The Legend of Immortal Cultivation in Dreams

Me, me, me. After reading the author's introduction, I want to know who I am? ⊙ω⊙

Although it doesn't seem inconsistent to use the first person warrior

The idea is good, but the writing techniques are a bit immature. It's like the pieces are put together one by one, but it exactly matches what I saw and felt in the dream. Promising

A very unique perspective that gives people expectations.

The writing style is really too immature, and there are long paragraphs of explanations. This is the author's first time writing, so go for it!

The first person of all evil, if it were not the first person, the author might gain more, instead of just this

Wait for the update! 🤓

Very nice! I'm impressed that you can write the first person so smoothly!

Mainly because the name attracted me