Emperor Wei

It's such a pity that Young Master Xi and Wuji couldn't be together!

I read these two chapters in one go, and I truly admire the author's masterful use of ancient battle formations.

I just read a little bit, and I found something really awful! You're saying a good hand is played terribly, and if you want the protagonist to become emperor, then what are you doing? A power struggle is the best way, yet you insist on keeping his brother alive. It gives the impression of indecisiveness.

It was well-written, why did you stop writing? This book has great potential!

Why are there so few accounts of the Warring States period, specifically the state of Wei?

There's a lack of foreshadowing, few plot holes, and intense conflict; much of the plot is glossed over in a bland way. The characters' personalities aren't well developed, and their emotions aren't adequately portrayed.

Later on, the introduction of the Ghost King and his inappropriate behavior with his sister became a bit unbearable to watch. His sister knew he was an imposter, yet she still came at him...

[The Rise of the Martial Kingdom, by: The Pen-and-Sword Official] [Clicking this post is an advertisement for (Book Fat)!] During the Warring States period, the feudal lords fought each other, banners obscured the sun, blood flowed like rivers, and heroes of the chaotic era shone like brilliant stars, creating a turbulent picture in this era.

If the author doesn't update soon, they'll have to move on to other battlegrounds!

The protagonist can brag all he wants; he won't die from his suicidal acts. But then he expects everyone to fawn over him—what kind of mentality is that…?