Master-Apprentice System

I have been keeping it since I read dozens of chapters. I suggest changing the dialogue when the protagonist accepts a disciple in the early stage. I think this has a great impact. Especially when accepting a second apprentice, the protagonist directly shows his strong desire to accept an apprentice, and the apprentice even bargains with you. In order to be able to accept it, the protagonist also made promises that were very unfair to him. I strongly recommend that he change them here. Also, is the protagonist injured too many times?

This chapter is really broken One day, with the knife in hand, I will slaughter all the broken dogs in the world.

Looks like I have to watch it again, I almost forgot about it 😢

Why are updates so slow, only two updates a day?

As you saw in Assassination of King Rui, the relationship between King Rui and the protagonist should be quite friendly, right? The protagonist actually went to save the assassins who assassinated King Rui? ! ! What about logic? ! ! What about IQ? ! ! At this time, the best thing to do is to protect yourself wisely, right? It can only be said that the author has ignored logic in order to forcefully trigger the plot.

The author is so bored at home that he writes a book

The protagonist's IQ is too low, and he lets a scoundrel give him ideas. He just believes whatever he says, so he just becomes someone else's master? Tuan Mie who is not plotted by others is the biggest golden finger.

The protagonist's upgrade is very simple. He is always one level higher in internal strength than his apprentice (this setting). If the protagonist keeps passing on the skills to his apprentice, wouldn't it be like sitting on a rocket to upgrade? The master teaches his disciple Beiming Shengong and the apprentice absorbs the master's skill and rides on the rocket to upgrade. The master has a system to improve his internal strength (always one level higher than his apprentice).

A novel with no routines, complete IQ, and exciting plot. Come and take a look, everyone. You won't regret it if you read it, and you will definitely regret it if you stop watching it. This is a breath of fresh air in the world of immortality. Please pay special attention to it. (Eternal Journey to Immortality) Don't criticize if you don't like it, after all, it's not easy for the author either. A novel that only three people have read. I really can't find anything more ruthless than this????????? Holding the lollipop, everyone went to watch.

The author doesn't distinguish between "Zai" and "Zai", it's hard to watch for obsessive-compulsive disorder

Isn't that the Sword Demon Zhu Skeleton in front of me? Why did he become a sword master again? Playing with different avatars?

Well, new authors shouldn't be too harsh. There are some flaws that old bookworms can't stand 😅

I gave up around chapter eighty. The setting is novel, and the first 40 chapters are particularly well written, which made me feel like I had encountered a rare masterpiece. Although some of the logic is not rigorous, the flaws cannot be concealed. After Chapter 40, it started to collapse, with poisonous spots one after another, getting more and more terrible. Of course, the most shocking thing is what book friends have complained about many times. The hero's inexplicable Holy Father rescues the assassin and forcibly triggers the plot. Lei's exterior is scorched but the interior is tender and can only be discarded. In short, come on, the author. If you can write the first 40 chapters, it proves that you have both writing skills and writing skills. Come on, go for it.

Should I call 110? (Has the author fallen into a pyramid scheme?)

Your uncle, you just didn't explain it? Have you found a job? Why don't you come to our company?

I just came back to take a look at this book. Is there a eunuch? 🙂 Sure enough, there is a eunuch.

Books are still okay, don't be a eunuch. Keep waiting for your update.

I wrote a new line before I finished it, haha.

Update quickly, update quickly! I feel like it will be gone as soon as I update it now.

This book is poisonous. It made me confused and confused.

The progress of this plot is too slow, and the updates are also slow. In recent chapters, it feels like it has been stagnant.

Don't stop interrupting, write well😅😅

Is this the soul leaving the body after the three-point return of vitality is completed?

The plot is too fast and looks very bloody

Did you write this when the city was locked down and you couldn't get out?

Watch it if you like it! If you don't like it, don't watch it! Don't make irresponsible remarks! Not qualified