Secret Scroll of Magic

The plot and characters are very childish and over-the-top, and too much is embarrassing. For example, the one who emphasizes that he is a magician and gets angry all the time is not like a real person at all, like the laughing corner in the animation who is labeled "irritable". I suggest you practice how to draw characters, it's too stiff now. There is also the funny second-generation rich man Han Xuanbing who said that the female protagonist cannot be allowed to see magic, so if the male protagonist becomes a magician, he will be killed; how can people be so shameless? Isn't he a magician himself? Why are you still hanging around in front of the heroine?

I recommend "Life of a Superpowered Person from Scratch". I know the ads are annoying, so I would like to say sorry here.

I posted an article on Qidian. The only reader is a good friend. He threatened me today that if he was still a reader, he would tie me to the bed and penetrate me with a 30 cm diameter object. In order to stop him coveting my body, I have no choice but to advertise. Please forgive me. The title of the book is "I'm Really a Singer"

What the hell, can you still recommend something like this? I can't stand the first chapter anymore. How old are you, the author? It's not a curse word, but when I see your writing, I know that you are still a pure white young man! Your book will definitely be published unless there is a shady plot