Chasing the Killer in a Dream

When I fall into a dream, someone will die in this world

First of all, I feel sorry for the author. As a weak girl, I have to spend a lot of brain cells thinking hard every day for the subsequent chapters. This is not easy in my opinion. Compared with the author who now puts a lot of energy into writing books, just to present better works to everyone. Occasionally there are omissions, and I feel that I am not in line with society. Please, this is a novel... Do you know what a novel is? Sometimes inappropriate comments from everyone will affect the author's conception of subsequent development… I hope everyone feels sorry for the girl who wrote the book...

The protagonist is too poisonous and not timid. He keeps doubting himself. What kind of Black Dragon Society will come out later? I beg the author to abuse the protagonist less in the future. If he often dreams about death scenes, a normal person will know his own abilities. He still thinks that he is a psychopath and keeps taking medicine.

I just read the first story and saw the Black Dragon Society, a lawless underworld gang, and I thought this book was nonsense. No matter how powerful the underworld in the real world is, they would not dare to be as fresh and refined as your novels. It also prevented the police section chief from pursuing the case. Either this section chief is complicit, or it's nonsense no matter how you look at it. I didn't feel very comfortable after reading Chapter 70. I think the author insulted the police profession

Black Dragon Club,,, Are you a high school student? In an adult's world view, there shouldn't be such an organization that is cool and arrogant and can fight against the state machinery.

I've only read Chapter 54. The whole story is okay, but that policeman… I found it a bit annoying. While relying on the protagonist to solve the case, he also despised the joke that the protagonist was a lunatic. The policeman doesn't believe the protagonist at all. And to be fair, even if the protagonist doesn't want others to know that he has mental problems, as a beneficiary, he can completely report his intelligence sources and the protagonist's role in the case. Even if others question why the protagonist knows so much, the protagonist, as a helper, can refuse to answer, or make up a lie at will to obscure the past. The protagonist is not a prisoner, and if there is a policeman as a guarantee, the most he can do is let the police observe him more. And what the protagonist does, I know that if the sense of substitution is too strong, of course I will hope that the criminal will be punished, but the protagonist is in a passive situation from beginning to end. The protagonist is obviously the active party, but he falls into such a situation... To be honest, it is very uncomfortable. I hope the protagonist can take the initiative. To be honest with the policeman, I think there is a reason why he is not welcome. Judging from the description in the article, he may have a sense of justice, but at the same time he is also a little arrogant and vain. I found that in the characters written by the author, the negative characters are more prominent, and the bright points are hidden underneath. I actually suggest that the author can change it, amplify the bright points, and express the negative characters more obscurely. Above. My personal opinion only. You can delete it if you don't like it, thank you.

I really hate Bai Ran. She has been interfering and affecting Li Yifan's life in the name of doing good for Li Yifan. Li Yifan has his own life. He doesn't want to become normal. What right does Bai Ran have to hide it from him and force him to become normal?

The police in the book have no IQ. If the police in real life meet a protagonist like this, they will be very happy. They will take all the credit and do not need to share the protagonist's money. They immediately treat the protagonist like a master. Some police officers, especially drug police detectives, are always in danger and are more superstitious than others.

It was so frustrating to read. Is the power of the government in the novel so small? A gangster is afraid of his hands and feet (I haven't finished reading) No eyesight

I like this title. I have seen similar plays with this kind of title in the theater. It is very interesting. A few words set the tone of the book, which makes readers less troublesome to understand the meaning. But from another perspective, it also tests the author's meticulous writing. It is difficult to control the style of millions of words in terms of the overall atmosphere, but I think you should be able to handle it easily. Stories are just a bunch of words, and everyone tells them differently. Your story may be scary, his story may be interesting, and my story may be bizarre. They all have different styles. Therefore, your style determines what kind of people your audience is. Judging from the name and content, you have controlled it very well. I hope you can stick to your own creative style and your readers, including me, will support it.