The Fool Is in Death

The author's mentality is very good, but it doesn't matter. It's probably the first time to write a fanfic, so I write whatever comes to mind. The previous plot was not arranged well, and suddenly I had an idea, which led to the confusion of the plot. The author should pay attention to that there should be at most one copy of each plot. If there are too many, it will be confusing. Just control the things that may happen in one thing to be logical. Slowly guide the next plot, and that should be it.

The author has a good attitude, and I have seen the author learn from experience in the comment area. I believe this will also be the capital for you to write better and better. I hope the author will have a clear outline before writing a book in the future. He can't think of where to write. The whole book is very confusing. Many plot settings are forced to explain, and there is no good foreshadowing. For the male protagonist The positioning of the title should be clear. The male protagonist of this book gave me a feeling of split personality when I read it. There will be a completely different character in one or two chapters. Although the author wants to write about the process of change, it is very poisonous for people who read the book now. People will not feel that the protagonist has grown up, but will feel that the previous protagonist has no brains and is like a retard. I was speechless and had no motivation to continue reading.

Wasting time regretting not reading book reviews

After looking at the table of contents, Yuha died before Aizen evolved.

By the way, what exactly is a fool? Grim Reaper? Virtual?

I didn't read the book, I only read your testimonials... Since you are writing online literature, don't write your own experiences into novels. It is a big taboo for online books to abuse their masters nowadays... After all, most online books are for entertainment and fun. Maybe it's not that you're not suitable for this industry, or that your writing isn't good, but that your mentality is not right.

This is probably the most frustrating fanfic I've ever seen. . .

Has the author graduated from elementary school? ! This kind of writing is probably not even in the sixth grade of elementary school!

Thank you for letting me see the finished book of Death

I traveled through YY while lying in bed in an old abandoned house, and then choked to death on bread. This filial son protagonist really persuaded me to quit 👴🏿

Death fanfic, there are too many secondary protagonists

Alas, a fool is a fool. Are you stupid?

The protagonist really lives up to his name - Idiot

After reading more than 10 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist must be the villain of another novel. He pretended to be abused, was abused when he broke out, knelt down and licked him after being plotted, and was abused from beginning to end, still being abused by an unknown minor character! ! !

Alas, no one writes this kind of novel, so I can only make do with it and almost vomit.

Too messy 😴

This is not a fool in death, this is a fool in death

I jumped to watch it. Others treat you as a stepping stone, but then you become friends. After being told by Aizen, he immediately became tired of the world. At first, he thought about defeating Aizen, but then he started to get involved with him.

I feel that the protagonist is a bit weak. Even if Bengyu is not complete, at least don't wait for the plot to begin. The complete Ten Blades can pick out several captain-level players. Besides, the protagonist should not be strengthened anymore. After all, he is a leader. I feel like he will be bullied every minute.

It almost didn't reach 600,000 words, which is a pity... I've been very busy this week, so I only have time to check it out now. I think it's pretty good. I've opened a new book and I'm going to advertise it, come on! By the way, I'm almost finished... In tears...😭

This book is poisonous, and it is not as good as ordinary literature. Complaints are not like complaints. The prose is too far-fetched and the writing style is like that of a primary school student. I don't know what to say.

It's so beautiful. I strongly urge everyone to read it several times to understand the author's true meaning.

You don't even have a knife, how can you start communicating?

After reading the first chapter, the key words are high school students, video game stores, roads, and speeding trucks, which at least proves that this world is after the 1980s and 1990s. Entering Soul Society, Xiaobai has not yet entered school. Now do the math, from the time Xiaobai went to school to the time he joined the 10th division and learned the swastika interpretation, and then from the time Isshin disappears in the world to the time Ichigo grows up, it must be more than 50 years. At the beginning of the plot, did the author carefully calculate how many years he was alive?

Limited writing power, blank writing

Does the author know that there is a comic centered around "The Fool"? The Fool is a title, a title for the leader of an organization, a legacy left by a power possessor with certain characteristics to people of the same character, and it is also a back-up, a conspiracy, and a trap.

Most of those who write Bleach fanfics have probably never read the anime or manga. It's about reiatsu, not spiritual power. Author, understand?