Red Mansion Official

I'll give it three and a half stars. This book has its merits, and some things are described delicately, but it has a lot of flaws. 1. The Xue family's wealth is not limited to that. In the early stage, they even struggled to pay for the funeral. It should be noted that even in the original work, Xue Pan and the three Aunt Xue who had defected to the Jia family were able to send the coffin to Qin Keqing when he died. 2. Self-contradictory, some settings are a bit silly. I won't talk about the early struggle with the Five Fangs and Eight Fangs for control, but let's talk about the Yangzhou Salt Policy. Lin Ruhai was besieged by the transshipment envoy and the Hou family and other salt merchants, but there was nothing he could do. Then the protagonist ransacked the house and took advantage of others. This was so contradictory. May I ask where the protagonist's power comes from? Since the Salt Road Censor's Yamen has salt patrol soldiers who have the power to kill, and Lin Ruhai himself was on an errand under orders, but he was actually besieged? If Lin Ruhai was to be besieged or even put under house arrest, wouldn't it be easier to directly use force on Xue Pan? In addition, the proposal of marriage by the Hou family was inexplicable. If Lin Ruhai was to surrender, how could it be through marriage? This is particularly baffling

I just saw the chapter on the mind-cultivation class, and I couldn't help but post it. It's so interesting! This is the best-written novel among Red Mansions fans. The only shortcoming is that I haven't won an important female role yet! There is no requirement for a harem, but this is too lonely. There are no young girls and young women who are destined to be together. This is a red mansion with many beauties! My dear author.

I have read a lot of Red Mansions fan fiction, and all of them have described Jia Baoyu as worthless, a sissy, hypocritical, stubborn, self-righteous, and always stupidly opposed to the protagonist. You are going too far. Although he has some shortcomings, he also has shining points✨ For example, his defense of women's rights, and, well. Besides. . . . . . . Um. . . . Anyway! Baoyu is not that bad, he just likes to have a little temper, isn't he just a naughty kid, isn't he a bit of a sissy, isn't he a bit irresponsible, isn't he a bit ignorant of worldly affairs, isn't he hooking up with Lin Daiyu and many beauties, and even harming them. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Damn it, it really would have been better to just kill him!

There are so many girls in the Red Mansion. Why do you want to write about Aunt Mei and the red plum blossoms all day long? Next time, do you want to write about Chunmei maid? There is also that Yang Zhi who is seeking death all day long. My sister doesn't have as many scenes as them. As a time traveler, Pig's Foot is easier to bully than anyone else. He doesn't have a golden finger, and he doesn't know the plot. The only role of his status as a time traveler is to reduce the psychological burden when he gets involved with Aunt Mei in the future?

I think the author really struggled to write this story about Qin Keqing. There are all kinds of inexplicable tricks. Why is the father-in-law so awesome? The Jia family has been weak for a long time. What's more, there is only one Jia Zhen. If he is killed, he will be killed. Who can say anything? Who can find the cause of death for him? Jia Zhen is a person with five poisons. Everything is complete. Countless people were ruined at his hands. He died while doing harm to the people. The author made the protagonist soft and soft all the way. He flirted with girls in various ways before. Now he has left it alone. Now he wants to send troops to fight. It is a good Red Mansions fan fiction that turns the story into an alternate history. What's the matter? Dream of Red Mansions is a wonderful book. It has nearly a million words in it. It's not enough for you to write. You insist on talking about useless things.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I am currently unable to detoxify and resigned. Xue Pan himself has absolutely no ambition for mischief. Not to mention how funny his methods of dealing with troubles in the Xue family are, I will say that he is quite poisonous at the moment. When I came to visit Lin Ruhai, an interception was arranged at the agreed time? When visiting the host, it is the host's business whether they see him or not. How dare a visitor make trouble at the door? At first I thought it was some high-ranking official, but it turned out to be a wealthy businessman? The funniest thing is that in order to arrange for the protagonist to be in the limelight, I can even guess that this is a foreshadowing of dealing with Lin Ruhai, and the protagonist is forced to fight with the other party in literature and poetry? Regardless of winning or losing, what does Lin Ruhai think? Is the protagonist still a stupid overlord? In addition to being drunk and drunk, there is still poison

I only read the beginning. Let me talk about a few points. First, you are writing about Red Mansions, so it must be consistent with the original work. Look at how many other households of the Xue family you wrote earn money. Aunt Xue and Baochai can be said to have no power to fight back. Xue Pan is another idiot in the original work. If the protagonist did not travel through the past, how did Aunt Xue keep the family property? 2. A person travels to ancient times and is in a strange environment. As long as he is not stupid, he should be careful in his words and actions, right? And how can the protagonist you write say the words of King Qin Baojia? Why do you say that men and women are equal? Shi Lezhi? Do you think the emperor does not exist? Is it really good for the protagonist to talk about equality between men and women in an ancient society where power is dominated by defenders of male rights? No matter how modern the protagonist's thinking is, it can't be expressed externally. If you write a book just for your own entertainment, then I won't say anything. If you want to achieve some results in your writing, you should be more rigorous in the future!

Is there something wrong with the protagonist? To make amends for a maid, but also to have an aunt, does she want to go to heaven? I have read so many novels, but I have never seen one more aggrieved than the protagonist. Does the protagonist want to promote equality for everyone?

Baochai's brother who traveled through time is just like Lin's sister and her father who traveled through time. They are all idiots. Baochai can't even time-travel you🔨

I feel like the protagonist has a bit of a mean streak and likes to be a bit unruly. Not to mention that the personal girl chose Yang Zhi, but she was very proud of Qingwen. I don't remember anything about being ridiculed by Qingwen before. A master is often scolded by a girl and looks down on him. What a unique character. It feels like this master is holding his breath a little. Do you feel the same way?

Um, I feel like Qingwen is too proud of her favor. In ancient times, if a maid really dared to hit her master and disfigure her, she would be beaten to death. The protagonist can't spoil her too much, really.

I came here to watch a garden show, but it turned out that they were fighting for the family property and Aunt Mei. It was not interesting. They were a group of living people. How could the protagonist be smart enough to outwit them? Who from a wealthy family and businessman would lose to the protagonist in a intrigue and intrigue, like a clown?

I tried the poison and it was already poisonous. The protagonist said he was a dull overlord, but he didn't feel any pleasure at all. All the enemies' IQs are online. My teammates can't be called pig teammates, but they are not far apart. The most poisonous part is that when facing Jia Yucun, he used him instead of killing him first. Even those who don't watch Red Mansions very much know that this person is a wolf-hearted person. Is it okay to let such a person know too much about you when you are a novice? At this point, the poison is killing people. Come on, author.

This book is indeed rubbish. I didn't believe it at first. After reading a few chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. The beginning was verbose for a long time and the plot made no sense. Then your father died and the funeral cost less than a few thousand taels of silver. The whole Xue family had no money in their account. It was really ridiculous. When I turned around and met a girl in the house, I went up to tease her and found out that your father was still there and not buried. It was really an eyesore. .

I finally found someone who traveled through time and became Xue Pan. What the hell is written here?

They persuaded me to give up at the beginning, but I still felt that I was quite resistant to beatings. But when I saw that I was a doctor in the palace and treated everyone I saw, I suddenly died from the poison!

A fool travels through the world of Red Mansions

If you have time to write millions of words, wouldn't it be better to find a job in an electronics factory? Who will dress up as Xue Pan? Baochai is gone. At least half of the readers were screened out by you. 1/3 Of the Xue Party and 1/3 of the Neutral Party were persuaded to leave.

It's poisonous…and you don't even have a few thousand taels of silver? Do you have some misunderstandings about the accumulation of generations of wealthy families? Also, management rights and real estate rights are separate. I remember in the original book, his mother sold the property rights for at least one million taels and brought them to the Jia family. What the hell are you writing, and the part where his eighth uncle dared to rob his father's aunt, I can't complain about (~_~;) It's basically impossible for such a thing to happen before being kicked out of the house. What do you think the clan family law is used for? As a clan leader, this kind of thing must be done by opening the ancestral hall and coming to each room to ask for family advice... He is basically dead.

I've seen so many Red Mansions reborn, but I've never seen one this rubbish.

To be honest, this book is a bit mindless. I remember that the original book said that the Xue family's mother and son sold all their property, got millions of silver, and went to the capital. Just leave the Imperial Merchant Industry and a few gold and silver shops. Why did you write that it only cost tens of thousands of silver? You still don't have any money. You were forced to sell your stewardship for 50,000 silver to use it as capital. You can obviously follow the example in the original work and sell the property for millions of dollars to use it as capital, but what about his other properties?

Bad review, just read a few chapters. The protagonist, the old uncle, is now at his most awesome. I am speechless when Ji Fang dares to come to seize power. In the original book, it is said that Ji Fang is corrupt and short-selling, but he does not dare to do it openly. In the later stage, when the young master is no longer able, he dares to come openly.

I haven't read it yet, let me ask, did this Xue Pan push Baochai down?

I was persuaded to quit. I feel that Xue Fan is not easy to write. When I read the comments, they were all scolding, so I didn't dare to read 😅

Isn't this the time when Wang Ziteng is really awesome? Does anyone else dare to do this? Aren't you afraid that Wang Ziteng will kill them all?

I don't know what to say, Hedinghong is not this poisonous. . . . I just don't understand. The author's writing is not bad, so why do you have to set up such a plot? Don't you feel something is wrong when you read it? ? ? ? ?

There is heavy snow in good years, and pearls are like earth and gold like iron A skinny camel is bigger than a horse

Historians' mouths are deceitful—a look at the prosperous times  Grassroots History House 03-16 17:38:15 Already followed Related recommendations  Liu Jixing talks about history Interesting literary and historical articles + Follow  The Meaning of the Road Collect Chinese and foreign essences, show philosophical charm, and analyze the meaning of life! + Follow  Shi Haixieying History is not in the altar, nor in hell, bring all history back to the world + Follow  Cold Weapon Research Institute Eighteen kinds of weapons, proficient in all + Follow  War Chronicles The true story behind the war that can withstand verification + Follow  Favorite History Introducing ancient and modern Chinese and foreign history, peek into the details of the sea of history + Follow  This is war The only professional tactical analysis account on the entire network + Follow  We share the beauty of the moon Share with everyone and create wonderful pictures, texts and videos + Follow  The wind has a long eye Pictures on the left and history on the right, history and geography are indistinguishable + Follow  Shanchuan Literary Society History lecturer and writer association member Welcome to Shanchuan Space, cook wine and discuss history, talk about ancient and modern times + Paying attention to history is like a little girl who is constantly being dressed up. The longer the distance, the more difficult it becomes to distinguish the true from the false. If you want to distinguish between the false and the true, you need a pair of sharp eyes to point to the essence! So who is dressing up history? In addition to the ruthless years, there are also historians who compile history. Official history is taboo for the venerable, while unofficial history is often mixed with personal emotions and intertwined, making it dizzying and difficult to tell the truth from the false! In recent years, various time-travel dramas have emerged one after another. Many friends who are girls at heart have chatted with me and always want to ask if time-travel could be achieved, which era would be the best? And I always answer in a very ignorant way: Just live in the present. If you travel to any time in ancient times, you will never survive more than two episodes!  Some people think, weren't there several prosperous times in ancient times? If you travel to the prosperous times, you can't be wrong, right? Indeed, history always moves forward in the alternation of governance and chaos. Great governance such as Wenjing, Zhenguan, Song Renzong, Ming Renxuan, the prosperous era of Kangxi, Yongzheng and Qianlong, among which the most praised ones are none other than the prosperous era of Renzong of Song Dynasty! There are four general criteria for historians to judge prosperous times: 1. Stable life; 2. Economic prosperity; 3. Cultural prosperity; 4. Population increase. As far as these four points are concerned, the Renzong Dynasty barely meets the requirements, but the living standards of the people at the bottom are not considered! This makes no sense! Historians commented on the prosperous age of Renzong: the world was full of Yongxi, the wilderness was peaceful, scholars and farmers were happy in their work, and the civil and military were loyal and good. But what is the reality? Let me analyze it in detail!  As we all know, the Northern Song Dynasty suffered more defeats than wins in its foreign wars, but even during the Renzong period, known as the prosperous age, the military was in a mess! In 1038 AD, Dangxiang Li Yuanhao proclaimed himself the emperor and founded the country. The country was named Daxia. In order to be recognized by the Song Dynasty, he launched wars one after another! Song Xia fought against Sanchuankou in the first battle, then fought against Shuichuan, and fought in Dingchuan Village three times. What was disappointing was that the Song Dynasty was defeated in three battles, losing dozens of generals, tens of thousands of soldiers, countless grain, grass, horses and baggage, and was even forced to sign an unequal treaty with Xixia! The losses of the war and the annual gifts to Xixia will undoubtedly be passed on to the people! Since the battlefield was on the border between Song and Xia, it naturally did not directly affect many civilians, but it increased the burden on farmers. This is really not what a prosperous era should be like!  As for the economy, in terms of total GDP, the Renzong era did reach its peak, with the highest income reaching 44 million yuan, dozens of times that of the peak period of the Tang Dynasty! However, if the national treasury has money, will people's lives be better? Uncertain! A true wise king knows how to hide wealth from the people, rather than drain it and fish for it! In the Song Dynasty, land annexation was serious and collusion between officials and gentry was rampant. Often, powerful and wealthy households had more land but lighter taxes, while poor people had less land and higher taxes! In an era when emperors and scholar-bureaucrats ruled the world together, the scholar-bureaucrats, as a privileged class, did not have to pay taxes. Here comes the question. The tycoons and scholar-bureaucrats who control most of the society's wealth either pay light taxes or don't pay them at all. So what supports the high GDP? The answer is of course the poor farmers! That's why the literati wrote: "The crawling child, the hunchbacked centenarian. The hungry woman chirps even more, her face is shaggy." You can imagine what a miserable picture this is!  Data show that during the 319 years of the Song Dynasty, there were more than 430 peasant uprisings, the highest number in Chinese history! There were more than 40 times during the Renzong era that was called the prosperous age, which shows that people's lives in the prosperous age were no better than at other times! The most praised thing about Renzong's prosperous period is that famous ministers and capable ministers emerged in large numbers, and literati gathered together, such as Bao Zheng, Han Qi, Fu Bi, Fan Zhongyan, Ouyang Xiu, Yan Shu, etc., As the saying goes, the stars are bright! Politically, the king is wise and the ministers are wise, the whole country is prosperous and peaceful, and the literati feel comfortable reciting poems and writing lyrics! This is of course inseparable from Renzong's generous character and the Song Dynasty's system that valued literature over military affairs! But don't forget that education was not popular at that time. It can be said that educational resources were only popularized in a small area, and the vast majority of poor people were still illiterate! For farmers who still lack adequate food and clothing, what benefits can cultural prosperity bring? Cultural prosperity benefits the privileged class of literati, officials, just like economic prosperity benefits the rich and powerful. It supports everything behind them, and it is always the poor people who pay silently! It can be said that in such a hierarchical society, the more prosperous the upper class is, the more severe the suffering of the lower class people will be! The historian who wrote the book was a member of the privileged class. Naturally, he could only see this ethereal prosperity. How could he push aside the clouds and see the suffering of the people at the bottom? What's more, the aloof Emperor Renzong?  However, one thing needs to be explained. The prosperity of economy and culture has promoted the development of science and technology. The emergence of three of the four major civilizations is not unrelated to this. In addition, water conservancy and farming technology have also been developed, and land output has been improved. This seems to benefit the people, but if you think about it carefully, it is not that simple. The increase in land output directly led to the growth of population, becoming the last standard of the prosperous age described by historians! As the population grows, tax revenue naturally increases. In this way, the burden on families has not been reduced, the suffering of the people remains the same, and the living standards have not been improved! As early as the Chunhua period, the Song Dynasty was only half a century old, and the people were already in a situation where "the rich have fields and the poor have no place to stand"! So Wang Xiaobo raised his arms and shouted: "I am suffering from the inequality between rich and poor, and now it is for you to equalize it." The poor people all responded! A massive peasant uprising did not fail to sound the alarm for the Song court. However, faced with such a serious gap between the rich and the poor, the Song court could not come up with a solution. In addition, the "three redundancies" were becoming increasingly serious, and the Renzong Dynasty was already at a critical moment! Although Fan Zhongyan's reform failed, it won a breathing space and bought time for Wang Anshi's subsequent reform! If not, Shu has no idea whether there will be a Song Dynasty after Renzong! Can such a prosperous age be called a prosperous age? Under the feudal system, prosperity was a prosperous age for the upper class, but it was a disaster for the people at the bottom! How can it be considered a prosperous age if we don't pay attention to people's livelihood! If you want to talk about the prosperous times, let's look at the present day!  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This is the second time I opened it and I planned to read it, but the plot was full of flaws twice.

The rest of Jia Baoyu is fine, but it's the fact that he's so good at Long Yang that makes it hard for me to like Jia Baoyu!