Naruto's Balanced Ninja Way

That's disgusting. Are you trying to clear Danzo's name? Also: Jiraiya should be able to lead him to the right path. As long as Konoha's overall strength can be enhanced, there is nothing wrong with abandoning one of the future elites. Are these words what that bastard Danzo would say? Are you kidding me? The author has watched Naruto? It's written so magnificently, with beautiful friends everywhere and heaven everywhere?

Balance means that when a bad person dies, a good person dies at the same time. Therefore, the Balance sect in the old era did not take action easily. Even if it is to kill a bad person, he must kill the person before he can kill it. This is the true face of Balance. I really don't understand what is good about Balance. Many times, I can only watch some things happen.

There was a problem with the identity of the protagonist from the time travel from the very beginning. He was in the elite class with Minato Kushina. You thought you were Naruto! ! !

You are really Konoha's dog. Sarutobi Hiruzen didn't even protect you, but even let people read your mind. The Yamanaka family came to see your memory, I'm convinced. You are still loyal to Konoha. 🐶🐶🐶I really regret looking at you

Here we go again... Why do time travel always start in kindergarten? It's disgusting to pretend to be young... A kid in kindergarten will show off his skills at will, and either Sannin or Danzo will grab him, and then the top management of Konoha will start to scheming... It's like seeing a kid who can count one, two, three, four, and thinking that he will become a doctor of mathematics, and his brain is sick...

No need to look at this. The name of the protagonist is embarrassing

Now there are five ninjas in the League of Legends, and Zed's disciple Kayn appears on the scene.

Halfway through I watched it and I really couldn't stand it anymore. As a time traveler, Pigfoot has also watched Naruto. He couldn't even recognize Ice Release in the Chunin Exam. Moreover, Pigfoot's personality setting is problematic and he is a complete noob.

Can't we just call him Truman? This name looks like a drama.

The plot with the Hinata family. . . . A bit taken for granted. The Sannin part is also a little bit poisonous, and I looked a little bit like that.

I feel like the writing is getting more and more naive~ No matter the plot or the characters, the only thing that can be seen is some of the author's thoughts, but this kind of description is really poisonous

I feel that the setting of this book is very good and should be very strong. Unfortunately, the author's writing style is so bad that such a good setting is wasted.

I looked at a few pictures and stopped reading! I leave it to you Shennong 🤭

I can't stand a few chapters anymore. Maybe I'm picky after reading too many fan works?

Why are the names of the protagonists in many Japanese time-travel anime so weird?

The setting is good, but the beginning is completely messed up. The shadow ability of the Four Ninjas can be integrated into the shadow, so the protagonist is best from the Nara clan. The next best choice is Kurama. If you like to write about orphans, you can choose a declining clan with Yin Escape Secret Technique or Yin Escape talent. Otherwise, the back will not be round. Secondly, I am cautious that the first character is completely wrong. The first one should be Akali's superb physical skills and the use of various ninja tools, which can be smoothly cut in. It is enough before graduating from Ninja School. You can write more in the early stage. Characters can study various abilities (throwing ninja tools, using smoke bombs, using Senbon and poisoning, basic medical ninjutsu and first aid). After graduation, you can activate the second character and it is recommended to choose tribulation. (At this time, it can be said that family secrets, bloodline awakening... Can all be rounded off very well). The main plot can be written about battles, interactions with plot characters such as Minato, and the deeper use of abilities after battles to create forms (using Yin Escape) Yin Escape creates a weapon fist blade, condenses the shadow to deceive the enemy, combines it with the avatar technique to transpose the shadow, condenses the shuriken, and later combines it with the shadow clone and the soul secret technique to create a shadow soldier similar to Jackie Chan's Adventures, and can enter the ninja battle In order to have a crisis in the mid-term and then release a third character, it is recommended to strengthen Kailan's talent again and have better use of thunder escape. (I won't go into details about the various thunder escapes in the ninja world, especially Raikage's thunder escape armor, which is especially suitable for Kailan) It is best for Shen to come out last. Spirit blades and spirit blades certainly have souls. Use part of your own soul and the branches of divine branches to forge your own spirit blades. At the same time, awakening Shen will have the possibility of communicating with the spirit world. At this stage, you can start writing the immortal mode and let the protagonist practice flying thunder god, and start to slowly awaken the immortal body (the immortal body will be completed after the final training to the level of the Otsutsuki clan. If you want to continue writing, you can use the ability of Goldfinger to travel to other fan animations)

Why did Zie escape? Then skipping directly to the fourth battle feels a bit broken. Is it necessary to finish the rhythm?

Konoha is the darkest. It looks harmonious but is actually the darkest. Other shinobi villages are dark on the bright side. Konoha looks harmonious but is actually dark.

The Kinkou has been confused by the author! I don't understand what the teachings and practical actions you wrote are. The main character's behavior is so childish.

The pretense is so stiff that I'm going to get cancer when I see it.

You can open a Kinkou sect, which is very insightful.

Very poisonous

What do you mean you have nothing to do with Kaguya Otsutsuki? Where did the chakra in you come from?

Fugaku is only two years older than Minato. Minato has just graduated, or graduated early. He is only eight or nine years old, but Fugaku is already the captain of the police force. Looking at what you wrote, Fugaku must be twenty years old. You are really awesome. The protagonist is even more outrageous, just a show-off.

Chapter 1: Persuading to Quit

How to do this reading click minus one (⊙o⊙)!

Why can't the soul blade be used directly? Isn't it unnecessary to find a weapon to fuse with it? Wouldn't it be cooler to just use the soul blade? By the time you take the time to fuse the soul blade with the weapon, hasn't the powerful teleportation thing already entered your body?

Equilibrium means killing a person and then reviving it, and then killing and reviving it again, and the cycle continues. Therefore, equilibrium generally does not occur because it is busy between killing and reviving a person.

Exist? Can anyone recommend pig trotters from other Ninja Villages? Why is it all the will of Konoha Fire? ?