Journey to the West: Killing Immortals and Killing Buddhas

First of all, I think one of the problems with this article is that the pace is too fast. Even in the fast-food online writing market, it is a bit too fast. This is why some readers find it difficult to understand. For example, the author's first article is really too fast, and he directly enters the world of Journey to the West. I think the author's idea is to get into the fun at once, without any redundant narrative. But as a reader, I still feel that some necessary foreshadowing is needed, including the protagonist's mentality in the real world, the protagonist's sympathy for Sun Wukong in the original Journey to the West, and why the author wanted to change the story of Journey to the West. Another problem is the technical terminology, which is similar to cause and effect, karma, delusion, asura, and calamity. Many of them are Buddhist and Taoist vocabulary, and there are also many names of mythological characters. I think many readers have only a partial understanding of it. To be honest, everyone has read Journey to the West, but a few people have read the original work, and a few readers understand Buddhism and Taoism. To a certain extent, these terms hinder readers' judgment of the grade system and slow down the reading speed. The author has not put it on the shelves yet. I think I can polish my book a little more. No book is completed overnight. Even a great master will revise it repeatedly, because if you look back at what you have written, you will definitely find loopholes. Authors, don't plan to rush into the market from the beginning. Sometimes the difference between quality and quality is just a few milliseconds. Try your best to write well, and you will eventually succeed.

Can you please stop adding some random things?

Come quietly, go silently. Goodbye author, the book doesn't fit my tongue.

A mess. . . . . . . . Sit back and wait for the rush

Poison! Very poisonous! Be careful! From a human to the Monkey King, without any inner description, he suddenly became the monkey king, and suddenly he was able to scheme against the saint? Suddenly, many people were willing to help him, and suddenly he knew many secrets, etc., Etc., Endless embarrassments and foreshadowings that were forcibly laid, and he suffered a heavy blow. . . .

The first part is pretty good, but I don't know what is going on in the second part. Maybe the author thinks how to write it, but the readers simply can't understand what is going on when there are some missing things. This may be the reason why your book is not popular.

Disgusting, I read a few reviews, is this book that good? I thought it was flashy, so I was too lazy to click on it.