Gui Zang Sword Immortal

I have almost finished reading this book and have reached the chapter on ascension. Let me briefly evaluate it. First, the biggest shortcoming is The Eunuch. Even the hastily finished version is definitely much better than The Eunuch. Therefore, I don't want to read the Immortal World chapter anymore, because I can't accept the feeling of being halfway through and never being able to continue reading. Second, the author has always said that he is slow to read, but slow reading does not mean that it is lengthy. In fact, most of the plots in this book are quite good, but some settings are too many and they do not have many scenes. For example, the Rulong Society originally thought it was going to lead a big change, but in the end it was just an alliance of casual cultivators who could barely escape the big influence. Since joining forces with Guizang Jiange to fight, there haven't been any big moves. What's more, the author wrote a lot of names, but none of these characters have their own personalities. Basically, the main characters have a little personality, and the rest of the characters are basically robot-like. They know how to fight back when beaten, and know how to run away when beaten, such as Qi Siwu and Qiu Zhuqing. There is also a very long part about the fighting skills. Not only the protagonists have to be written, but also the supporting characters. After writing and writing for thirty chapters, readers may not be able to remember the names of several supporting characters and their moves. The third thing is that the author made a lot of clerical errors in the book, not only homophone errors, but also various mistakes called wrong names. Didn't the author check them? To be honest, the fact that I can read Ascension in this book means that it is actually not bad, but these points really affect the experience very much.

Why is this book so boring? (ﾉ ○ Д ○)ﾉAfter reading about 40 chapters, I feel that other novels can be done in less than 10 chapters.

The book is very good, but the updates are a bit touching.

Chapter 37, abandoned. To be honest, the author's writing and setting are very good, but there are too many words in Shui, and it feels like there is no plot description. It has been popularizing science, from character costumes, class divisions, architectural origins, and types of monsters. It is enough to stop at these points. The plot part can only be twenty chapters at most. Those descriptions are of no use to the rest of the article. If you remove those redundant descriptions, the reading experience will definitely be much better, and it may become a big hit. Support the author's creation, and there will definitely be good works in the future

Be serious and pay your bills accordingly. Doesn't Qidian supervise?

To be honest, the previous plot looked quite embarrassing () = convex, and even a little confusing. Most of the parts were just told in a straightforward manner without any foreshadowing at all. The outline is probably listed, but this writing technique is really annoying. Moreover, many places are often repeatedly drawn in white, which does not allow people to feel the characters' thoughts and feelings, character qualities, personality characteristics, etc. In detail. That's all for now. I haven't had time to read it later. I hope the author can work harder to improve his writing skills and write articles that satisfy most people! More importantly, the story must be described vividly so that the language can be more condensed and smooth! Keep up the good work(ง •̀_•́)ง! 😃😚😁👍

A little personal advice. To be fair, this book is really dragging at the beginning, the pace is not very good, and the writing style is not mature. But as long as you survive the first 150 chapters or even the first 200 chapters, you will gradually get better. It's quite interesting from the middle stage onwards. The protagonist's personality is not particularly ruthless, but he's not sloppy either. I personally think it's quite likable. So you can read it faster or even skip it before reading it. After it is put on the shelf, you can read it seriously and it will be regarded as food.

I dare not open this chapter of this book. They're all just bad guys, they haven't looked at all the settings, they just keep finding faults. I can see that the author wants to write about the immortal spirit of the fairy, and he works hard at writing. It can also be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the writing. If the article is written with care, there will generally be no problems with the setting. Even if there is, you can mention it to the author. Some great gods are not here like this. Why can't you see the fault you are finding with them 😅

The protagonist talks about how cunning his sect is, how powerful it is, and how good its skills are every day, but how come it was finally wiped out and crushed! ! !

This book is quite excessive. It has posted a lot of content related to the works of other authors into the main text. It is too obvious. I have just read one chapter and then finished it. It does not affect reading at all. Many book friends said that your book is okay after reading the comments. I will stick to the chapters you put on the shelf. If it is still so bad, I will abandon the book. Some words from a ten-year-old bookworm 🙏🙏🙏

Background There is a gap in the education level and thinking and cognitive ability of contemporary Qidian readers (refer to JD. Com's 10,000 white-collar workers and 110,000 blue-collar workers) 1. Opening comparison Midnight Bookstore: The protagonist dies at the beginning, and then unfolds from the perspective of death, which satisfies people's expectations for the reincarnation of the soul. Fantasy and curiosity about the afterlife, the description of the protagonist's desire to survive arouses strong "resonance" among readers; after rebirth, the plot quickly turns to twists and turns, which is exciting Bury the Sword Immortal: The opening description is magnificent and detailed, and the pursuit plot is fascinating, but it is too complicated (including some repetitions) and explanation too early (insufficient blank space in the early stage); after the "rebirth", due to the deep influence in the dream, the personality was too depressed, the early interpersonal relationship was not good, and there was a little too much description of the feelings of the master and the senior brother, so it was referred to as early persuasion 2. Expand Midnight Bookstore: The protagonist is the living "dead person" "I live a pretentious life that is not rich but peaceful and natural (I can't afford salted fish) (Identity and strength are very strong), occasionally flirting with weirdos and tearing down the second generation, which is close to the good life imagined by most readers: occasionally telling the story, judging social hot spots and historical figures, arousing the resonance of the majority of readers Bury the Sword Immortal: The layout is far-reaching (in terms of the depth of the soul for more than a hundred years), and it is step-by-step (this is both an advantage and a disadvantage), but the plot unfolds slowly and lacks fragments that can get readers excited or resonate, thus indirectly losing readers 3. Writing techniques Midnight Bookstore: The author's pen The power is quite profound, and the narrative, discussion, lyricism, etc. Are quite good, especially the connection between succession and transition is excellent, but it inadvertently (jueduiguyi) lays the groundwork, leaves suspense, and arouses readers' interest in reading (thanks to the Chinese teacher😂) Burial of the Sword Immortal: emmm, although Although it is a bit hurtful, except for the advantage of logical layout, there is still a gap between it and the former, but it is understandable. After all, Xiaolong is a full-time writer and Fei Xiao is an amateur, and their work focus is different 4. Conclusion The Burial of the Sword Immortal belongs to the category with higher requirements for intelligence and logical thinking. "Intellectual" fairy tale novels, coupled with some shortcomings that existed in the early stage, have a smaller audience, and Midnight Bookstore is an alternative that is close to ordinary people's lives, well... A reborn salted fish pretending to be a pretentious novel (the key is that people have salted fish capital😂) PS: The above is purely a personal opinion, please feel free to comment if you don't like it. If you have different opinions, please give me advice (but I may ignore you and just ignore it) PS2: Fei Xiaoxiao, does it resonate with your heart and make you feel ashamed? Why don't you update it soon! ! ! /The dragon roars. Jpg

It's so beautiful, but you must not be a eunuch! ! ! ! Please ask the author

It's well written, but it's too clumsy. Don't just copy the previous article if you don't know the word count. You also keep emphasizing the past life. Just call it "Previous Life, Past Life".

Since my rebirth, I have seen so many traitors, but none of them have been killed. The weak ones dare not kill them, and the strong ones cannot kill them. Do they know how to use tricks? You haven't done anything, what are you going to do when you come back again? You look useless.

The plot is pretty good! It just seemed too long-winded and I skipped reading it. There are many things that don't need to be introduced so clearly, such as the treasures of heaven, materials and earth, spells and so on 😥

I said why it looks familiar. It turns out that Dragon Lord was written by your boy.

I have always emphasized that this cannot be used and that will be exposed. The plot is dragged out and is comparable to Tang San. Didn't he say that he was going to rise?

Since Pig's Foot was reborn, the crisis of overthrow has been high. The blessing of the grand array + Ten Thousand Swords Guizong + Guizang Sword + Climbing Immortal Art gave Pigfoot the strength of a peerless powerhouse, and no one could attack Guizang Mountain without opening his eyes. After the life and death crisis is resolved, how will it develop and grow? Predict 20-30 years from now. There will be three Guiyi in Gui Zang, Chengtian, Zang Gua and Ming Ting. After Mingting reunited, his combat power was comparable to that of a peerless strongman, and he could travel across the Zhang Realm.

I think the names of many book friends can be directly used as supporting characters! Song Qingyi, Lu Xuejue, Shang Xinsu, Xiao Zuixian. I've decided! I'm going to name my supporting cast according to the fan rankings! In addition to Qin Feiyan's small theater, I have another personal building!

The names of some of Fat Xiao Xiao Qi's magical methods and even characters are simply unsightly, and they feel so good that a European royal family turned into an African chief. A name building is established here, and everyone contributes some good names for Fei Xiaoxiao to adopt.

To be honest, I have never read a book that made me so angry. The free chapter at the beginning is so bad. Che Zhulun talks endlessly, and the explanations in his head are all nonsense! I also like to pile up settings, just like the newcomers who ask questions on Zhihu, pouring the settings into your mouth one by one like cookies. Maybe this approach, which was considered a highlight in the virus era, seems very novel after 17 years? Usually when I am recommended a book like this, I immediately abandon it. However, the character setting is quite interesting and makes me want to read it. However, the more I read, the more nonsense the screen becomes. The more I read, the less happy I become. Reading the book becomes a pain in the ass. There is nothing wrong with three views, there is nothing wrong with human relationships. These things are not poisonous in my opinion, but the reason why I came to the book circle for the first time to criticize a book is that I was driven crazy by the writing style of this piece of writing! I rarely criticize a book because I am a classicist. I like to see the author's careful foreshadowing, the trivial life matters that have nothing to do with the plot, the vivid descriptions of scenery on the page, and the details that suddenly touch people's hearts... But! This is not nonsense! Especially the talk about the wheel! ! ! If I would rather stop updating for a few days and change the beginning, otherwise your conversion rate for this wave of recommended authors on the homepage would only be 300 subscriptions!

The best part of this book may be the first two chapters. I was deeply impressed after reading it. No matter how much the enemy insults, humiliates, or slanders, the protagonist does not say a word throughout the whole process and just fights back with his sword. At the end of the road, it is better to break the jade than to destroy it. The image of indifference, loneliness, determination, and pain is deeply rooted in people's hearts.

The text is long and verbose, longer than the old lady's foot-binding cloth, and smells terrible. The description of the scenery in the first chapter is pretty good. In the following chapters, the description of the protagonist's psychology and the fight between the masters are all about.

I can honestly say that the writing at the end is a hundred times better than the beginning. I scolded me while reading it. Fortunately, you didn't lie to me. It's really much better. However, if you are still so verbose in your next article, you will definitely lose your baby. There are many good novels that like multiple settings. The best novels have a setting that is just like a snake and a gray line, stretching for thousands of miles. Unknowingly, you accept it. The second kind of novels have a separate chapter at the beginning of the text to explain the general setting, and the main text is full of points. Although it is a bit unsophisticated, it still works. Those who are critical and critical can study it carefully; the worst thing is that the author is like this. In order to make everyone understand, he crams a lot of settings at the beginning, and then writes slowly and slowly. He has no patience, and basically scares away those who are not true love. I also found that the author really likes to use certain sentence patterns, and often explains them repeatedly to arrive at the rationality of the protagonist's behavior. In fact, as I said before, there is no need to explain it frequently, which will make the writing very logical and seem very long-winded, not refined enough, and a bit watery. There are several chapters that remove the rambling settings and repeated explanations and memories, which are basically negligible. I skipped them and read them without affecting the reading effect. I suggest that the author really changes it in the future. Just think of it as a deep love and deep responsibility. Although there are various shortcomings, but the three views are correct, there is no hostility or evil spirit that can easily destroy the whole family. There is no slutty or filthy spirit in the words, and there is no tendency to lower the IQ and be unable to control the lower body when seeing a woman.

The author feels that he is too entangled in explaining various things. The explanation of one practice and one realm is acceptable. But the motivation for a certain attitude towards someone or a certain approach may be that the author is afraid of appearing poisonous points. In fact, it is unnecessary to explain repeatedly, and it may even be self-contradictory. This is intolerable.

Free entry only. What follows is my personal feeling. I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 26. Take the practice of Qinglian Zen as an example. For example, what the author wrote is like the diary of a primary school student in the past. For example, my mother cooked a meal today, how much rice was cooked, how much water was added, how many spoons of salt was added to the vegetables, and finally, today's rice was really delicious. Do you feel this way? The author thinks that he has given readers a world view of cultivating immortals and enriches the work. He uses idioms to describe it. Painting a tiger cannot be like a dog. How about Li Bai's Flying Down Three Thousand Feet? Blindly stacking a bunch of words together, the effect is too poor.

Is the author still updating? Come out and say something.

The hall is full of flowers and three thousand guests are drunk, and one sword freezes fourteen states

There might be something wrong with Yuanbai Jade Ten Thousand Swords. . . Changfeng Queyu attacks in groups, why not choose a movement technique? Jiuxiao Dengxian and Yunjian both have attack bonuses.

Is this a novel? I really don't have the courage to read it now. It's too long-winded and everything needs to be explained one, two, or three times. I think this is prose, a narrative, and it's gone without saying anything in a chapter. I'll skip a few, or even dozens of chapters, and it won't have any impact. I'm just telling the truth. Don't criticize me!