A Titan of the Times

The update is not strong. In fact, the idea is good, but the description in the middle is a bit indiscriminate. Everything goes smoothly. It's okay to say that the pig's feet are reborn after all, but without the fierceness of the business war, at least the writing must be interesting. The characters are too flat, and the story has become bland and boring. This is my personal opinion. I hope the author can improve it. The setting of the characters is not dead, there must be interaction and development.

Why do so many people nowadays ask if they have a single heroine when reading urban novels? Reasonability is only one aspect. The most important thing is that we really hate that the protagonist changes hands with a girl and then says "I love you" to another person. It is really annoying.

No wonder the grades are so bad. They are all authors who were fooled by book reviews. Who will read a single heroine? Nowadays most of them have several heroines. Who will read if you don't write these? In reality, rich people don't even know how many breasts they have. Are you so innocent in writing a novel to fool primary school students?

It's not a problem of having one female protagonist and multiple female protagonists, it's that when he was reborn, he said how much he liked his wife in his previous life and how devoted he was, and then within a few chapters he fell in love with another woman. This was disgusting to watch.

It's so vicious. At the beginning, he looks like he loves his girlfriend very much, but then he immediately flirts with two girls. This is why I don't like stallion stories. They are affectionate in the open, but dirty in the secret.

The author takes it for granted that employee incentives are derived solely from his own shares →_→

If I were the author, I would change the name of the protagonist. Why is it that the surnames are either Lin or Ye? The most common names are either Fan, Feng, or Yun. How difficult it is to have a name. There is no recognition at all. Instead, he is a supporting character, and the villain has a ridiculous name! Sorry, cancer has struck again! Just to make a complaint, it is said that more than 20% of the protagonists in novels are named Lin Feng.

Now that I have read Chapter 79, I feel uncomfortable with some of the things I said, and I hope you will forgive me. I was really surprised. I knew in the early stage that the company should be separated, but then I got it wrong. They made the new subsidiary under the parent company. On the one hand, they may not have enough private money, and on the other hand, they are not sure about the future development, so they have to avoid risks. Now that you have just received dividends, you are not without money, and you are a time traveler. You must be sure that those projects have huge potential. It is really okay to do it under the old company.

The book is almost finished, but I didn't get into it. It's a pity. The author has a lot of personal stuff in this book. I hope that the next book will be about urban type, and more about life, so that it can be longer.

What is the difference between these two books: The Master of the Times and 1997? Even the names are the same, and the paragraph introducing first love was copied and pasted, right? There are too many character and background descriptions that are the same. After reading one book, I felt very surprised when I read the second one 😭