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The writing is so watery, I thought it was okay at first, but as soon as I subscribed, it started to flood, and I repeated the previous chapters over and over again. It was less than 100 chapters, and I really couldn't stand it anymore.

Detailed battles help to increase the sense of immersion. For a historical novel author, everyone has their own areas of expertise and disadvantage. Some write excellent political battles, but are not good at combat, and some are just writing cool articles on the assembly line. In the 20s of the 21st century, society has become more impetuous and restless. The expansion of Internet user groups has led to the emergence of users of different age groups and different quality levels. Young groups have begun to monopolize the right to speak. Internet articles that are refreshing, straightforward, and even illogical have come to the forefront and occupied a favorable position. This is due to the fact that many readers come to read while busy at work. This book has such excellent writing style and plot arrangement. It can even be said that it has rewritten and detailed many major events and scenes in the history of the late Ming Dynasty. It can be said to be extremely excellent, and it is one of the few books that I will choose to read for a long time. Since a certain stage, the range of books I personally choose at the starting point has gradually been limited to excellent rather than refreshing. As a taster, I would rather see excellent works emerge and receive recognition, rather than popular works and refreshing articles becoming popular. Some authors are not telling stories, but intentionally exporting their own worldviews and leading netizens to have some extreme thoughts. This is not advisable. But having said that, it is inevitable that the book expresses personal thoughts, because the structure of the world in the book is also the author's personal understanding of the world. What I want to say is that as a reader, knowing how to respect the author and the direction of his work is the most basic form of courtesy. If some people dislike or find it difficult to read, you can give your opinion instead of expressing excessive dissatisfaction with extremely offensive or venting remarks, and criticizing the author. This is definitely wrong and unfair. A work is the author's hard work, and it is by no means a story belonging to them that some people can manipulate at will. It cannot serve them for their happiness, because "satisfying one group of people will always make another group of people dissatisfied." The author is a storyteller and must be responsible for his own story and his own characters. This is also basic. Defects in a work are inevitable but need to be avoided. I will also take the initiative to tell the problem because it is a good work. As a reader, it is reasonable to give opinions. Respect is always mutual. This comment is not only for this book and the author, but also for some readers or people who will never click here in the future. (The problems in the book are obviously academic ones. For example: the title "Sir" is an official habit that has become popular since the Qing Dynasty. It later declined to the people. It was not popular in the Ming Dynasty officialdom, so it is probably a commonly used title when addressing elders in the family. When it comes to official positions, the author can refer to the official list of previous dynasties to assist in writing. For the time being, I will put forward this modification opinion)

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I want to give it a mixed title, but I don't know if it will be given to me. The book is very good, and it would be even better if it had a title! ! !

This book is very interesting. Thank you for the author. I look forward to the next update!

Wu Sangui's skills are still good, but the protagonist needs to be well educated ο(=•ω＜=)ρ⌒☆

This is my first time reading this type of book haha! I didn't expect it to be very interesting. The male protagonist has a very distinct image. I like it very much. The language is relatively easy to understand. Even though I don't watch male videos, I also like it. Come on!

In the corner of history, a new world is woven. Keep up the good work! Finish it soon!

It was an accidental opportunity that I came across this book, which introduced me to it. The writing in it is wonderful and very good. I also want to give it a title!

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I originally thought it was a masterpiece, but I didn't expect it to be a half-finished book. I haven't finished reading the free chapter, so I have three questions: 1. There is no military training, and the quality of the soldiers suppresses the establishment of slaves. 2. The author's writings completely fail to show the fear that the common people had towards the army in the late Ming Dynasty, and there is no evidence of the army's bullying of the common people by killing good people and taking credit for their merits. 3. When there is no golden finger, nor when the issue of food and salary is not explained. In the end, without explaining in detail how to train Xuanda Town, your town was already able to compete with Dorgon. 4. In the history of the late Ming Dynasty, Xuanda just changed the general soldier. What kind of quality was it? Brother, you imitate Lao Bainiu and want to push forward directly without farming, forcing logic, without training soldiers, and without eating empty wages or drinking blood from soldiers. The most terrifying thing is where your weapons and equipment come from. You still have a fine Numi gun to bring out. Just write it down, if your army has no servants, where will the food come from? Are you counting on the Ministry of War? Still counting on Chongzhen's Industrial War Bureau and Gunpowder Factory. Do you think it will be different if you go to Xuanda University? In fact, you can control no more than 20 excellent soldiers. The author would like to reflect on it The most exciting part of Lao Bainiu is indeed the description of the battlefield, but without farming, your book would become a fairy tale. 🙂

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Not scolding, just confused. Is the late Ming Dynasty a prosperous age? Are those people saints? Does it still need to exist? When it comes to the late Ming Dynasty + Chongzhen, then the Ming Dynasty should die. If you don't have enough ability, you will still be stubborn, and you will be beheaded if you take the blame. Who can bear it, who dares to be loyal, who dares to do things, it's not worth it. First of all, if the protagonist is a time traveler, he should know that the Great Qing Dynasty is in ruins, and the Ming Dynasty is not much better. The protagonist's actions will inevitably offend the interests of the old nobles, and "starting over again" is the most direct and guaranteed method. It's not that I incorrectly think that the Han people cannot be the masters, but I really think that the Ming Dynasty is over. Past groups have been too powerful. Changing the past is as easy as creating the future. The fate of a dynasty can be seen from the rigidity of land annexation and wealth distribution.

There are over a thousand sheets and they are still being used as dogs for the imperial court.

Hahaha, I laughed after reading a few chapters. Each of the Qing soldiers looked like martial arts masters. They hid countless killing moves in the battle formation. They have divine consciousness. This is also the author wrote that he immediately shot heavy bows and arrows at eighty steps and got three out of ten. This is Lu Bu. Licking the Qing soldiers must be consistent with common sense.

The author artificially divides the officials of the Ming Dynasty into two groups, the eunuchs and others, and gives the eunuchs labels such as die-hard traitors. In fact, 99% of the officials are just trying to get promoted and make money to keep their officialdom. It is just human nature. The most disgusting thing is this kind of value system that divides groups into classes.

The book is above the horizontal line and can definitely be read. I have been reading it. Now I have just read about supporting Liaodong. Maybe it is the first time I have written it. There are indeed some problems. Except for combat, other aspects are very general and the focus is not focused enough. For example, his development in Xuanzang, except for military, farming, and business, is basically a few strokes. However, people who read it will find that somehow the protagonist has money and food to support tens of thousands of troops and the people under his rule. But when it comes to the military, every part of the organization is long, often changed, and often appears. It is just like that. My novel has the same subject matter and the battle is just bullshit. People who read it are still like that. There are so many, but the management is well written, the human world is sophisticated, and the various developments are well written. If he had your description of battles, the book would be on a higher level immediately. Also, your emotional scenes are a bit awkward. The dialogue between the two is uncomfortable to watch. Apart from driving a little, there are no highlights. It needs to be strengthened. Another point, the author When you write characters' expressions, don't always smile evilly or evilly. It will appear that you are very incompetent. You are obviously very powerful. These two words always appear, regardless of whether they are enemies or friends. In fact, if you write the right enemy, it can be a cold light flashing in the eyes, or looking at his back like a dead person. It doesn't matter. It's definitely better than having a crooked smile, and it's the same when writing about yourself. Don't smile crookedly or crookedly. Not many people laugh like that. They either laugh out loud, sneer, or turn up the corners of their mouths. Whichever one you use depends on the scene. You're a great writer. I'm just giving you some advice to make it more comfortable for me. Haha, don't take offense!

Don't think that Chongzhen is so unbearable. According to historical evaluation, he was not a king who lost his country, but he was destined to lose his country. When any news is to deceive the king, all officials are only for their own interests. The king can only stick to the ancestral system, and everyone is tied up. After all, Chongzhen is not a time traveler, and his thoughts have limitations. I like the backbone of the Ming Dynasty and Chongzhen's tough choice to hang himself. As an ordinary person, I don't have the courage. Compared to Puyi! They are all very different from the last emperor.

This book is well written but too little. In my mind, the history category is "The Late Ming Dynasty" first. I like to read about farming and hegemony reforms, but I don't like ancient officialdom novels that are purely about power. However, I still like to read modern officialdom novels. Ant Thief, The Age of Huang Tian, ​​A small soldier in the border army at the end of the Ming Dynasty. Not as good as the late Ming Dynasty, but still at the same level. The next level, The Most Romantic of the Three Kingdoms, does not have the cruelty of war like Ant Thieves, and the thrill of fighting for hegemony is not enough. The deer, the deer is not as immersive as the ant thief. I personally like the way the ant thief uses words. The ant thief's struggle for hegemony is really well written. If you like rigorous competition for hegemony and can feel the cruelty of war, the refreshing feeling of gaining power, and the liveliness of the supporting characters, I highly recommend watching Ant Thief Late Ming.

The book looks pretty good, with a few minor flaws, but the flaws are not outweighed. First of all, the protagonist tries to touch himself as little as possible and sheds tears at every turn. This is common at the beginning and is very poisonous. He often bursts out with some lofty thoughts, which is too dramatic. Secondly, the battle is written well, but it is a little delayed. It would be better if it is more concise. Sometimes I scanned it at a glance, because it is really an old woman's foot wrap, smelly and long... Haha! Maybe that's too much, sorry! Again, can you please reduce the date at the beginning of each chapter? This is like watching TV, and give me a review of the past! I'm not going to say that your word count is bad, it just looks awkward! Last but not least, that Cheng Fang Wu'er really makes me have goosebumps all over my body. You really are not embarrassed by yourself. It's others who are embarrassed. You are a young man in his early twenties. Is it necessary to be like this? It's really uncomfortable to see. Isn't it good to just call me Cheng Fang? What are you trying to do? Come on, keep writing, I'm optimistic about you!

It's too watery. I saw the battle between Song and Jin, and you wrote nearly ten chapters in one outing for reconnaissance. Also, don't copy it so obviously. Chapters 141 and 142 of the Songjin War are almost identical to Chapters 489 and 490 of Xiaobing. Even the name of the supporting actor has not been changed. That is to say, Lao Bainiu is not in good health now and has no mind to care about this matter.

How long have we been liberated? It's hard for me to understand why a modern person would think of being the dog of a feudal monarch. And this person was the most dishonest, most incompetent, and most mean and unkind emperor in Chinese history.

Chongzhen is responsible for a large part of the problems in the late Ming Dynasty. However, as an emperor who has not received professional education as an emperor, it is understandable that he did this. We simply want to ask the author, what do you want the pig's feet to become? Loyal ministers in the late Ming Dynasty have only one way to die, whether it is the Donglin Party or the eunuchs. Or Chongzhen, I can kill you

Everything else is okay, but the battle scenes are a bit awesome. Hundreds of people beating a dozen wild boar skins feel evenly matched. I don't think I'll write a book anymore and just surrender and finish it.

To be loyal to Chongzhen in the late Ming Dynasty was to be cruel to oneself

The establishment of the shogunate in the Ming Dynasty was a death wish, and the emperor named Zhu would not let it go.

The writing is very childish. You know that following Lu Xiangsheng means death, but you are still so loyal to Chongzhen. He has so many family members and doesn't care if his subordinates die.

Does Shen Nong tell the protagonist of this book when to revolt and when to riot? If the protagonist keeps on extending the life of carnivores, he will not subscribe in the future.

The author hurriedly wrote that now domestic public opinion and reputation have risen sharply, so we must seize the traffic.

The whole article is full of typos, plus some useless modifiers, and there are even so many that they contradict themselves. Every character or noun is introduced over and over again. In short, nearly half of the 3,000 words in a chapter are duplicates. Later readers should be careful not to be fooled.