Multi-Rivet Steamed Steel Bar

A relatively rare adventure story in a steampunk worldview A world that combines technology and mystery. Currently, the entire territory is composed of three major countries and the neutral zone between them. The main plot of the entire book begins with the story of three men with their own backgrounds on an accidental journey. The three become an adventuring party as one of them searches for his family's history. The power system tends to be in a low-demon world, and there are basically no scenes of Long Aotian or one against ten thousand. Even if one of the three is very powerful in combat, it is not so strong that it is beyond logic. Relatively speaking, there are many details. Whether it is the battle plot or the decryption plot, the details of the settings can be seen that the author is quite thoughtful in his conception. At present, there are no major logical bugs or poisonous points in the whole book, and the excessive plot is relatively not too abrupt. It seems that there are not too many routines yet, but the excitement is relatively lacking, but the writing is still smooth and suitable for slow reading. It can basically be placed in the range from dry food to grain! Book list recommendation If you like this book, don't forget to give it a thumbs up\(≧▽≦)/. I'm not asking for attention, just likes.

After reading a little bit, I would like to make a suggestion: try to use as few long sentences as possible. It's not that it cannot be used, but the reading effect is not very satisfactory. You can split it when checking for typos, which is better. . . . .

Come on, big cat! As I look at it all the way now, I feel that the main advantages and disadvantages are as follows. First of all, the advantages are that the writing is passable, the theme is distinctive, the world background is grand, very steampunk style, and there are not many problems in shaping the characters. The shortcomings are also obvious. The most unacceptable thing is probably the lack of the main perspective. Multiple protagonists are inherently unflattering. The lack of a main perspective makes people lack a sense of substitution. In addition, the previous chapters do not create conflicts and contradictions that are strong enough to attract people to read. It is difficult for people to develop reading inertia. Another point is the explanation of the settings. How can I put it, it feels a little self-explanatory, and it can easily make people confused if you watch it quickly. Finally, I wish you better and better as you write more

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Are the protagonist's ancestors time travellers, or are there historical celebrities who are time travellers?

It's on the shelves... There will be one less pack of spicy strips for a week.

Long live the heresy RPG

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Only after reading yours did I realize how crazy I am. . .

After raising a few chapters, I watched it at night and found out that the male protagonist has a child 23333

I read the first few chapters and thought it was a good book, but not very popular.

7426326………… Can anyone guess what these numbers mean?

When I first started watching, I asked what type of character the protagonist is, a warrior or a mage.

Finished this book, let's spread some flowers...

The author is from the Multi-turret God Cult! ! !

I've been passing by and I'd like to give you some advice...