Information Super Evolution

This pig's feet must have a lot of brains! With this IQ, he's not even as good as a primary school student! Are you kidding me? There are still people reading this kind of book!

I read so many chapters and only saw the author calling it schizophrenia in his own dialogue.

It is obvious that the author imitated, or to put it nicely, he paid tribute to the Xiling Empire. The character attributes, world background and even the world view can all see the shadow of Xiling, but. . . How should I put it, lack of writing power, or lack of experience. In some places, they tried to force comedy and arranged for the characters to be embarrassed. For example, Lilia (whose name I just couldn't remember after reading it) punched the system and then fell down painfully. I was so embarrassed that my cancer had spread in the late stage. Isn't this funny? Without talking about strength, muscles, and ability to resist blows, it just felt uncomfortable to watch alone. As for the protagonist's character setting, I watched the robbery in the first few chapters. Hey, I looked at the protagonist and felt that he was flexible, witty, and mature enough. After the system was launched, he looked like a middle school boy. He was still in junior high school instead of high school. He was struggling in society as mentioned before, and he had no composure at all, or it was not reflected. I jumped to see a part of Guoan acting in "Out to Eat". Maybe I didn't see it clearly? In short, the camera judged that Loli discovered the protagonist first and then found out, exm? Where is my sister? And it's based on facial expression analysis. Could it be that the younger sister, who is only a senior in high school, is more calm than her older brother? Later, when traveling through the Three Belts and One Planet, Guoan came in inexplicably. Brother Xiling Empire took Guoan away because the equipment was in disrepair. You opened the door by a human, and why should you go to an abandoned factory? Can't you travel through it yourself? There is also the green fire, which is obviously the big boss or stage boss set by the protagonist. The villain has been the green fire for quite some time, but! But wasn't Loli sealed by the Protoss? Then the Protoss would also touch at least Loli's world. After all, they are natural enemies of order, and the information provided by Green Fire a long time ago was more accurate, right?

It's really fun, but the main character is too *thin*. Having the power of God and being able to create things at will, are you still afraid of the country and the earth? If the earth explodes, the protagonist will be fine. You still have such a strong ability and still collect rags? Even if the protagonist wants to live a normal life, it is not easy to have the ability to make money. Don't mention making valuables or high technology, just be lazy and let the system transfer bad debts in foreign banks at will, and easily make hundreds of millions, and then you can be cool.

You are right, I am not very good at layout. Because I imitated hope Ling and Anomaly in the beginning, and I lacked the ability to control the plot, I felt that the writing was broken. But only with criticism can we make progress. I have clearly seen some shortcomings and will correct them later. How should I put it? I care too much about the plot and the overall situation, so when I write about the details and characters, I write for my own ideas and situation. I kind of neglected the character creation. Well, the first book, Forgiveness. I just hope that I can write well later. In the past two days, I have written each chapter into a detailed outline according to the instructions of a friend, and I feel like I have caught something. So, I will try my best.

Recommended vote support But I have to say that this book still has some shortcomings I won't mention the main character's name, plus the writing style makes it seem like it's imitating Yuantong. Secondly, the part about going to the moon and then being discovered by the government and collecting debts is definitely a poisonous point, just like the protagonist directly goes to fight with the legions who are not tired later. As a god, I feel so aggrieved when facing a mortal, I..., And the country actually restricts the protagonist's actions... It is recommended that the author should change these first, otherwise it will be too unreasonable and it will be difficult to become popular.

Do you know why you are still at level 1? The male protagonists are so poorly portrayed, so you are lucky to be signed. A man whose parents died, was forced to live in peace due to debt collection, and later worked as a rag collector for many years. He met Goldfinger, went to several worlds, was beaten to pieces, almost destroyed, and came into contact with all kinds of people, including those with the highest power. When he returned to the original place, he still had a petty bourgeois mentality, and he was still a soft-eared person. Let me ask you, the author, did you have no outline or look back when you wrote? This kind of person may have a mentality like a petty citizen and is afraid of officials. Do you get scared when you see rich people? Neither logic nor theory makes sense. Due to the failure of the male protagonist, only four-fifths of your book was sold out.

I thought it was God, but it turned out to be nerves. It's so messy, the idea is clever, but the writing is a mess. According to you, information particles construct everything, so can everything be eliminated? To put it simply, everything we retain in our cognition is information-based existence. If one is eliminated, the entire world will not know its existence? Well, since I am the protagonist, I can construct a story directly. I can only look at it and think about it, okay? Every author likes to let the protagonist gain great power and then let the country know about it, triggering a series of plots! However, I don't have any good writing skills. To be honest, it's a good idea but a lot of poison. I have read more than a hundred chapters, and we have been poisoned together. I have a sister who is poisonous, and let the country know about poison. I want to be an ordinary person and suppress my ability to make money honestly. Two worlds written poisonously. Totally self-talking poison

The main character of this book reminded me of a joke about a king. It is said that an ordinary man named XX II became the king inexplicably because of the great changes in the country and he was the only royal bloodline left. Every time he sat on the throne when he went to court, he would tremble and say nothing, so a minister asked: Your Majesty, are you afraid of something? The king said: It turns out that the gangster next door never allowed me to talk nonsense, and he would beat me whenever I spoke. Do you think if he knew I was talking to you now, would he rush into the palace and beat me?

Has anyone seen the back? Just asking, I just read the first few chapters and was poisoned. It seems that the author wants to create a protagonist who is indifferent to fame and wealth, and still maintains the mentality of an ordinary person after getting the cheat. The problem is that the background has a sister who is going to college. The family has enough money but is not rich. This contradiction makes me choke. Since you are not the second generation of rich people, nor are you a lonely person with no worries, where did your indifferent mentality come from? How can you delay and take your time after getting a cheat? Not in a hurry? Not curious? Not impatient? 😅 The beginning was a bit too poisonous, and I didn't dare to read the rest. Can anyone tell me who has seen it? If only it was still that poisonous. If possible, skip the beginning and continue.

I saw that the plot in Chapter 113 was really uncomfortable. A friend in the previous book review said it very well. The protagonist obviously has divine abilities, but he has to do everything in an ordinary way. In the end, there is no way around it and he has to use his own abilities to solve it. First of all, I think readers come to this book for the invincible and relaxing story in the introduction, or in other words, they come for the protagonist's superpowers to see how the protagonist is superhuman. Why do you want to depict everything in the way of ordinary people? I've said too much, let's just talk about the plot I saw, and without mentioning anything else, I just said that I owed money. I clearly called Zhao Ran home and gave her the IOU. I just left a sentence. Do you want it or do I want it? I want them to be mentally prepared. Just because of the protagonist's awesomeness, let alone 10 billion or 100 billion, the country will have to send it, and there will be absolutely no complaints. Even the country is eager for the protagonist to ask him to do things.

You have to lose your mind when reading this book, otherwise it will have an indelible impact on your thinking.

No one will read it until Chapter 5. . . . . . .

There are only five wonderful pictures. After the system came out, the quality dropped so much that it slipped away.

Apart from the novelty of the main character's golden finger, this book is a piece of shit.

In Chapter 42, the author said that he had long wanted to complain about novels such as Awakening through the Forest and Goldfinger Meeting a Cute Girl, but author, is there any difference between this book and those? It would be better to go to Shuke to publish a homely article like this! Is the author really working in radio and television? I feel like radio and television is going to be finished, so help me

It's poisonous and schizophrenic. The author flatters himself and thinks he writes well, but in fact it's garbage. Fortunately, since you created the system, 95% of your book has crashed and cannot be read. I read a StarCraft novel before and I didn't know what it was about. I couldn't understand it at all. It added a bunch of drama words and descriptions, and the narration was a mess.

It feels like the names of the protagonists in Anecdotes about Abnormal Creatures are very similar.

Three recommendation votes are given with both hands. The book is good, but I still hope that the author can improve the protagonist's IQ. Although the protagonist is a god with human emotions, he is still indispensable for his divine power and divine grace.

Others are fine, but when I saw that the science subject had a perfect score of 124, a few points were deducted for the liberal arts essay... What era was this exam pattern...

Haven't you noticed that the system is a tsundere? I talk a lot about it, but in fact, the level of service is comparable to health care! It is much better than the system in ordinary novels that nominally serves but defrauds the protagonist in various ways! Besides, this system is not a regular system in the system flow. Compared with Haoshen, the system is more like a god!

Okay, although the protagonist is a bit useless, it fits the otaku style of writing, or this is the right way to write it.

To be honest, things like the interaction between authors in the book, no next chapter, emojis, etc., Can easily cause drama, okay? Most people will abandon the book after seeing this. I really don't understand you. This kind of writing method is obviously of no benefit, but it is easy to lose readers, and you still have to use it. If you don't add these, it will look better and have better continuity.

That's what's called scoring. Everyone evaluates based on their true feelings. If you have any opinions, please comment below, such as the degree of relaxation and unrestrainedness of the plot. I will satisfy everyone without affecting the established main line.

There is a strong Xiling wind, wait, the so-called gods are not the so-called gods, are they the guys from the Xiling God Clan and the Star Realm God Clan?

Support the author and write well

Let me tell you a sad thing. In the past few days, I have been grading the high school entrance examination papers at the Education Bureau.

Such an awesome beginning, but at the end you actually told me to collect old newspapers. . . .

You set the system to have no emotions, how lofty is it, right? Now it's a funny version.

Where did the protagonist's brainlessness go?