Creation of Emperor Wa

Why do I think this is a danbi novel? Starting from Chapter 69, gay people are gay 😰

I've read the first 50 chapters and it's too boring. There's not even a main plot. I just write whatever comes to my mind. It feels like the protagonist is retiring and just doing some pointless things to fill up the plot.

The writing is mediocre and the system is confusing.

The subject matter is quite good. I haven't read a prehistoric novel for a long time. I thought this book was quite good because the setting was quite interesting, but I felt that Pig's Knuckle was a big failure. . . . . First of all, I didn't know my identity clearly from the beginning. It's like I stayed in the tribe for 16 years and didn't know anything about myself. Then I originally left the tribe, but ended up in seclusion outside for 3 years and then ran back. . . . When you don't take yourself seriously, you take yourself too seriously. You are not prepared at all when you go to other worlds to experience. You clearly think that you are a hero who mainly adds blood, but you end up treating yourself as a berserker, traveling to the West to see, and to see the ancient world. . . . . The author actually doesn't have an outline. . . In short, I just feel that the plot is very confusing, and the protagonist has always been just an ordinary person. He is afraid of this and that, and cares about that. . . . Even if you haven't watched The Ancient Times for a long time, you know that the state of mind of cultivating Taoism is very important. First of all, Bai Mei will write you 250. Knowing that the person destined by the Supreme Being has been intercepted, he still rushes to kill and ridicule him. I have never seen Shushan in Huanzhu Louzhu. . . How many years have you been practicing Taoism? . . Are there so 2? And the part about destroying the sky. . . Even more speechless, there is inconsistency and forced cause and effect. I just wrote wherever I thought. This is it. . . . . In fact, the protagonist is the Madonna Xiaobai version of Long Aotian, right? . . . . . . Okay, I admit that what I said here is a bit rushed, but when I first saw the subject matter, I really felt that it was very good, and the setting of the world was not bad, but after watching it, I just felt all kinds of weird. . . I hope the author can write better and better, but I can only keep this book on my bookshelf. . . .

After reading the book review section, I want to say that when reading the book, please do not bring over the settings of other books. What kind of mood should the protagonist have, what kind of strength should the protagonist's pet have, and what kind of routine should the protagonist's growth have? These are what the author should consider. The cultivation of gods and immortals are different. Whatever the author sets, it is fine. If the author's settings are incomplete, you can completely do it yourself. I'm just brainstorming, of course, based on the author's setting, and maybe it can help the author improve the setting. For other things, I personally feel that adding some routines will not violate the book, and other things will destroy the setting of the book. I came to the novel because it is an easy novel. Anyway, I don't feel that it will bother me when I read it. I hope the author will not add a certain paragraph that suppresses first and then increases.

Pig's Foot has such a disgusting personality, she's so holy. She's been beaten to the door of her house many times and ridden on her head so much that she pooped and peed. She's still so weak that she can't treat her well. If she doesn't have the strength, it's okay to say so, but to do this to an ant that can be easily crushed to death means she's mentally incompetent. Born to be a slave.

There is a huge disadvantage in reading this book. I actually thought that the power system of other books was too low, and I was always making small fuss. . . It's really difficult to find water in a vast ocean.

I have a comment: The imagination and main plot design of this book are very good. The key problem is that the author's writing style is not very good. The writing is like a stick figure, the characters are dry, and the supporting characters are basically talking puppets. I can only say that the author still has a lot of room for improvement!

The author is a woman, I guess. I feel so gay in the main world.

The layers of the world are quite pleasant. Isn't the purpose to highlight how grand and grand the eternal true world is? But looking at the author's power system settings, it's hard to tell what's so great about it. Can it open up a world?

There is a setting in this book that really stood out to me. Emperor Wa created the world, and all his descendants are maintaining it. The hundreds of innate tribes that opened up the wilderness, and the same creation god Hou Yi, had a miserable life, and were even robbed of the orthodox position by the sons of heaven. This aspect of this book is the most comforting to people.

Why do I feel that the pet the author wrote about is a bit... Annoying or disgusting to me or some people? To be honest, I really don't like it! Although this is written because I like pets (friends?), Can you not write it too much like this? To me, it doesn't look naughty at all, it's just more... How should I put it? Well, I probably just can't write the feeling of being naughty, and it's even more unpalatable to read than Naughty Evolution.

I want to say what I'm writing about, and I'll write about it here and there. There is no purpose at all. It feels boring to watch, without any passion. Everything else seems fine, and the settings are okay. There is just no main line, no purpose, it feels quite boring, and I don't want to watch it anymore.

The author made three endings, and I understood the reasons for them, so I immediately didn't want to read them anymore.

After reading a few chapters, I have a question: Is the protagonist in the eternal true world? If so, can any of the laws of Zhongqian World make the protagonist Da Luo unobstructed? Isn't it possible to convert hundreds of billions of Zimbabwean dollars into RMB one-to-one?

Funny, Chapter 43. Taiyi God has been accused of stealing the Sun God. How can the Taiyi Emperor's love in the eternal true world of your main world be so embarrassing!

Very poisonous, very poisonous, very poisonous. In the first chapter, the protagonist was resting in a tree, and the two powerful men did not notice you. I can't even say anything. I want to spit on the author and spit on Xingzi.

The setting of this book is really great, but it's a pity that so many people criticize it

The setting is really great. I want to read it again after watching it. I like the setting of the integration of the cultivation side and the physical side.

There is no hostility, and the protagonist's behavior does not become as arrogant and ruthless as the gods in the advanced realm. This kind of ancient novel is quite rare. In the past, it was difficult to find novels with a protagonist who is kind, a golden finger, a plot that is not aggrieved, a boring routine, and no cause and effect. Is there any introduction to this kind of novel?

The protagonist is so amazing. He traveled through 16 years from nothing to becoming an immortal through self-cultivation. How can you make it so embarrassing for those seniors who have traveled through world after world and haven't yet touched the truth?

The setting is very good, the writing is so bad that I have nothing to say, and there is no main line. You can just jump to dozens of chapters and read it.

I just found a fan of a book called Wahuang's Experience. The writing is terrible←_←

After reading two pages, I feel so stiff. The writing is too stiff. The concept is good but the writing is not good.

This protagonist is not qualified at all, he is too naive

What a mess! What kind of luck do you have so many treasures! Each and every name is scary to death.

The subject matter is good, the idea is good, and the setting is good but there is no main line. It feels like an otaku talking to himself The final ending is even more hasty. . . I barely finished reading it when I was in a book shortage.

What kind of rubbish is written? A person in the realm of gods in the eternal true world. In the vast world, he is afraid of a supreme being who is inferior to himself. The 13 treasures on the protagonist's body are vegetarian?

This book has almost 300,000 words. Overall, the writing is quite fresh. However, if the book continues to be written as it is now, it will probably not do well on the shelves. Now that I see it, I find that the author has too little description of the eternal true world. When traveling to the eternal true world, it should be based on the eternal true world. , There is no point in always messing around in the small world. It is better to find ten or eight prehistoric worlds and let them embark on different developments. I have been following up on the updates. I just hope that the author will write better and get better results. No one will order it and there will be no motivation to write it down. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

I can't understand it, the writing style is so weird, I'm confused