and the Royal Court regularly held national wars to see the strength of their respective participants? I think the author may have wanted to promote national fortunes in the early and mid-term, so he created a national war, a completely different competition. Second, the plot states that the royal court has a large number of people and the night game itself suffers, but it is unreasonable to see a difference in the actual number of people. Each branch of the Royal Court has a person in charge of superpowers. Counting the headquarters, there are almost a thousand people, which is the entire force. And there are only a dozen people in the entire Huaxia division in the night game? ? ? ? ? You can say that part of me is going against the current, and part of me is a wanderer. But I asked the author, even if the world's population is divided, there should be nearly a thousand participants in China. So where are they? Have you eaten? Or say okay, go to midnight. There must be at least a few hundred Chinese participants in Ziye. Why does something happen in the plot that Ziye either doesn't have anyone, or has one or two A-level players? I would like to ask how many people like Li Ze have written by [Non-Night Bureau Personnel]? I feel like the whole of China, except for a few midnight A-level players, is the group of night game participants in the capital, right? You didn't even pay attention to the number of people in the initial map. Don't worry about your B cabin. Third, because of the existence of the dark world, the participants are considered [comrades-in-arms] in the underlying logic. I don't ask you to write about thousands and hundreds of participants going to the dark world to fill their lives in order to protect reality. You'd better just write about internal fighting. It doesn't matter if the superpower system is all kinds of weird and unsuitable, after all, everyone's wishes are different. I can't really comment on everything related to your basic technology and equipment, as well as the basic copy of abilities. Hey, no, I misjudged you. You originally wanted to write a single-core protagonist, but it would be difficult for you to pursue a particularly logical world view. Sorry sorry. I almost forgot that the protagonist has around A2 strength in more than 40 chapters. Since the ability has reached the top level of the world view, there is definitely no need for basic equipment settings. The protagonist can just feel comfortable fighting. The key is that there is a limit to how you can grow as a protagonist. If you don't grow, you will regress. Use your abilities to give gifts to your female counterpart, and you can do it in the early stages. Now your reason for disgusting me is "He is no longer hiding". . . Finally, I would like to express my displeasure in an extremely subjective way. There is no scenario designed in which "participants are in the same camp". When participants get together, they just keep fighting and fighting each other. As long as you are tied to your B night game, others are not worthy of working together. There is also the protagonist's state of mind. Other participants have already made clear their wishes when they awaken. Then they can better pursue their dreams by improving their abilities. This setting is not bad. But only when the protagonist awakens and reaches full combat power, now the 4 million-word protagonist doesn't even have a defined wish? My evaluation is that it is not as good as Osphia as the protagonist.

I just finished reading the Far North chapter, and the update speed makes me a bit reluctant to read it. It's too painful to watch a little bit, not a little bit, and no updates.

When I first read this book in college, I might still have a youthful spirit that had not faded away, and I could see a bit of myself in Fang Ran. The process of reading is also a time of quiet growth led by him. It's just the author's late update speed, you and I both understand... During the days of waiting for updates, I read this book over and over again two or three times. Now that I have been working for a few years and then pick up my job again, I may have become a busy working cow and horse, and I will never be able to regain the sense of substitution I had back then. The Fangran in front of him is more like a mirror reflecting the past, reflecting the figure of the young man who was once full of fantasy and did not know the taste of sorrow.

The participants of the temperament ran for their dreams, and the author of the temperament never started writing until he was satisfied. The love of fantasy and genius writing made this touching story However, the European volume and the North American volume reminded me of the 48-hour legendary pirate chapter, which was a bit confusing.

During the Shui family's prophecy and confession, can any of the book friends in the back tell me that Fang Randuo will be able to make changes directly, and will not be so timid on the surface, which has made people really confused several times, It's just that they are still struggling. In fact, when you entered the A-level book last time, you all knew that people would die in night battles, and she almost died in front of you, so you should make changes. Last time it was the senior, last time it was the witch, you want to save each one, every time you have to suppress it first and then raise it, a few times is enough, every time you have to do sit-ups

Since I was in elementary school, I could only watch pirated copies. Now I have a part-time job in college and I can pay to watch them. I have been waiting for a long time to get a full movie, and there are many places to write about. In the past, when it was not changed, the style and flavor were stronger. Now after the change, the flavor is not as strong as before. I thought you might have updated it, so I clicked on it with interest. I am still reviewing it and talking about some branches. You said you pursue perfection. You update so slowly and the plot is inconsistent. Then you keep polishing and polishing. It doesn't matter if it's not perfect. We watched it with great enthusiasm. If we can stick to it until now, we don't pursue anything. We just want to know this story and Fang Ran's story. We just want to read it completely and fill in the holes. I just want to know who he chose to be with Her Majesty the Queen. In the previous part of the second grade, the declaration of the far north or the American chapter, to be honest, the plot of the American chapter did not attract me that much. Northwest Declaration is really a middle-of-the-road movie, but it's really fun to watch, and it gives me the feeling of being a child and dreaming about it. I just hope I can finish this story properly. Please, author, bring us Fang Ran's story completely.

Haha, I can finally post 😎

I, Bingxue, am not to be trifled with, hehe~ No one will see me on National Day anyway~~~Seeking death If you have hope that it may happen during the National Day holiday... I can only express it, don't think about it! ! Have a good National Day with your friends and family~ Happy National Day! (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡ I, Bingxue, am untouchable, I don't believe anyone will see it! Self-hypnosis—— Yes, no one will see it anyway, so I nodded.

I offer you a reward of 10,000 points, please help me improve. I came here from a pirated version and saw me practicing in the mountains at midnight. The author's level is obviously not as good as the European and Arctic volumes. After reading the testimonials, I can understand the author's current mentality. But the biggest problem now is that the author's growth cannot keep up with Fang Ran. Fangran gained the motivation to move forward. He no longer evaded responsibilities because of fear of injury, and no longer bothered others because he was attached to the ordinary. With the protection of many elders and the company of friends, he mustered up the courage to step into the world of night fighting, and gradually grew into a true A-level leader. But he still couldn't do it. Five years had passed since he was in college, and his life still couldn't step out of that small circle. He put all his enthusiasm into Fangran and neglected himself. The author needs to grow, needs to change, needs to truly experience a different life, to dominate like Fang Ran, and to move forward like Fang Ran. I have always felt that the protagonist is the author's yearning for the best version of himself, entrusted with the longing of readers who resonate with him. It is natural that the protagonist has done things that most people cannot do, because that is what we want to do but cannot do. I hope Yuxin can get out of the current predicament as soon as possible... And be single as soon as possible (laughing).